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Old 09-30-2018, 09:12 PM   #1
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Old 09-30-2018, 09:26 PM   #2
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Old 10-05-2018, 01:04 PM   #4
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Sent 12 @Cashius

Browsin Netflix w/ ya racist hoe, she on her knees & slobberin'
Ur only tryna watch 'Hold the Dark' cuz it's ur code for keepin hostages
Ur washed up, for less than $10 I'll put one on ya mind n blast here
Not expectin change... U'd think I'm in a rush the way I shove that 9 to Cashier
Ur SOFT, ain't bout a word u say so why should we be friends
I'd compare u to Karpis, but instead of hate u jus be saying sorry in PM's
This confederate fuck ain't out the window sprayin w/ hot trey clips
Faggot, the only thing u be whippin stays in ya pops basement
Yall can't afford straps, I'll pull the pump to ya hating friends
Ur broke, the only time we see Cash machine banging is when ur punching on ATM's
U can't handle smoke, I light the flame w/ an Eagle in hand
Ur only familiar w/ 'Trees in Backwoods' from hanging people w/ Gramps

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Old 10-05-2018, 11:32 PM   #5
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Let me guess...

Racism bars! Well drop them and the blood gonna spray, heard me?
Say Wizard one time...And there’ll be red all over John Wall like his fucking away jersey
You keep your bitch locked up in the crib...Won’t see son’s bae leave the house...
That’s why that Trampoline down her gullet...and PRAYS that one day she can Bounce
That first pod you sounded like the BIGGEST wigger...ain’t squeezin’ or holdin’, son
Saying “Fa Sho” doesn’t make you sound black....but it’s the ONLY reason you own a gun
I’ll clap JD until his whole mid section get hit up...Make this cat just bleed
It’s facts, my G....I’ll Squeeeeze a Round on your stomach like a Gastric Sleeve
Yeh, I apologized for that racist shit...It made me feel hella bad, son...
I had some Convictions...While YOU’RE named after a gangster and still never had ONE
Your bitch gives me that royal treatment...Yoooo, the hoe workin’ the gawd...
Talk about Service...That slut let me go In and Out more than your phone during the pod

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Old 10-07-2018, 10:20 PM   #6
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Browsin Netflix w/ ya racist hoe, she on her knees & slobberin'
Ur only tryna watch 'Hold the Dark' cuz it's ur code for keepin hostages
1/3
Ur washed up, for less than $10 I'll put one on ya mind n blast here
Not expectin change... U'd think I'm in a rush the way I shove that 9 to Cashier
3/3
Ur SOFT, ain't bout a word u say so why should we be friends
I'd compare u to Karpis, but instead of hate u jus be saying sorry in PM's
2/3
This confederate fuck ain't out the window sprayin w/ hot trey clips
Faggot, the only thing u be whippin stays in ya pops basement
2/3
Yall can't afford straps, I'll pull the pump to ya hating friends
Ur broke, the only time we see Cash machine banging is when ur punching on ATM's
3/3
U can't handle smoke, I light the flame w/ an Eagle in hand
Ur only familiar w/ 'Trees in Backwoods' from hanging people w/ Gramps
2/3
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Originally Posted by Cashius View Post
Let me guess...

Racism bars! Well drop them and the blood gonna spray, heard me?
Say Wizard one time...And there’ll be red all over John Wall like his fucking away jersey
3/3
You keep your bitch locked up in the crib...Won’t see son’s bae leave the house...
That’s why that Trampoline down her gullet...and PRAYS that one day she can Bounce
3/3
That first pod you sounded like the BIGGEST wigger...ain’t squeezin’ or holdin’, son
Saying “Fa Sho” doesn’t make you sound black....but it’s the ONLY reason you own a gun
3/3
I’ll clap JD until his whole mid section get hit up...Make this cat just bleed
It’s facts, my G....I’ll Squeeeeze a Round on your stomach like a Gastric Sleeve
2/3
Yeh, I apologized for that racist shit...It made me feel hella bad, son...
I had some Convictions...While YOU’RE named after a gangster and still never had ONE
3/3
Your bitch gives me that royal treatment...Yoooo, the hoe workin’ the gawd...
Talk about Service...That slut let me go In and Out more than your phone during the pod
2/3

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16/18

v. cashius. JD had a nice verse, cash just overwhelmed him with the personals imo. really good read from both
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Old 10-08-2018, 02:55 PM   #7
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Browsin Netflix w/ ya racist hoe, she on her knees & slobberin'
Ur only tryna watch 'Hold the Dark' cuz it's ur code for keepin hostages

(Lol out the gate. This is funny. I think your set up coulda been a bit better but hold the dark is funny)

Ur washed up, for less than $10 I'll put one on ya mind n blast here
Not expectin change... U'd think I'm in a rush the way I shove that 9 to Cashier

(Liked this one. I liked then less than 10 and not expecting change tie ins. Only critique is with ‘shove the 9’, a 9 isn’t a bill so wording slightly off. Def thing you shoulda used shoved the 5. Still like it though)

Ur SOFT, ain't bout a word u say so why should we be friends
I'd compare u to Karpis, but instead of hate u jus be saying sorry in PM's

(Okay. Good personal angle. I think you shoulda turned this into a harsher flip. It was statementish - which would have been fine if it was a bit more impactful)

This confederate fuck ain't out the window sprayin w/ hot trey clips
Faggot, the only thing u be whippin stays in ya pops basement

(Lol JD clownin. This is pretty funny to me. I think only thing I can critique is that there aren’t very harsh, but sometimes jokes are effective too)

Yall can't afford straps, I'll pull the pump to ya hating friends
Ur broke, the only time we see Cash machine banging is when ur punching on ATM's

(Not bad but the concept is played imo. The ATM concept is used in itself and then it’s a bit too obvious if a cash flip. Executed it pretty well though. This is okay)

U can't handle smoke, I light the flame w/ an Eagle in hand
Ur only familiar w/ 'Trees in Backwoods' from hanging people w/ Gramps

(This okay. Might should have went went a harsher personal here. I typically like when guys expound and continue to use the same angle, but all your personals here were pretty similar. Like they were jokes in the only time you do X is when you (insert racist thing). Not a bad closer, but it lost some impact)



Racism bars! Well drop them and the blood gonna spray, heard me?
Say Wizard one time...And there’ll be red all over John Wall like his fucking away jersey

(I like this one a lot. Good writing here.you knew it was coming and flipped it with the racism angle. The say wizard is a dope tie in. The John wall flip was nice. This was dope)

You keep your bitch locked up in the crib...Won’t see son’s bae leave the house...
That’s why that Trampoline down her gullet...and PRAYS that one day she can Bounce

(If I’m understanding the wp correct “trampoline her gullet down” is awkwardly worded and seems like a bit of a stretch. I thought you tied it in nicely with pray she can bounce. This was just okay to me)

That first pod you sounded like the BIGGEST wigger...ain’t squeezin’ or holdin’, son
Saying “Fa Sho” doesn’t make you sound black....but it’s the ONLY reason you own a gun

(Lol this is good. Good personal angle. The fa show flip was nice)

I’ll clap JD until his whole mid section get hit up...Make this cat just bleed
It’s facts, my G....I’ll Squeeeeze a Round on your stomach like a Gastric Sleeve

(This was a light jab to me. Set it up well. Squeeze a round on your stomach is pretty good. My issue is I think calling round things ‘rounds’ is a combination of a stretch and overdone. I thought it was a creative concept though)

Yeh, I apologized for that racist shit...It made me feel hella bad, son...
I had some Convictions...While YOU’RE named after a gangster and still never had ONE

(This is nice. Once again, you’re predicting the angles he’s going to use and flipping this one. This was so spot on it looks like a feed lol. Anyways, crisp wording. Convictions flip was pretty good)

Your bitch gives me that royal treatment...Yoooo, the hoe workin’ the gawd...
Talk about Service...That slut let me go In and Out more than your phone during the pod

(Another good personal angle. Talk about service is a good tie in. The flip wasn’t crazy but it was good. Overall this is a good closer)


Dope battle.

I enjoy reading JDs bars. He always has creative concepts and well rounded verse. I think he had a lot of clever bars and no real
Misses.

Unfortunately for JD, Cashius was wiggin. JD went with the racist angle and Cash flipped it on him with the prebuttals. The apologizing flip was particularly good because it woulda been harder to predict JD would use that. On top of that Cashius had the better personals.

This was a very good battle. JD came with it but Cashius was in his bag.

Mvgt Cashius
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Browsin Netflix w/ ya racist hoe, she on her knees & slobberin'
Ur only tryna watch 'Hold the Dark' cuz it's ur code for keepin hostages
lol, good open, fresh concept
Ur washed up, for less than $10 I'll put one on ya mind n blast here
Not expectin change... U'd think I'm in a rush the way I shove that 9 to Cashier
dope, good wording throughout and cool nameplay
Ur SOFT, ain't bout a word u say so why should we be friends
I'd compare u to Karpis, but instead of hate u jus be saying sorry in PM's
ehh... personal noted on the PM shit but I just don't really dig the karpis tie in
This confederate fuck ain't out the window sprayin w/ hot trey clips
Faggot, the only thing u be whippin stays in ya pops basement
okay for a whipping concept... personal dig
Yall can't afford straps, I'll pull the pump to ya hating friends
Ur broke, the only time we see Cash machine banging is when ur punching on ATM's
okay np for a cash/atm flip
U can't handle smoke, I light the flame w/ an Eagle in hand
Ur only familiar w/ 'Trees in Backwoods' from hanging people w/ Gramps
lol funny hit this was solid

vs.

Racism bars! Well drop them and the blood gonna spray, heard me?
Say Wizard one time...And there’ll be red all over John Wall like his fucking away jersey
dope open, nice nameplay & tie ins.. haven't seen a john wall angle personally
You keep your bitch locked up in the crib...Won’t see son’s bae leave the house...
That’s why that Trampoline down her gullet...and PRAYS that one day she can Bounce
lol cool wp... ive done trampoline before but in a much diff way
That first pod you sounded like the BIGGEST wigger...ain’t squeezin’ or holdin’, son
Saying “Fa Sho” doesn’t make you sound black....but it’s the ONLY reason you own a gun
lmaooo, nice punch
I’ll clap JD until his whole mid section get hit up...Make this cat just bleed
It’s facts, my G....I’ll Squeeeeze a Round on your stomach like a Gastric Sleeve
pretty nice concept, wording was fire
Yeh, I apologized for that racist shit...It made me feel hella bad, son...
I had some Convictions...While YOU’RE named after a gangster and still never had ONE
very nice, good nameplay and personal tie in... this was a dope bar
Your bitch gives me that royal treatment...Yoooo, the hoe workin’ the gawd...
Talk about Service...That slut let me go In and Out more than your phone during the pod
lol boom, another nice personal


Great read here... JD was pretty solid throughout & I thought he had a real chance to win this after reading his verse, good mix of nice concept & personals with only a miss or two... but tbh Cash spazzed, dope mix of creative hard hitting concepts and even one upped JD with the personals... really good battle, ive got Cash winning ... props to both
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Tight match. Had you both at a miss each with Cash's being trampoline which I saw on America got talent a week back on some reruns so too fresh for me. And jds was That karpis line.

Having reread i didn't appreciate the cash name flip bar either just because they so over done even if yours seemed fresher then normal. Think you could have gone at another angle here.

Marginal but edging cash.

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Browsin Netflix w/ ya racist hoe, she on her knees & slobberin'
Ur only tryna watch 'Hold the Dark' cuz it's ur code for keepin hostages
--cool bar, wording a lil sloppy coulda been a haymaker. still nice tho and fresh
Ur washed up, for less than $10 I'll put one on ya mind n blast here
Not expectin change... U'd think I'm in a rush the way I shove that 9 to Cashier
--well, solid flip but this an old np on him. too played out imo
Ur SOFT, ain't bout a word u say so why should we be friends
I'd compare u to Karpis, but instead of hate u jus be saying sorry in PM's
--didnt like this
This confederate fuck ain't out the window sprayin w/ hot trey clips
Faggot, the only thing u be whippin stays in ya pops basement
--cool
Yall can't afford straps, I'll pull the pump to ya hating friends
Ur broke, the only time we see Cash machine banging is when ur punching on ATM's
--nah again its just too old on him.
U can't handle smoke, I light the flame w/ an Eagle in hand
Ur only familiar w/ 'Trees in Backwoods' from hanging people w/ Gramps
lmao nice
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Let me guess...

Racism bars! Well drop them and the blood gonna spray, heard me?
Say Wizard one time...And there’ll be red all over John Wall like his fucking away jersey
--fire
You keep your bitch locked up in the crib...Won’t see son’s bae leave the house...
That’s why that Trampoline down her gullet...and PRAYS that one day she can Bounce
--seen this a few times. ok bar, solid flip
That first pod you sounded like the BIGGEST wigger...ain’t squeezin’ or holdin’, son
Saying “Fa Sho” doesn’t make you sound black....but it’s the ONLY reason you own a gun
--nice
I’ll clap JD until his whole mid section get hit up...Make this cat just bleed
It’s facts, my G....I’ll Squeeeeze a Round on your stomach like a Gastric Sleeve
--got him
Yeh, I apologized for that racist shit...It made me feel hella bad, son...
I had some Convictions...While YOU’RE named after a gangster and still never had ONE
--eh
Your bitch gives me that royal treatment...Yoooo, the hoe workin’ the gawd...
Talk about Service...That slut let me go In and Out more than your phone during the pod
--lol

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cool read fellas i dug the battle, jd had a solid verse but cash came w it

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