Speical guy poem part one

Dope girl · 07-18-2014, 10:22 PM

When he stares at your mouth
(kiss him)
When he pushes or hits you like a dumbass
because he think he's stronger than you
(grab him & don't let him go)
When he starts cursing at you trying act all Aggressive
(kiss him & tell him you love him)
When he's silent
(ask him what's wrong)
When he ignores you
(give him your attention)
When he pulls away
(pull back)
When you see him at his worse
(Tell him he's handsome)
When you see him crying
(Just hold him & don't say word)
When you see him walking
(sneak up & hug him from waist behind)
When he's afraid
(protect him)
when he steals your favorite hat
(let him keep it & sleep with it for a night
When he tease you
(tease him back & make him giggle)
When doesn't answer for a long time
(reassure him that everything is okay)
(When he looks at you with a lie
( Lookout for yourself)
When he says that he like you
(he really does more than you could understand)

There's more to this

gitto138 · 07-19-2014, 07:05 AM

IM sorry silver but this was not great, are poems supposed to rhyme

Zen · 07-19-2014, 12:26 PM

This was amazing. You never cease to amaze me.

Certain · 07-19-2014, 12:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gitto138

IM sorry silver but this was not great, are poems supposed to rhyme

Sometimes they rhyme. Sometimes they don't.

When dealing with a wordsmith like Silver, it's her choice.

Fig · 07-19-2014, 01:31 PM

An I special guy? Loved it

DexLabb · 07-19-2014, 01:36 PM

why does everyone pet the ugly puppy? this shit was weird. most these are what a guy should do to a girl

Fig · 07-19-2014, 01:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb

why does everyone pet the ugly puppy? this shit was weird. most these are what a guy should do to a girl

You are the ugly puppy dumbass

Dope girl · 07-19-2014, 05:32 PM

I agree with Certain & thanks for the feedback guys!

Zen · 07-19-2014, 06:32 PM

Dg <3's Certain

Vulgar · 07-19-2014, 09:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gitto138

IM sorry silver but this was not great, are poems supposed to rhyme

YDK · 07-20-2014, 02:37 AM

Every piece I read from you is hof worthy tbh

Malachi · 07-20-2014, 04:29 AM

Gone

Dope girl · 07-20-2014, 09:18 PM

thanks loves

Geno · 07-22-2014, 01:01 PM

Dg da gawdess

Dope girl · 07-23-2014, 11:02 AM

thanks for reading!

07-18-2014, 10:22 PM	#1
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Speical guy poem part one When he stares at your mouth (kiss him) When he pushes or hits you like a dumbass because he think he's stronger than you (grab him & don't let him go) When he starts cursing at you trying act all Aggressive (kiss him & tell him you love him) When he's silent (ask him what's wrong) When he ignores you (give him your attention) When he pulls away (pull back) When you see him at his worse (Tell him he's handsome) When you see him crying (Just hold him & don't say word) When you see him walking (sneak up & hug him from waist behind) When he's afraid (protect him) when he steals your favorite hat (let him keep it & sleep with it for a night When he tease you (tease him back & make him giggle) When doesn't answer for a long time (reassure him that everything is okay) (When he looks at you with a lie ( Lookout for yourself) When he says that he like you (he really does more than you could understand) There's more to this

07-19-2014, 01:31 PM	#5
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,473 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181559	An I special guy? Loved it __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

07-19-2014, 01:36 PM	#6
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	why does everyone pet the ugly puppy? this shit was weird. most these are what a guy should do to a girl __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

07-20-2014, 02:37 AM	#11
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Every piece I read from you is hof worthy tbh __________________

07-20-2014, 04:29 AM	#12
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Gone __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

07-19-2014, 07:05 AM	#2
gitto138 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Location: BITER Posts: 138 Battle Record: BITER Rep Power: 0	IM sorry silver but this was not great, are poems supposed to rhyme

07-19-2014, 12:26 PM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	This was amazing. You never cease to amaze me.

07-19-2014, 05:32 PM	#8
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	I agree with Certain & thanks for the feedback guys!

07-19-2014, 06:32 PM	#9
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	Dg <3's Certain

07-20-2014, 09:18 PM	#13
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	thanks loves

07-22-2014, 01:01 PM	#14
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Dg da gawdess __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

07-23-2014, 11:02 AM	#15
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	thanks for reading!