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Old 12-08-2014, 06:38 PM   #1
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    December 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Friday, December 12th 2014
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 16, maximum of 20
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

First to 5, win by at least two votes
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Old 12-08-2014, 11:47 PM   #2
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Old 12-09-2014, 08:45 AM   #3
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Old 12-14-2014, 11:23 PM   #4
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Old 12-18-2014, 06:51 AM   #5
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With a name like that, who could think this dude is a threat
I’m not sure if he just likes that number or this faggot hasn’t hit puberty yet
Heard ya girl left without a word, said she’s had it w/ Geek
Fuck Therapy. That’s a Cold Shoulder that could have Shumpert back in a week
Dog it’s over, done…you need to hang it up & ignite the evidence
Cuz ya career is a Charging Mike Brown….in a room full of White Supremacists
When it comes to females, it’s a known fact you get the worst play
Last time a bitch Blew Out 12 was w/ friends & family on her 11th birthday
You talk a big game, but ya verses? Even you know they’re ass
You’re nothing more than a Honda..cuz ya loud as fuck but goin nowhere fast
We’re on opposite sides of the spectrum, so please don’t post no more
My verses Pinpoint hot lines…yours are like searching for one on the ocean floor
You’re a nobody. Even to ya family ya just a Number, bet they scorn you hard
So it’s funny how they wanted you murdered in Cold Blood just to Warm their Hearts
If you're Sick I got the perfect Remedy for the kind ya seekin
But when the Big Hand Strikes 12? Oouuuf. THAT'S what I call the Silent Treatment



12
you'll fail in the finals, surprised you made a champ seed
this time when we see Eric choke, there won't be a black man yelling "I can't breathe"
battle rap I paved the route, jaw breakers save ya mouth
this is my hood, drops'll make your structure fall apart worse then Hushs neighbors house
I got no remorse for victims, don't try me with chivalry
when I have you showing up in a box at your parents door step, like some Chinese delivery
you don't get pussy homie, this faggits seen titties once
women don't only give you the cold shoulder, they give'em drakes after a diddy punch
your a faggit an bitches hate him, that's facts for you kid
women push Genocide cuz he's more worried about dudes jerking off then that nigga is
this vets weak, punchesll make a home in ya chest deep
how they'll ruin your air control, could ruin the flights in London for the next week
your a drug addict, il give ya fist til your face is swollen
he's known as Ricky Henderson of the hood for how much base he's stolen
you came on a transmission, an honestly I hate fags
think you've got drive to Kia dope verse, this'll remove ya steering & break pads
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Old 12-18-2014, 09:19 AM   #6
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Heard ya girl left without a word, said she’s had it w/ Geek
Fuck Therapy. That’s a Cold Shoulder that could have Shumpert back in a week
When it comes to females, it’s a known fact you get the worst play
Last time a bitch Blew Out 12 was w/ friends & family on her 11th birthday
You’re a nobody. Even to ya family ya just a Number, bet they scorn you hard
So it’s funny how they wanted you murdered in Cold Blood just to Warm their Hearts
If you're Sick I got the perfect Remedy for the kind ya seekin
But when the Big Hand Strikes 12? Oouuuf. THAT'S what I call the Silent Treatment

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you'll fail in the finals, surprised you made a champ seed
this time when we see Eric choke, there won't be a black man yelling "I can't breathe"
battle rap I paved the route, jaw breakers save ya mouth
this is my hood, drops'll make your structure fall apart worse then Hushs neighbors house
I got no remorse for victims, don't try me with chivalry
when I have you showing up in a box at your parents door step, like some Chinese delivery
your a faggit an bitches hate him, that's facts for you kid
women push Genocide cuz he's more worried about dudes jerking off then that nigga is
this vets weak, punchesll make a home in ya chest deep
how they'll ruin your air control, could ruin the flights in London for the next week



Got 12 by one quote. The nameplay bars were the best of the battle. Big Hand Strikes 12, eric choke, genocide were all dope. Good finals y'all
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Old 12-18-2014, 11:17 PM   #7
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With a name like that, who could think this dude is a threat
I’m not sure if he just likes that number or this faggot hasn’t hit puberty yet
weak
Heard ya girl left without a word, said she’s had it w/ Geek
Fuck Therapy. That’s a Cold Shoulder that could have Shumpert back in a week
nice lol
Dog it’s over, done…you need to hang it up & ignite the evidence
Cuz ya career is a Charging Mike Brown….in a room full of White Supremacists
ok
When it comes to females, it’s a known fact you get the worst play
Last time a bitch Blew Out 12 was w/ friends & family on her 11th birthday
ok
You talk a big game, but ya verses? Even you know they’re ass
You’re nothing more than a Honda..cuz ya loud as fuck but goin nowhere fast
not really feelin it
We’re on opposite sides of the spectrum, so please don’t post no more
My verses Pinpoint hot lines…yours are like searching for one on the ocean floor
same as above
You’re a nobody. Even to ya family ya just a Number, bet they scorn you hard
So it’s funny how they wanted you murdered in Cold Blood just to Warm their Hearts
nah
If you're Sick I got the perfect Remedy for the kind ya seekin
But when the Big Hand Strikes 12? Oouuuf. THAT'S what I call the Silent Treatment
ok

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you'll fail in the finals, surprised you made a champ seed
this time when we see Eric choke, there won't be a black man yelling "I can't breathe"
lotb
battle rap I paved the route, jaw breakers save ya mouth
this is my hood, drops'll make your structure fall apart worse then Hushs neighbors house
ok
I got no remorse for victims, don't try me with chivalry
when I have you showing up in a box at your parents door step, like some Chinese delivery
ok
you don't get pussy homie, this faggits seen titties once
women don't only give you the cold shoulder, they give'em drakes after a diddy punch
lol
your a faggit an bitches hate him, that's facts for you kid
women push Genocide cuz he's more worried about dudes jerking off then that nigga is
lol
this vets weak, punchesll make a home in ya chest deep
how they'll ruin your air control, could ruin the flights in London for the next week
ok
your a drug addict, il give ya fist til your face is swollen
he's known as Ricky Henderson of the hood for how much base he's stolen
good
you came on a transmission, an honestly I hate fags
think you've got drive to Kia dope verse, this'll remove ya steering & break pads
kinda weak


felt like 12 came a bit more consistent a line or 2 that i was feeling more./ good shit to both regardless.

v/12
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Old 12-19-2014, 02:04 AM   #8
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Schumpert - clever
White supremacist - funny

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I cant breathe - lotb
Genocide - sweet

This was a solid battle. Not sure how it ended up here but i'm glad it did, this shouldnt be getting slept on. I read this battle twice. Not sure i could guess who either of who you two are but either way. Your both capabe of performing in the big lights and stepping up. I have 12 edging this out in a close one.

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Old 12-19-2014, 03:48 AM   #9
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This was cool. I got 12 with better overall impact. Deaded at the genocide line. Generic had a okay verse closer was alright but wording wise the whole verse could have used some more tlc.

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Old 12-20-2014, 01:36 PM   #10
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When it comes to females, it’s a known fact you get the worst play
Last time a bitch Blew Out 12 was w/ friends & family on her 11th birthday
You’re a nobody. Even to ya family ya just a Number, bet they scorn you hard
So it’s funny how they wanted you murdered in Cold Blood just to Warm their Hearts
If you're Sick I got the perfect Remedy for the kind ya seekin
But when the Big Hand Strikes 12? Oouuuf. THAT'S what I call the Silent Treatment

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battle rap I paved the route, jaw breakers save ya mouth
this is my hood, drops'll make your structure fall apart worse then Hushs neighbors house
I got no remorse for victims, don't try me with chivalry
when I have you showing up in a box at your parents door step, like some Chinese delivery
your a faggit an bitches hate him, that's facts for you kid
women push Genocide cuz he's more worried about dudes jerking off then that nigga is
this vets weak, punchesll make a home in ya chest deep
how they'll ruin your air control, could ruin the flights in London for the next week


V/12, this was a dope finals, both had some shit, i think 12 had the harder hittin quotes
this is a close one but he had one more quote that took it imo, both did there thing.
enjoyed the read, props to both.
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Old 12-20-2014, 02:07 PM   #11
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generic

openers ok
cold shoulder obv avg
mike brown cool
candles ok. only gripe is the blew u out. part. blew you out isnt sexusl innuendo
cold blood ok
closer ehhhh ok

consistent verse

notjing bad nothing jaw droppin either




12

open dope
hush ok
chinese delivery ok
Genocide ether
closer eh passable


both real consistent

thot 12s haymakers wete considerably stronger tho


v/12

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Old 12-21-2014, 08:09 PM   #12
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Cold blood n twelfth bday

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Didn't like kia base n Chinese delivery...Evrything else was dope.


Kinda one sided honestly.



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