02-17-2020, 10:45 AM | #1 |
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I wanna fuck me like a cannibal
Welcome to my private hell. There's no one to fight now, enjoy myself. I'd rather drown than ask for help. I wish I was someone else. Mr. Perfect, Ms. Construed. Lead the way, follow through. You probably hate me, I do too. You're so much like me I feel sorry for you. But I think you're pretty, pretty sure. You will profit, you will get hurt. I eat my words they taste like dirt. I'm only ashamed because I know what it's worth. Find my comfort inside blame. Shove my pride back down my face. My worst habit's waking up at least once a day. Balance barefoot on a needle heaven's just a jump away.
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02-17-2020, 11:07 AM | #2 |
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Burn Fetish - Eyedea & Abilities
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02-17-2020, 11:16 AM | #3 |
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02-17-2020, 11:39 AM | #4 |
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Sorry dude i just thought you might like that Eyedea track
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02-17-2020, 12:27 PM | #5 |
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02-18-2020, 01:32 AM | #7 |
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I liked this for the content, too short though. And needed more multies instead of single rhyme sounds. Liked the kinda switch of tempo/scheme towards the end.
Im feeling the name as a play on a trent Rezner track, and gotta sort of abstract music vibe.. when you mention 'think your pretty' i subconciously think of the sex-pistols, and when you talk about 'hurt' my mind goes to Johny Cash. Maybe it was intended maybe not, might be some I missed even |
02-20-2020, 07:15 PM | #8 |
rhyme capsule.
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ms.construed was clever. i liked that.
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02-21-2020, 11:38 PM | #9 |
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02-22-2020, 08:23 PM | #10 |
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I can relate.
Wish was longer though. Cool piece. |
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