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Old 05-25-2020, 06:32 PM   #1
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Default Week 8: Plot (2-2) vs Incredible (2-4) - PLOT WINS

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Old 05-26-2020, 02:03 AM   #2
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Check. Ten. Wanna spit early Inc?
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10 is good and yeah probably can drop tonight or tomorrow.
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Got 10 ready @Plot will PM to blue if you dont post tonight.


Sent my 10 to Blue Bayou

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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.
Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas,
& telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass.
Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit,
When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed.
Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check,
Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech.
Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo.

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Same happened to me vs Flow. I was waiting for a check in to know he was showing And just got a post from the mod saying he had flows punch. A couple of hours before deadline. Shits bullshit. Checks should be mandantory And fuck this pming 1-2 bars. I was waiting for a check i never got then had to rush my bar. Its unsportsmanlike
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Had to read Answers breakdown to actually understand some of them.
STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like
Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does
Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby
U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir.
Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer
Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star
WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar
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Plot - Ink on the money could’ve been fire still like concept tho, profound was funny not as hard hitting but comical, countersink is meh not really feeling at all, golf tech line is drawn out & I might be missing something, ear stuck to the ground was ok statementish tho at best.


- breakdown seems like your trying to shake rust & I feel that. Just try to look over your concepts more then once before using them see what other angles are available.

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Inc- a rusty car piss ? I don’t see how this is insulting besides saying he got bad hygiene an dirty, personals aspect is cool but you fell flat on the execution in my eyes, exit stage right doesn’t land anywhere I get what you went for it just doesn’t work, I get the predictions snorefest but it doesn’t hit its boring an lackluster, closer don’t make sense to me.


Breakdown - I’m assuming your more of a topical head ? Because the bars never really hit your opponent which kind of caught me off guard.


Vote - Plot pretty easily
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.
Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo.

vs

Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does
Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby


v/plot

overall better verse & harder hitting punches.
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.
Good opener. Great actually
Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas,
& telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass.
Not feelin
Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit,
When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed.
Cool np but a lazy ending
Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check,
Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech.
I see what you're going for but ehhh
Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo.
Too statementish for me for a closer

Opener was easily the best bar, wasn't feeling many of the other disses.

5/10

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STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like
Wording in the setup AND punch is throwing me off. Commas!
Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does
Maybe
Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby
Filler
U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir.
Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer
Filler
Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star
WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar
Lol wut

Wasn't a lot of cleverness or wittiness in this verse, and I prioritize that the most.

3/10


Vote: Plot
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Old 05-28-2020, 08:16 PM   #10
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.

vs.

nothing

V - Plot. I was very confused reading the end of Incredible's verse, because he disses Flow, instead of his opponent lol he doesn't really do many good disses, although, he has a condensed style so his bars aren't too long. He just didn't throw punches that were sufficient and they lacked in wording. A rusty Karpis line didn't hit well, but it was a decent attempt. Plot won it with his opener, which was LOTB. Great nameplay that should've set up for a strong verse, but it fell off completely from there. Same thing happened where wording or lazy, filler stuff came through instead of going harder at the opponent. It was a decent attempt from both, but improvements can be made to allow them to become better txtcees
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Old 05-29-2020, 02:16 AM   #11
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STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like
The punch is pretty funny but the set up seems rushed and too long. Jarring for an opener
Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does
See what you’re going for but it’s awkward to word it
Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby
Don’t like this unless I’m missing something
U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir.
Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer
Could lose a few words here but overall the angle isn’t great
Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star
WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar
Kind of feels like two concepts forced together unless I’m missing something again



Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.
Nice. Great opener well executed and personal
Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas,
& telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass.
Not feeling this
Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit,
When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed.
Nice wp again
Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check,
Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech.
Bit of a force but worded nicely
Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo.
Decent


Vote - Plot

Overall everything was better written and the two name flips alone were enough to take it, especially the opener.
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Old 05-29-2020, 09:12 AM   #12
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.
....ok .. kinda weak as in it don’t have a hurtful or truly insulting or disrespectful aspect to this bar . U want every line to scream fuck you
Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas,
& telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass.
....huh? I don’t get it
Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit,
When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed.
.....eh I get it but it really is a weak link between the concept and a actual diss or punchline . I’m not trying to be a dick. Pm me for more explanation if u care
Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check,
Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech.
.... I don’t get it but maybe it’s my fault I know nothing about golf
Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo
... that was dope . Could of been doper but I really like the punch

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STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like
...lol nah bro that’s corny
Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does
... I get it but u phrased it really weird by guy
Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby
....nah dude this isn’t a diss is it ? Am I missing something here
U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir.
Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer
...bland . Statement . Too straight forward . On a track it might sound cool but when we read it. It kinda leaves us wanting a bit more . This is steak with no seasoning
Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star
WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar
Aight inc u weren’t good in this battle bro


Plot u got a lot of things to tighten up as well



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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.

i like this, dope

Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas,
& telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass.

I kinda like the idea but I dont think the idea comes off as smoothly/naturally as intended

Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit,
When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed.

cool concept, I think the wording could've been a bit harsher

Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check,
Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech.

I love this concept, think the wording could've been done better though. Usually in live battling saying his bars make us do a twist-face would be construed as a compliment, but overall this is solid

Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo.

ok closer

STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like

The capitalization here is a little unnecessary, the idea is cool

Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does

Kinda the same comment I had about one of plots bars, the idea is cool but doesnt read off as smooth/natural as it could

Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby

Nah im not feeling this

U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir.
Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer

ok idea, wording couldve been harsher and better executed

Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star
WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar

I feel like you're trying to do too much here

not a whole lot to say that hasnt been said, I thought ink on the money was lotb

v/ plot
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.
COOL OPENER
Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas,
& telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass.
LOL FUNNY
Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit,
When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed.
COULDVE BEEN BETTER
Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check,
Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech.
NOT FAMILIAR
Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo.
NOT SURE IF THIS IS ACCURATE
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STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like
FUNNY NOTHIN HARD
Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does
NEEDS MORE WORK TO IT
Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby
NOT FEELING THIS
U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir.
Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer
DIDNT LIKE THIS
Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star
WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar
DIDNT READ SMOOTH
v/Plot..Concepts were delivered better
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.
Wish this was delivered cleaner, but I still like it. Dope concept
Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas,
& telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass.
Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit,
When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed.
Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check,
Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech.
Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo.
Dope closer, delivered a lot better than the opener
Did not like the other 3 bars
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STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like
This is a reach, not feeling it
Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does
Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby
U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir.
Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer
Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star
WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar
You fucking lost me on half these bars man, I don't feel I can vote properly without some expos.
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery.
funny bar but a bit simple

Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas,
& telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass.
this was worded a bit weird, didn't fall as a punch for me

Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit,
When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed.
decent wp

Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check,
Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech.
sorry I didn't really get this

Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show,
Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo.
hehehe cool

vs.

STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like
hilarious but ehhh

Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz
Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does
a bit simplistic, was expecting a harsher impact

Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body
NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby
missing the insult here, why we wish that?

U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir.
Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer
okkkkk not too hard hitting

Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star
WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar
sorry, not feeling this one. Perhaps could have been worded in a clearer way?


not a bad battle but I think both could have put more thoughts into their bars in order to have a more effective impact. tight here but I'm going with Plot for a more smoother read. could have gone to Incredible anyways but i wasnt feeling his verse too much v/plot
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Mvgt to plot

Inc had the karpis line but wasn't executed right

Plot had the robbery line ...lotb
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Old 06-01-2020, 12:36 PM   #18
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