Week One: Seth vs. Aero - OPEN FOR FEED

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due Wednesday by 11:59 PM PST.
• Goal is for voting to end Saturdays
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
• To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance


Line Limit:
• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 20 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.


Voting:
• I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls.

General Rules:
• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


@Da Brayn Lord
@Aero

[Aero]

12 - 16

[~RustyGunZ~]

16

You’re DEAD

[Inno]

Your both gay

[Aero]

Sent to BB....

If he needs til 11:59 am central I'll give him that. No mas.

[Blue Bayou]

Aero wins

[Aero]

Only posting the personal bars... Others will be saved for later:


Height: 5'9
Weight: 261 lbs.


Wow

Your wife's kicking you out, tired of the snacks you fit in your mouth
Your hunger destroyed a home when you ate the kid's gingerbread house
You're MORBIDLY OBESE & keep eating, yo this shit is unreal
You'd have your sons missing a dad before you'd fathom missing a meal
Your mother hated you, she'd orgasm & still would scorn your life
I had that bitch in heaven looking down on you even before she died

Originally Posted by Seth vs Sharp

I'm a legend so don't try it
We seen Disneys take on the fable, there's always rodents around a beanpole when gunnin' for a giant

TERRIBLE
This kike said he's a LEGEND, with cartoonish bars & fables in his text
Should've known to be a Jewish star you have two try angles that connect

[~RustyGunZ~]

mom bar was pretty low life but the opening two were good

closer was trash lmao

[Aero]

Lol tried to make it work. Sharp or Info could get away with it

[~RustyGunZ~]

That missing a meal bar is pretty dope actually classic Aero

[Zuo]

Why didn’t you write a berse?

[~RustyGunZ~]

Originally Posted by Zuo

Why didn’t you write a berse?

Weds is just a bad due date for me

I have a good job so I’m still working and dealing with not having daycare

Could’ve written today but they didn’t like such a long extension

Not mad at it though I’ll take not having to write. We were beefing two weeks ago and I lost the fire to write heavy hitters before NBL even started.

[Sharp]

[QUOTE=Aero;764033]Only posting the personal bars... Others will be saved for later:
for what? Thought you were done battling smh

Height: 5'9
Weight: 261 lbs.


Wow

Your wife's kicking you out, tired of the snacks you fit in your mouth
Your hunger destroyed a home when you ate the kid's gingerbread house
goofy
You're MORBIDLY OBESE & keep eating, yo this shit is unreal
You'd have your sons missing a dad before you'd fathom missing a meal
dope.
Your mother hated you, she'd orgasm & still would scorn your life
I had that bitch in heaven looking down on you even before she died
this is already understood. Delivery is like the bar above it, but it's worse... I don't even wanna talk a out the setup
TERRIBLE
This kike said he's a LEGEND, with cartoonish bars & fables in his text
Should've known to be a Jewish star you have two try angles that connect
well... Star of David has six triangles... But on a star of David the angles connect... So I would've gotten away with it by using the concept better

I fuck with the first two bars. The opener was light but the second bar brought it home. The bar about his mother was fine, but it had the same approach as the bar right before it which hurt

Closer made me wonder if you could draw a Jewish star without googling it, but it's a cool idea

[Cred]

That mom looking down on u bar was lit

[Orc]

This was good man

[Aero]

Appreciate it.

[Barcotic]

Opener was ok. Next two bars were nice

Not fucking w. the closer tho

[John Dillinger]

Congratz on 10th win @Aero

[Barcotic]

Every record on this netcees is inaccurate, stupid
All was lost w. the original site & shit has not ben updated properly since

[Aero]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

Opener was ok. Next two bars were nice

Not fucking w. the closer tho

You of all people should love it.