06-03-2020, 01:45 AM | #1 |
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Exis. 6-Feet. Lars. Simple.
I'll rip your fuckin' head off 'cause the game is filthy
Watch the lungs fill up, then I'll squeeze & empty Disease & release, mix anti-freeze into bleach Pour it into your wounds, 'cause these clips re-masticated Evicorated & minced to laces, now sniff the fragrance Liquid metal wrath, rip a bitches bed in half Either suck my dick or die, If you won't give head then Ima laugh Reload & dead your ass, I don't even aim with it I'm the one to blame when I take the stainless & fade you bitch Split you in parts, no beef Y'all don't wanna start none Battle acid, rattle you back to your carbon ashes Starvin' bastards, get crushed to death by my iron mattress Try & match this, titanium won't melt You could get lead up the four elements & get dealt You better respect my image, my crew rejects the gimmicks Your best bet is to come hard or I'll stretch your neck, past it's limits I'm blastin' the timid, until they can fathom the wrath I is givin' I beat dudes in battles, then fuck they girls for incentive My words are inventive, slurs that bring vengeance to Netcees henchmen Your chances of havin' me wincin'? Is the same as you nigga, lastin' in prison Ram you with rapid internals that slam your equilibrial Don't have me tell you who we are, put your family in ER Fuck a motive, I just took your face off & attached it to one of my steez jars These are weed bars, you breathe hard Smoke so much Mary Jane shit gave me green scars I remain large, & refrain from activatin' my sustained charges Battery, Grand Theft, robbery with a chainsaw Flip & main sargents, they badges just the target You bastards can't fuck with me I'm the missin' link like martians Gun clappers @ it again Except I don't bust gats,I blast raps with a pen & a mic, I hijack speakers, sweep low on Tweeters Quick to kick a nigga in the ass with both of these sneakers For talkin' all this trash, look @ the noise Fuckin' pedestrian much? I'll do you first then butcher your boys Now here's you & your whole crew livin' life in the gutter Slicin' right thru your jugular like knives go thru butter I'm on some next shit, Diode tried to ban the hectic Bitch I'll clean out these raps like a brand of antiseptic Decipherin' your cryptic rhymes like a hacker Linin' up your ribs & spine for the tackler Smashin' cats straight out the pit like a batter So batter up bitch, throw the pitch to the catcher You missed man, got me walkin' a fence How the fuck you make dollars when you ain't makin' no sense? Go inspect your lyrics, check shit & correct the critics. Respect's diminished, mumble rappers brought the gloom Reviewers pissed because 6 couldn't write in autotune I've been more inspired listening to 'Horton hears a Who' Where's the soldiers and pretenders? Let me sort the room It's 13 'o' clock by my watch, their worst fears are due A Storyteller production coming soon to theatres near to you Chords struck them with the boom! Branding with the searing truth Take that EDM and vamoose, adios dude, clear the booth Where some would see a page, I see a stage to perform on Where some would see a pen: instruments to make a pure song Navigate this sea of brain waves, seek truth, although the tour's long Think intellectual rhymes are played? Well... You're wrong. You moron. If I did fall off from this height, no man could stop it From my value dropping alone the impact would be catastrophic. Don’t ask for honest feed if you can’t handle the facts. You faggots so trash you make every other rapper look bad. We can battle for cash if the moneys right.. I’m talking pure cheddar. Ain’t no 404 Error when you get stuck on site. If I dust my mic off, a single breath from my lungs and you get to discover how deadly a real pandemic becomes. There’s zero percent of recovery for most the infected I blow out a death wish on my birthday for those on the guest list. I don’t want your friendship, pussy. I’m not here to be friends. Beat guys down like seaside towns, way we hammer in piers by the end. You’re not really a threat, you’re a joke.. Your barks worse than your bite - and Exis’ patrolling a vets on his own...
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06-03-2020, 12:12 PM | #2 |
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No shortage of bars here, good thing you managed to keep the momentum going for the most part. First segment flowed good throughout with some nice brag and grimness mix.
Second part felt more like a "listen punk, imma tell you something" and I can like that in the fashion it was written here. After first read the line the stuck out here was probably the 404 one, yet overall the whole piece was smooth sailing pretty much. |
06-03-2020, 06:20 PM | #3 |
Punchline Prettyboy
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Last two dudes fire
Closer fire
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06-04-2020, 01:15 AM | #4 |
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Lol...
Thanks for the collab folks, y'all are awesome. |
06-04-2020, 09:48 PM | #5 |
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Came out nice didn't it? It was fun guys. It's cool to cut loose and not write to a schedule once in a while.
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06-09-2020, 09:44 PM | #6 |
rhyme capsule.
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this was cool. i read it. i should write more.
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06-14-2020, 09:53 PM | #7 |
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Yes you should! Good looks my friend...
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