DynamiCz [vs] Joe Boston - DYNAMICZ WINS

Amen · 03-06-2018, 08:57 AM

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@DynamiCz @Joe Boston

Joe Boston · 03-06-2018, 03:57 PM

check

DynamiCz · 03-06-2018, 04:13 PM

Check..

DynamiCz · 03-08-2018, 12:03 PM

Need the ext until friday bro

Joe Boston · 03-08-2018, 07:25 PM

no doubt going 10 @DynamiCz

bitch learned his lesson the 1st time,this week he gotta pray
long shot from a W,hes better off driving to mcdonalds on international womens day
your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do
I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview
i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses
Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress
u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection
Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback in ur head thats a Vietnam Veteran
dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy
if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini

DynamiCz · 03-09-2018, 02:57 PM

Some nerve, now its son day...im giving him the word
Sleep with the eagle incase its beef..Toni Braxton, I'm wakin up next to the bird
The impact caused him a icepack..sharp object made contact
The blade put two cuts on his smile, his face expression walmart rolled the price back
Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream
Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen
Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch
Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch
You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot
Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop

Joe Boston · 03-09-2018, 03:35 PM

@Amen if you could open for votes good looks

Schadenfreude · 03-09-2018, 07:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joe Boston

bitch learned his lesson the 1st time,this week he gotta pray
long shot from a W,hes better off driving to mcdonalds on international womens day
Bland wording, very good idea tho
your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do
I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview
Combine interview actually, decent line
i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses
Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress
Too simple imo
u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection
Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback in ur head thats a Vietnam Veteran
Cool cool
dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy
if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini
Hated your wording here

Quote:

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

Some nerve, now its son day...im giving him the word
Sleep with the eagle incase its beef..Toni Braxton, I'm wakin up next to the bird
Corny, but it's ok
The impact caused him a icepack..sharp object made contact
The blade put two cuts on his smile, his face expression walmart rolled the price back
the wording's waaaay off
Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream
Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen
you tried bringing the concept/set up to fruition, but the punch didn't go anywhere
Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch
Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch
Lol now this is dope
You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot
Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop
Good closer

VOTE DYNAMICZ JB was standard & a bit too predictable w/ his punches. Dyn tried out some creative angles, just needs to polish up that wording.

2tripple0 · 03-10-2018, 10:02 AM

bitch learned his lesson the 1st time,this week he gotta pray
long shot from a W,hes better off driving to mcdonalds on international womens day
wow that was funny
your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do
I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview
don't know who derrius guice is but yeah...
i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses
Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress
ooo that was personal I liked it
u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection
Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback in ur head thats a Vietnam Veteran
ehh not into this one seemed a bit don't know just didn't like it
dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy
if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini
I liked that that was funny as well

Vs.

Some nerve, now its son day...im giving him the word
Sleep with the eagle incase its beef..Toni Braxton, I'm wakin up next to the bird
nah sorry
The impact caused him a icepack..sharp object made contact
The blade put two cuts on his smile, his face expression walmart rolled the price back
that was funny
Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream
Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen
nah
Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch
Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch
eh could been better
You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot
Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop
nah sorry didn't like this closer

Vote: I think it's obvious but Joe boston

Alvin Karpis · 03-10-2018, 08:31 PM

Dynamicz got this
W concept was relevant but poorly executed
Joe actually could be a problem. if he fixed his wording, rhyming, etc
Concept was there i suppose
Dyn had enough to win, tripod was cool

v/dynamic

Incredible · 03-10-2018, 09:48 PM

Joe Boston:

"your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do
I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview"

"u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection
Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback"

DynamiCz:

"Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream
Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen"

"Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch
Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch"

"You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot
Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop"

The three bars for DynamiCz I quoted is when I started feeling his verse was getting the lead. Also idk to me the Toni Braxton line made it seem like you were saying you are her. Say what you want just my opinion. So kind of lost me there...Joe Boston didn't try here it seemed like couple nice lines. He usually as a more solid better worded verse. This time was different in my opinion. So even with me being a little confused at first with dyna's opener, his last 3 bars just felt they hit harder vs. what Joe put up. Voting for DynamiCz

Lyfzaa Gamble · 03-10-2018, 11:56 PM

i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses
Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress

dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy
if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini

Fav 2 from JB..

Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream
Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen
Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch
Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch

Fqv 2 from dy

Weak battle imo, but Joe clearly had the more solid verse.

Mvgt Jb

Barcotic · 03-11-2018, 09:16 AM

JB
dope opener
box spring was a cool concept but wording hurt it
same w flashback, fire concept tho

ur other 2 missed completely

vs

Dy
opener had a gd concept but it was overworded +not a diss
handheld was worded better, dope concept too but again.. impact was minimal due to it not really getting at him
closer was cool

next 2 missed completely

this is close, but i def see jb taking it
he just had more impact
v/joe boston

Saint · 03-11-2018, 09:21 AM

V -- JB

Even though some of his execution/ wording is shaky.....clearly had the better ideas, i.e - flashback, boxspring that could've been cool, still aight tho for creativity.

Dynamicz -- tripod was slick to me, alot of other stuff was indirect or overworded. U seem for for S&F. Just need more experience attackin yo opponent.

Orc · 03-11-2018, 09:37 AM

I have DynamiCz winning here. The last two bars were better than JBs attempts. He's been adapting well and just needs to execute a little more fluidly. Be more direct. Tighten up the wording. JB had the flashback which was nice. Some creative ideas but the wordyness let him down. Overthinking the delivery is killing you. Shorten the bars. Be concise. If a word doesnt need to be here get rid of it. Anyway I think DynamiCz edged it so I'll roll with him. Vote DynamiCz.

It's 4 4

Cred · 03-11-2018, 09:42 AM

Joe Boston I only really liked the mattress line you had, and even that was a bit borderline of a quotable. Dynamicz I liked the Nintendo switch line even though it wasn’t really a punch and I liked the creativeness of ur closer. Opener had potential too, dope ass concept.

Vote / Dynamicz

Amen · 03-11-2018, 09:55 AM

Joe's wording defeats him again. Jesus.

Opener had potential.
Next bar was ok but light. Concept as a hole is retired. I mean how many times can people write a bar about their opponents sexuality? See where I'm going with this? Kind of like the I fucked your mom/girl concept.
Box spring concept was ok but your execution was corny and really close to cringe, honestly. Need to be harsh dude.
Flash backs was off.
Closers wording was horrible and the WP was a reach.

Dynamicz

Tony Braxton was an ok concept over worded with a bad execution.
Walmart roll back concept needed more.
Smoke screen was a complete miss.
Tripod was dope.
Closer was ok.

I got DynamiCz with edge here.

03-06-2018, 08:57 AM	#1
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,470 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	DynamiCz [vs] Joe Boston - DYNAMICZ WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Mar 8 and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are ONLY 24 hours. Failure to post with in 24 hours of original deadline WILL result in a DQ - no exceptions. Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @DynamiCz @Joe Boston

03-06-2018, 04:13 PM	#3
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03-08-2018, 12:03 PM	#4
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03-09-2018, 02:57 PM	#6
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	Some nerve, now its son day...im giving him the word Sleep with the eagle incase its beef..Toni Braxton, I'm wakin up next to the bird The impact caused him a icepack..sharp object made contact The blade put two cuts on his smile, his face expression walmart rolled the price back Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-10-2018, 10:02 AM	#9
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	bitch learned his lesson the 1st time,this week he gotta pray long shot from a W,hes better off driving to mcdonalds on international womens day wow that was funny your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview don't know who derrius guice is but yeah... i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress ooo that was personal I liked it u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback in ur head thats a Vietnam Veteran ehh not into this one seemed a bit don't know just didn't like it dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini I liked that that was funny as well Vs. Some nerve, now its son day...im giving him the word Sleep with the eagle incase its beef..Toni Braxton, I'm wakin up next to the bird nah sorry The impact caused him a icepack..sharp object made contact The blade put two cuts on his smile, his face expression walmart rolled the price back that was funny Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen nah Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch eh could been better You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop nah sorry didn't like this closer Vote: I think it's obvious but Joe boston __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

03-06-2018, 03:57 PM	#2
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	check

03-08-2018, 07:25 PM	#5
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	no doubt going 10 @DynamiCz bitch learned his lesson the 1st time,this week he gotta pray long shot from a W,hes better off driving to mcdonalds on international womens day your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview i'll spew all ur over chicks glasses, gives good head but im not into flat asses Whenever i hit the BoxSpring into action,u sleep in the wetspot on ur worn out mattress u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback in ur head thats a Vietnam Veteran dont go second guessing yourself cuz defeating me aint that easy if these shellls can Panera persons face,it'll have yours looking like a grilled Panini

03-09-2018, 03:35 PM	#7
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	@Amen if you could open for votes good looks

03-10-2018, 08:31 PM	#10
Alvin Karpis 2020 Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 34-12 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Summer Classic V - Summer Classic IV - NBL Season 7 - BA Swag and Flow - BA Swag & Flow Tournament II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV Rep Power: 4052844	Dynamicz got this W concept was relevant but poorly executed Joe actually could be a problem. if he fixed his wording, rhyming, etc Concept was there i suppose Dyn had enough to win, tripod was cool v/dynamic

03-10-2018, 09:48 PM	#11
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	Joe Boston: "your gay by far, crying and bitchin aint what grown men do I question your sexuality, your more like Derrius Guice during a Radio interview" "u take self defense classes for protection,i got a burner with a kick like a midsection Bullets Travel at lighting speeds, see the flashback" DynamiCz: "Cold scene..woke like a activist..im trying to catch joe sleep in his dream Front yard of the house..hiding with the tank like a smoke screen" "Catch him slippin in the hallway, this friend get the money mitch Disconnected the gun from the tripod stand, made it handheld like a nintendo switch" "You cant be the cream of the crop, this is karma?..i came back around on the spot Thought you had something in store for me, temporary front..thats a pop up shop" The three bars for DynamiCz I quoted is when I started feeling his verse was getting the lead. Also idk to me the Toni Braxton line made it seem like you were saying you are her. Say what you want just my opinion. So kind of lost me there...Joe Boston didn't try here it seemed like couple nice lines. He usually as a more solid better worded verse. This time was different in my opinion. So even with me being a little confused at first with dyna's opener, his last 3 bars just felt they hit harder vs. what Joe put up. Voting for DynamiCz

03-11-2018, 09:16 AM	#13
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	JB dope opener box spring was a cool concept but wording hurt it same w flashback, fire concept tho ur other 2 missed completely vs Dy opener had a gd concept but it was overworded +not a diss handheld was worded better, dope concept too but again.. impact was minimal due to it not really getting at him closer was cool next 2 missed completely this is close, but i def see jb taking it he just had more impact v/joe boston

03-11-2018, 09:21 AM	#14
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,186 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	V -- JB Even though some of his execution/ wording is shaky.....clearly had the better ideas, i.e - flashback, boxspring that could've been cool, still aight tho for creativity. Dynamicz -- tripod was slick to me, alot of other stuff was indirect or overworded. U seem for for S&F. Just need more experience attackin yo opponent.

03-11-2018, 09:37 AM	#15
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	I have DynamiCz winning here. The last two bars were better than JBs attempts. He's been adapting well and just needs to execute a little more fluidly. Be more direct. Tighten up the wording. JB had the flashback which was nice. Some creative ideas but the wordyness let him down. Overthinking the delivery is killing you. Shorten the bars. Be concise. If a word doesnt need to be here get rid of it. Anyway I think DynamiCz edged it so I'll roll with him. Vote DynamiCz. It's 4 4

03-11-2018, 09:42 AM	#16
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Joe Boston I only really liked the mattress line you had, and even that was a bit borderline of a quotable. Dynamicz I liked the Nintendo switch line even though it wasn’t really a punch and I liked the creativeness of ur closer. Opener had potential too, dope ass concept. Vote / Dynamicz

03-11-2018, 09:55 AM	#17
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,470 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Joe's wording defeats him again. Jesus. Opener had potential. Next bar was ok but light. Concept as a hole is retired. I mean how many times can people write a bar about their opponents sexuality? See where I'm going with this? Kind of like the I fucked your mom/girl concept. Box spring concept was ok but your execution was corny and really close to cringe, honestly. Need to be harsh dude. Flash backs was off. Closers wording was horrible and the WP was a reach. Dynamicz Tony Braxton was an ok concept over worded with a bad execution. Walmart roll back concept needed more. Smoke screen was a complete miss. Tripod was dope. Closer was ok. I got DynamiCz with edge here.