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Old 04-10-2018, 07:39 AM   #1
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Old 04-10-2018, 06:52 PM   #2
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Old 04-12-2018, 05:50 PM   #4
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Here ya go 8 dude

You were created bitchmade truthfully your not a killer get the fuck off the scene
Your signs of Rampage were seeing Dwayne Johnson and George the Gorilla on big screen
I'll lean towards your bitch i can tell your a little Jelly
Say something fag ill hop off that Mound and punch you in the head like Joe Kelly
Blade slicing better than the local deli, terrible what it will do to your organs
Bounty on ur head so when i leave u all bloody better cop some that are fast absorbing
Mom n dad still supporting his ass, having a future is very slim
Even i feel bad ill give 25 to Lyf, i know fucking prisoners eating better than him
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Old 04-13-2018, 02:37 AM   #5
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Vs. Joe Boston

...I'm truly amazed that this dude even say shit...

I'm sitting on the Throne while this tool in the basement.
It would be ubsurd to proclaim JoKing; unless that's the expression being used when it's Stated.
I'm bruising this fake prick, that'll give u some shine u stupid bitch.
So if you ever hear that it's Bos Time? It's just Michael Cole when Sasha's music hits.
I'm heading for the End Zone, yet breaking ankles; fast like Kyrie.
Boston Garden his territory just to get crushed and replaced, that's a TD.

...I'm hittin 3s bro, u missing free throws...

It's easy to put Dogs down, no need 4 the pistol my fists is lethal.
an after I'll have JBs head hangin from the wall like the Kingsmen Sequel.
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Old 04-14-2018, 08:23 PM   #6
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@Lyfzaa Gamble gmv for his opener.
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@Lyfzaa Gamble gmv for his opener.
be nice if this was an actual breakdown
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You were created bitchmade truthfully your not a killer get the fuck off the scene
Your signs of Rampage were seeing Dwayne Johnson and George the Gorilla on big screen
( I'm so far removed from film rn iono what movie u talking bout or anything . not yr fault its just me n I am an individual voter)
I'll lean towards your bitch i can tell your a little Jelly
Say something fag ill hop off that Mound and punch you in the head like Joe Kelly
(Ehhh . barely)
Blade slicing better than the local deli, terrible what it will do to your organs
Bounty on ur head so when i leave u all bloody better cop some that are fast absorbing
(Good concept kinda shoddy wording ok line)
Mom n dad still supporting his ass, having a future is very slim
Even i feel bad ill give 25 to Lyf, i know fucking prisoners eating better than him
(Meh Tbh)

I love u Joe but wording plodding as hell here . usually ur concepts are better too

m sitting on the Throne while this tool in the basement.
It would be ubsurd to proclaim JoKing; unless that's the expression being used when it's Stated.
( like the swagger but kinda stretched considering everything.. Kinda cool thio)

I'm bruising this fake prick, that'll give u some shine u stupid bitch.
So if you ever hear that it's Bos Time? It's just Michael Cole when Sasha's music hits.
(Wah)
I'm heading for the End Zone, yet breaking ankles; fast like Kyrie.
Boston Garden his territory just to get crushed and replaced, that's a TD.
(Concept fire tie ins fire last part unavoidably ass. U had no choice I get it considering u used the words associated elsewhere)

...I'm hittin 3s bro, u missing free throws...

It's easy to put Dogs down, no need 4 the pistol my fists is lethal.
an after I'll have JBs head hangin from the wall like the Kingsmen Sequel.
(Ok)

Hmmm yeah I got gamble

His verse strikes me as the winner

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Old 04-15-2018, 11:58 PM   #10
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Cool lil quick battle. Joe’s first two were misses to me. Didn’t like the rampage bar. The Joe Kelly was nothing special. No word play or crazy punch - pretty much a current event, statement line. I liked the bounty bar. Pretty creative and well executed. Closer was cool. The execution wasn’t perfect but pretty good.

Gamble has a decent opener. It was wordy, which took away from the bar, but solid. I like WWE bars but this one was just okay. The nameplay was cool but the punch itself was just aight. The Boston Garden bar was all over the place. Hard to comprehend. The closer was your best bar.

Vote goes to Gamble in a close one. Gamble edges it slightly by being a bit more consistent. Joe prob had the highest high with the Bounty bar, but his 2 misses hurt him. Gamble had the nice kings man bar then only 0-1 miss.

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Old 04-16-2018, 09:18 AM   #11
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Joe Kelly was nice... rampage was choppy as fuck. Bounty was worded terrible

Gam had joking

Bos time could have been dope if worded harsher and better

TD was nice

Kingman sequal was aight

Both had misses and both had one line a piece I got gams misses being better here.
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Mom n dad still supporting his ass, having a future is very slim
Even i feel bad ill give 25 to Lyf, i know fucking prisoners eating better than him

^ dece nameplay... rampage would've been more developed, mound was mehh, needed more of a tie in and Bounty paper towel play ive seen done before so it didn't hit for me as much

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I'm sitting on the Throne while this tool in the basement.
It would be ubsurd to proclaim JoKing; unless that's the expression being used when it's Stated.
^coo nameplay
I'm heading for the End Zone, yet breaking ankles; fast like Kyrie.
Boston Garden his territory just to get crushed and replaced, that's a TD.
niec flip on the garden w/p
...I'm hittin 3s bro, u missing free throws...

It's easy to put Dogs down, no need 4 the pistol my fists is lethal.
an after I'll have JBs head hangin from the wall like the Kingsmen Sequel.
^was was pretty coo


Fun read, I've got Gamble winning this one liked the nameplays better and some fresher concepts imo...

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