05-03-2020, 09:11 PM | #1 |
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Week 5: Wanderer (2-0) vs. Flow (2-1) - FLOW WINS
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05-04-2020, 01:28 AM | #2 |
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05-07-2020, 04:03 PM | #4 |
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I used to be unheard of too... Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout
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05-09-2020, 10:04 AM | #6 |
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Wanderers Verse
U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face” But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards
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05-09-2020, 03:07 PM | #7 |
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I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face” But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see vs. Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans Damn, another great match here. Good to see that the ppl showing up for the League are still dropping flames. You both had an array of quality lines, some concepts executed better than others, & a couple of misses. I think Wanderer's misses were a little more noticeable than Flow's, who pretty much brought shots in volume on this one. The bars I bolded from you 2 went hard, but I think Flow outpunched Wand here v/ Flow
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Decent match up here. Both came with some good concepts, some outdated - some fresh. Giving this to the one who was more consistent with his hits. MGVT Flow |
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05-09-2020, 08:21 PM | #9 |
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Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did -Can’t give you points for a feat line. Had to google the reference. Not a great start for me. cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat -Would’ve rather you use the Wonderland as the main concept and build around that. The way you did it is just ok to me. Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up -Not feeling this. Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament -Not bad. Haven’t seen this. But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch -I dig this. Like I said in another battle the message thing has been done to death but it’s a cool spin on it even though the reference is mad old. Liked it tho. bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability -Nomad ability is cool but I wish you could’ve done this in a much cleaner fashion. Just ok to me. Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans -Light to me Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout -I don’t get this. Sorry. U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing -Nothing stands out here. Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery -Yeh, I like this. I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him -Decent. Nice little jab. Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face” -Lol kinda funny. But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see -Pretty light. Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record -Noisy spin is just too loose for me. Not really feeling this. Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards -Didn’t really like this. Had to read this a few times because it was really close for me. This wasn’t the Flow I’ve been reading the past month. First verse I’ve read from Wanderer. I think I have to give it to Wanderer for being slightly more consistent and having 2 of the best 3 lines in the battle. Nice read guys. Vote-Wanderer |
05-10-2020, 12:43 AM | #10 |
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Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did who? I don’t get the reference cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat ok lol Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up nah Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament ok But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch you already knew I was gonna like this, nice bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability decent Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans nooo Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout i don’t get it 1 good 2 ok 1 decent 4 misses Vs U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing nah Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery not feelin this either I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him haha this was cool Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face” kinda corny here But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see ehh barely decent Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record alright Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards decent 1 good 1 ok 2 decent 3 misses Super close battle, both had some good material, flow had 1 more bar than wanderer did, I guess people can’t count these days. Vote Flow by a hair Last edited by Zaddy; 05-10-2020 at 12:46 AM. |
05-10-2020, 07:43 PM | #11 |
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Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did a bit of an old reference at this point but this is okay cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat a bit simple but i like the overall idea Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up this one is a miss for me Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament Nah im not really digging this But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch lol this was funny and creative. i thought this was hot bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability the set-up is kinda weirded wordly, the idea is cool but the execution fell short imo Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans this is okay, ive seen a fair amount of andy warhol bars over the years Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout I never played fallout, but I get the general idea. This is cool, mightve landed harder if I was more familiar with the game U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing The wording on this is somewhere on the line of good and kinda corny. This bar's okay, but think the idea couldve been pulled off better Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery Nah, this general idea is super super old. I remember puka shell bars being done in like 2004 and 2005 I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him I never really like period bars but the execution is solid, and overall this is decent Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face” lol this is funny, i like this overall But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see Nah this bar's just kinda weird and I think you could've executed and worded it better Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record Having him spin around in circles while he's screaming is just too specific and weird of a description Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards okay closer, but generally if you're gonna do a cash bar I'd suggest trying to think more out of the box than this overall the sabrina bar was fire imo and line of the battle, followed by lip smacking which was also pretty good. Solid showing from both sides, I think one of the main difference makers in my voting choice is simply that flow had more creative angles that I haven't seen before. mvgt - Flow |
05-10-2020, 08:14 PM | #12 |
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Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did ^obscure reference not a great way to start a verse tbh cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat ^ decent liked the angle Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up ^ wording needed work here Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament ^ I liked this probably best bar of your verse But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch ^decent enough bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability ^ could have been worded a little better but i liked the play Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans ^ehh alright Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout ^BANG good closer if you're familiar Wanderer: U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing ^ could have used some better wording imo Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery ^ decent bar I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him ^ loool Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face” ^lmao dope But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see ^ i liked this Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record ^ decent Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards ^ think i seen a cash flow bar couple weeks ago, not the best closer Overall was an entertaining match but I've got Wanderer taking it, Flow lacked in execution more consistently V/Wanderer |
05-10-2020, 10:43 PM | #13 |
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That Sabrina the teenage witch bar was filthy.
Flow is getting my vote based on consistent hits. Definitely some misses in there too but slightly better than Wand and you had the LOTB. Some constructive criticism for you, clean up your setups. They are too long and by the time I get to the punch I’m losing interest. I wouldn’t be telling you this if I didn’t think you have some potential. I like what I see. Vote flow |
05-11-2020, 07:27 AM | #14 |
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both verses had hits & misses but this string of bars pulled it out for 1;
Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch V/flow |
05-11-2020, 08:41 AM | #15 |
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