SPOTLIGHT Match: Sharp vs. Corleone - SHARP WINS BY DQ

[Bomb Bard]

sharp losing a third time? no doubt in my mind,
as this dude falls victim, like a knife to a crime/(sharp/knife)

word, this looks like something that'd be in a wutang song. sharp/knife flips have been done a lot though

I'm nice with the rhymes.. this kid over his head,
like doing sit ups on a comforter bed/(sit ups/cor)

looks like something i'd see in a linkin park track, but the weird structure for this where you append the punch into the next line hurts the wording

.. he can't fuck with cor,
sharp pains travel throughout his abdomen and rupture his heart/

reminds me of a lyric that'd be in a drake collaboration back in like 98 before he did degrassi, solid bar

after two no shows, he's still hawkin to battle?
I'll take sharp off the board, like I taught in a classroom/(sharp markers/class board)

technically it's sharpie markers, but this is cool. the type of shit sha77er s7ar would've had you ghostwrite for him on an ezboard before 9/11 happened

he knows I'll fuccin erase him,
and put his career on stand by, when I put chalk to the pavement/

cool, it'd be dope if you made this into a punch with some kind of wordplay but this is throwback simplicity, reminds me of some shit kid rock would've written circa bawitdaba before recruiting bumpy johnson's henchmen's grandson to be in a music vid with him

cause markers can't outline a corpse,
especially when that marker has gone it's course/

again, adding some punches into your verse would be cool but i dig your simplistic style that just says anything. shit is remniscent of a 1990's freestyle battle with eyedea when people just rhymed without putting thought into the words that they choose. I dig your retro swag

.. and sharp was a mark buster from the very beginning,
he can't show his face in the streets, cause niggas'll kill him/

beginning and kill him is a bit of a stretch in rhyming, but tbh that's kinda that old cash money style that would've had lil wayne and b.g. banging at your door to ghostwrite their new single about money and fat bitches in g strings so i fuck with it

.. sharp known for duckin his beef,
was confronted in peace,
but left to an unlovingly piece..

fire man, every bar had me at the edge of my seat and really demonstrated why 50 cent and eminem offered 3 mill to have you ghostwrite for them



He has a forum w/ a 'Corleone' subsection... in case you couldn't tell he needs help
Yeah, Cormega into his One Love... just turns out that love's himself

nah not really feeling it tbh

Your ego is fucking psycho but that shows no one cares about you, bro
Too self-obsessed to realize you have NO threads... the Emperor's new clothes

I like the concept. I actually forgot about this story but it came back to me upon reading, I think the wording could've been harsher

Yo, btw...
triangulate my IP w/ Crip GPS yet? You're retarded or outta your mind, dude
how you gonna find my house here when you can't even find someone who respects you?

a bit simple but it's funny enough to make me laugh, so I dig it

I'm not one you can battle. BIG FACTS: you can't rap for shit
Your battle rap credentials start and end at 'looks like Terminally Illmaculate'

kinda funny but not enough to justify the bar

Kicked it w/ RZA and found fame at 6? No one's buying that shit here
but keep sayin 'Wu' for attention at this rate and we miiiight believe you're fuckin Rick Flair

I can imagine this concept getting played quick, but since its his first battle I know of, it's fresh and this was a dope line.

BUT we FINALLY got 'proof'. Gospel rap w/ 4 views? faggit you ain't earned your lies
aint seen a shitty 2000s track with that little traction since Dale Earnhardt died

this is funny, the reference is pretty outdated but i guess it fits the 2000s theme. solid punch

Opened a teespring and think you're a mogul. 'Out of stock'... you aint clever, g
You can only get so far 'off brand, alone' when that's ALL you'll ever be.

eh wasnt really feeling this as a closer



ric flair and dale earnhardt the best lines of the battle


V/Shar easily

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Woah. Just having a laugh man don't take things too far now

I apologize and don't want that smoke

We cool?

Ahhh this thread just keeps on giving. I like the bit where he says he will wear your skin, an he isn't playing. I doubt he has the patience or fine motor skills to pull of such a procedure. I wouldn't worry. Think your safe from Hannibal dislecter

[Pharaohs Army]

Originally Posted by Corleone

or how I was offered 3 million dollars to ghostwrite for 50 cent or eminem? which is true, by the way, I was offered that amount of money from my manager then named, Brian Wayne Perry, of Universal music group

Gave you a chance to be respected but you blew it.

You do realize that lies like these, and the Wu Tang lie, make you an easy target for ridicule?

You're unbelievable dude.

[corleone]

Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

Gave you a chance to be respected but you blew it.

You do realize that lies like these, and the Wu Tang lie, make you an easy target for ridicule?

You're unbelievable dude.

lol.. how am I lying? you fucking weirdo.

[Blue Bayou]

Originally Posted by Corleone

lol.. how am I lying? you fucking weirdo.

What the language....keep it classy

[corleone]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

What the language....keep it classy

fuck you.

[Sharp]

Still here and unharmed btw

[Universe]

Originally Posted by Sharp

Still here and unharmed btw

Lol

[Blue Bayou]

Originally Posted by Sharp

Still here and unharmed btw

Appreciate the status update Sharp

I think I saw you on Google Images driving your boat Slice Of Life yesterday

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Appreciate the status update Sharp

I think I saw you on Google Images driving your boat Slice Of Life yesterday

Don't just hand Cor my info dude smh

[corleone]

Originally Posted by Sharp

Still here and unharmed btw

I still won this battle. Thats 3 battles Ive won against you. Haha.

[Blue Bayou]

Okay I'm sorry Corina Corina but that sway is the final straw...

SHARP WINS BY DQ. OPEN FOR FEED THO

[corleone]

Originally Posted by Sharp

Still here and unharmed btw

You must rejuvenate quick, lmfao.

[corleone]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Okay I'm sorry For but that sway is the final straw...

SHARP WINS BY DQ. OPEN FOR FEED THO

lmfaoo.. sharps the one who began posting first, talking shit about me and because I respond, I get disqualified? wow, thats total bullshit.. especially being that he actually continued to rant on and antagonize me with the same old herb ass faggotts hes been harassing me with since Ive been here.. but a reminder, im not participating in any of your battle leagues anymore, as I already warned you had I been disqualified over sharps bullshit that he brings around me, I would no longer participate in any of your battle leagues.. so count me out on any future battles concerning this battle league.. 100

[Blue Bayou]

Originally Posted by Corleone

lmfaoo.. sharps the one who began posting first, talking shit about me and because I respond, I get disqualified? wow, thats total bullshit.. especially being that he actually continued to rant on and antagonize me with the same old herb ass faggotts hes been harassing me with since Ive been here.. but a reminder, im not participating in any of your battle leagues anymore, as I already warned you had I been disqualified over sharps bullshit that he brings around me, I would no longer participate in any of your battle leagues.. so count me out on any future battles concerning this battle league.. 100

Okay I'm sorry. I didn't think your threat to quit was legit.

I thought you were bluffing and shouldn't have called it. I respect you

Battle is REOPEN for votes

4-1 Sharp upping

[Sharp]

tbh, I'd rather win by votes or just void the battle

Originally Posted by Corleone

You must rejuvenate quick, lmfao.

can you at least admit to those threats being bullshit?

[corleone]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Okay I'm sorry. I didn't think your threat to quit was legit.

I thought you were bluffing and shouldn't have called it. I respect you

Battle is REOPEN for votes

4-1 Sharp upping

lol.. lmfao coo.. thanks but I'm out bro.. too much drama for me.. I'm working on some serious projects these days that will be sold in stores worldwide and I'm way too busy to deal with this headache.. plus it isn't so swell for promo either, lmfao.. it's been fun kids but you are wayyy too jealous of me and that is a serious no for me so im out of this league head high.. love ya, peace.. holla @ me at the open mic section if anything..

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Corleone

lol.. lmfao coo.. thanks but I'm out bro.. too much drama for me.. I'm working on some serious projects these days that will be sold in stores worldwide and I'm way too busy to deal with this headache.. plus it isn't so swell for promo either, lmfao.. it's been fun kids but you are wayyy too jealous of me and that is a serious no for me so im out of this league head high.. love ya, peace.. holla @ me at the open mic section if anything..

To be clear, you know he doesn't actually respect you, right?

[corleone]

to be even more clear, I could care less.. lol @Sharp I'm literally just trying to avoid all problems, as you should know, I have quite the reputation with the law, and a homicide under my belt wouldn't help me in anyway so there you go.. lol I don't need the heat kiddo.. Id literally kill you and your so fucking nieve, you don't even know it.. peace

PS.. I'm not referring to the NCPD thing either.. lmfao although that was funny but I literally just beat 15 years in prison back in 2015 and I was on parole for 3 years so I'm trying to enjoy my freedom and not be held subject to anything lesser then a normal citizen who loves hip-hop.. lol this back and forth shit gets me pumped up to really track your asses down and beat the living shit outta you and I'm so fucking intelligent, I'd use any type of technology into making that happen and I honestly feel the best thing for me to do is avoid attention like this and focus on music.. peace

[Sharp]

Just wanted to make sure. You seem to have this problem where you think people respect you, even when they don't.

So that's an admission that yes, the threats of hands, crip gps, etc were always bullshit?