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05-18-2015, 05:43 PM
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rnd1. Junto vs Greed - JUNTO WINS
Key Grand Prix II maximum 10 lines minimum 10 lines DUE TONIGHT MAY 15TH 2015 AT 3.00AM EASTERN TIME NO SWAYING, RECYCLING, BITING OR PROP 17ING @Junto @_____
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05-18-2015, 06:40 PM
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Leave you flatlined.
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Hush this is Aero.
Junto, this is death.
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05-19-2015, 05:31 AM
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shut your fuckin face loser
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05-19-2015, 07:49 AM
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The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes' I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straight |
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05-19-2015, 08:50 AM
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The Founder
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yo...
Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you. Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right? G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly. Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy |
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05-19-2015, 02:24 PM
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Two quotes a piece but _____ didn't miss as much. Good battle on both sides, as both showed good creativity, but I think underscores edges Junto out with better wording. Vote: _______ |
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05-19-2015, 07:28 PM
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The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs seen j crew lines before Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco yooo nice I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly not bad I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes' I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome ok but mad wordy The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straight seen too many june flips lately. not bad tho Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free ok So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you. like it but I seen a lot of aer lines directed at aero Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right? G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site ok You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit eh You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly. Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy almost hits but i feel like ti could be flipped harder yo this is close. I wanted to bump it but i gotta re-read it later coming back I gotta go with greed on consistency. this was close as fuck but I thought he had a bit more with tish faco being line of the battle. good stuff guys, this and tic/bomb are the round highlights for sure v/gree
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05-20-2015, 01:10 AM
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The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs ehhhh Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco lmao nice I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly No, bad I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes' I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome Dope The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straight ok vs Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free nah So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you. Nice Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right? G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site Ok, a little basic You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit ok You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly. Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy Very nice This is close, best battle I've seen so far. Greed had the best line with the tish faco punch, but Junto was more consistent and also had a couple of dope bars. Re-read this and I'm giving it to Junto for a more creative and consistent verse. Good battle tho, could go either way. Vote - Junto
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05-20-2015, 01:27 AM
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J crew lol
Tish Faco baaaaaang Junkies nah nigga nahhh Kazuya DON DEMARRRCO Closer eh ol Iik5 thus verse niggs.... Junto Open. ... Creative but nothing gr8 Aer. Bang bang silk road . *sux teeth* Lol come on bro w/:this loose ass historica ref.. 2nd helpin is Umm snf tbh but gud snf I 4ly don't get ur closer I got greed or under score H3 was jyst more surprisihgly dop V/________%%
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05-20-2015, 08:53 PM
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05-20-2015, 11:07 PM
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Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes' I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome Vs So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you. You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit you won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly. Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy V/junto, this was a close one had to re-read acouple times, greeds tish faco line was nice, junt was alil more consistent tbh, i see how ppl sayin the aer line is played but it was flipped fresh imo cuz of the whole whos battling though the his closer was dope to. this was a good battle, props to both.
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05-21-2015, 01:13 AM
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GREED
The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs this sounds pretty played. not really creative. kinda corny. but ok. Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco lol I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly ? I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes' I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome kinda forcing some of this but 'yoshimitsu too' was pretty clever imo. the actual punch sort of fell flat. The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straigh meh JUNTO Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free all around just not great for me. why did you apostrophe target price? is that a wordplay or something? So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you. that partial nameplay shit is whack but this was ok. Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right? G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site lol You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit ok. i get it. cause he's a larger dude. cool. You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly. Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy you could have flipped that way better but cool. v/ JUNTO I wasnt a fan of a lot of his wording but his basic conceptual ideas for punchlines were more effective than greed's. i think by a long-ish shot. cool battle guys thx
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05-21-2015, 01:26 AM
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The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco started falling off, quotes were just okay. tish faco could have been worded ill.\ vs So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you. Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right? G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly. Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy misses better than most of greeds verse tbh, hits were cool some wording issues in the last 2 but solid enough v/junto |
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