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Kushstream Vol. II: The Scheme
Starin out the window as it rains and it pours
and I'm thinkin bout the money that they gain from the wars all this pain and remorse we've been made to endure for the sake of the bank and the names in the Forbes! Pay for tanks, pay for planes, but they can't save the poor? But send em off to die from uranium ore? It's a shame, we endorse all the hate and support, candi•dates, that ignore, what's at stake But of course, same ol' song, nothin changed but the choruse! So I bravely report what's erased in reports! Placin blame on the courts cos they claim to "reform" But corporate owned prison's just the same as a morgue Cos they're paid by the board to keep people locked Til they drop to the floor cos their profits gonna soar If the stock is matured, it's a plot and I'm sure They're not gonna cure, a gotdamn thang As they hop in the Porsh, dockin yachts at the ports As they shop at the stores it's obnoxious de•cor•um! Shots to the cops like I'm Pac in his prime With a glock to my mind, no I'm Optimus Prime Cos my thoughts are designed To give the world hope as we cope with these times! -Self
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04-23-2018, 10:27 AM | #2 |
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I didn't like this, sorry, I know my opinion ain't shit ;/ just bein' honest yeah.
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04-23-2018, 10:53 AM | #3 | |
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No biggie, bro. I value your opinion. Maybe you'll dig the next one? Regardless, thanks for the read and feed all the same.
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04-23-2018, 11:10 AM | #4 |
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Are you down to collaborate on a picture topical...?
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04-24-2018, 02:38 AM | #5 |
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Content been done over and over. Have to admit. But.you bring a dope.take on the way you lay ur words and shit and i always enjoy.youe reads man.
We should collab soon. Totally clashing styles but fuckem
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