OFFICIAL SINACOG OPEN MIC THREAD - Page 22

Adverse · 02-02-2020, 11:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Plot

Your so terrible at this craft. You honestly suck and should do something else.
Your like the shit kid at the skate ramp thats been going down for 5 years and
still cant drop in, and everyone makes fun of. I mean your past being sarcastic
about you dont take on any feedback or help and I dont think you even read anyone
elses work. Look at the column of I's on the left side of your verse! Your shit.

I do agree with plot that you need to slow down and actually read the feedback people give you, you need to also read around the open mic forum and study the style of other writers and reconstruct your writtens because in a more positive note i do like your subject matter, it's unique, do i think you can expand your reach outside of biblical topics and references? Yes i do, I'm wrapping up a collab between us that took you in a different route then you're used to. It's doable and i think you need to stop being so repetitive, the repetition adds nothing to the piece, you obviously have a wide vocabulary so dig out some more unique words out of the vault. I think you could be dope but you need to refine your craft big time. Keep pushing

Sinacog · 02-03-2020, 04:50 AM

Poisonous serpent; worthless serpent from emerald green grass
I am the serene sun; the gashes of lashes from a staff of swords
I am the accord of war; the sword of tusk from the suns of time
I ascend darkness and light with solemn and shrine; the conquer of wine
I am the fire in the belly of the beast; I am the eon in the universe
I killed a million angels with a golden halo; than sang in tongues
I am the solemn demon; gleaming from the suns of time
I am the shrine of Holy Spirit; gleaming suns torture spirits
I am the singing of demons; the offspring of Baal
I killed a zillion angels with the sun of claw

Sinacog · 02-04-2020, 08:06 PM

German dog bark; bit off more than I could never chew; swallow
I murdered the 'thou shall not murder commandment'; when I took my blade; and stabbed etching
I ended existence; when I grabbed my blade; and killed the entire world population
I hid in a German submarine during war world 3; than shot a blitzberg missile at Adolf Hitler
I'm the general seargent; taught Socrates a lesson with the bible
I'm the demon that seas worship; the golden calf worships me
I am Adolf Hitler; stole his gene pool; than drowned him and a jew in the liquid
I ripped Juliet's heart out; when I shapeshifted to Romeo during Shakespearian times
I'm the omniscient zing; prostrate to the sun to give It PTSD
I killed the entire world population in the afterlife; with a knife I used to cut the cake
I traveled back in time; SAW Adolf Hitler annihilating the jews; than committed genocide on the German population
I am legislation; the democrat forcing republicans a banana wearing a cross and a red bandana
I'm the cross between a angel and demon; I am a Demi-god
I quenched water from cloud nine; stole Saint Peter's face mask
If you fight me; travel back in time; you were burning in hell with the sun's rays
I am a Alien; we are all homosapiens; I am a homosapien Alien with a UFO sighting; my vehicle

Sinacog · 02-06-2020, 01:37 AM

I am the planet destroyer; the planet flower on a nebula of planets
I am granite; etching stone from gray boulders and alabaster stone
Monoliths prostrate to Obelisks; yellow dragons incinerate to ash
Eons are white stars torturing demons in the black sky
I am a demi-god; a golden ashram rod of light and plight
I sought for golden planets of stars; planets made of gold
Planets made of water; planets made of silver; planets of alabaster
I quenched laughter from a ravine from a planet of liquid gases
I am the wrath of a scorpion and dragon; I am the demon of light
I am the black darkness; the black light of white light
I am the demi-god from the ninth dimension; I am the light of sconce
I am the planet of spirit; a holy spirt from the valves of hell

Pharaohs Army · 02-06-2020, 01:49 AM

Onyx master; onyx rapture; obelisk; monolith; alabaster; demon
Dueling swords; daggers; magic potions; Hitler screaming
Tropical fish eating sharks; Seraphim halo; guardian serpent
Guardian serpent; guardian serpent; guardian serpent
I tortured a trillion angels with waterboarding; then they respected me
I stabbed a demi-god demon with a daffodil
I am an orange sky; the sky you see before you die!
Icey river; I shattered a rainbow to smithereens and then ate the skittles
So therefore you can call me chicken little!
Fox in the henhouse; fox in the henhouse; fox in the henhouse
Alabaster stone polished and then the blade sharpened on the alabaster
I am an angry serpent with a sissing tongue and green eyes
Fish trapped under the icey pond until I killed Hitler and then the pond froze and I built an obelisk on it
Obelisk; hope you missed; I am dope and SO IS THIS

Bodey · 02-06-2020, 05:10 AM

Lmao

Sinacog · 02-07-2020, 03:22 AM

Paved assassin with assassin cross heirs/airs; toss air in the sky
I am the stye of righteous thorns; I'm alone in a home
Silence the throne of a zebra from the skeet of a caterpillar
I'm the anvil that crushed Daffy Duck; laughing stuff
The tyrant warlord; the broad sword from war world 3
I killed zillions of assassins from the armed robbery of bugs bunny
I'm in a league of my own; capture the throne
I'm in a zone with chrome guns with knife blades the size of lotion
I'm the assassin from the ways of light; save the night
I'm a ghost from the ghost ship that split the ghost in half
For I am a assassin with a sword from the swords of light
I killed millions in a fight with assassin waves of might
The source of light; shine the sky; shine the night
For I am the abrasion; assassin from the air of the throne

Kill a iguana; I'm a alligator from the Darth Vader star; armed assassin that charmed molasses/
Bottled glasses; the armed silencer of rage; my rage is silence like a mice in a cage/

The warlord with a broad sword; capture scorn in a crown of thorns; the silence of mammoths/
I am a planet; the granite stone of a heart of gold; the gold star from the wishes and prayers of Saints/

Sinacog · 02-07-2020, 03:29 AM

Angel Harp; angel heaven; angels in the sky and moon
Angels of the light; angels of the light; angels of the might
Angels of the plight; the demon was blinded by a yellow halo
I am a angel from heaven's gates; the meditate of heaven's gates
I am the thorn of light; the source of light; the bluest sky
The ice of light; the bond between good and evil; the deceitful steeple
I am the night sky; the ice of life; the bond between good and evil
I am the bond between stars and light; the bond between the light and life
For I am a angel and demon; meditating in heaven's gates
I levitate to heaven's gates; educate the destined grace
For I am a angel with a halo; a golden halo
Hear the golden trumpets playing from a symphony of angels

Sinacog · 02-08-2020, 12:13 AM

Basilisk king; the candor of fling; kiss the ring
Zing from the bowels of hell; melting hell
I killed thousands of demons in hell with a scimitar
I am the czar from the demon scimitar of red lust
I am destiny; the sheik of light and life
I am the destiny of faith; holding grace
I am the light of life; the destiny of wonder
I am a sheep of God; holding rod
The night evening light wisp in darkness
In a dark catharsis I am heartless
I am the centurion; the holder of destiny
The destiny stone; the destiny sheik
Holder of destiny; kiss the zing
I am a flower in the harbor spring
The bowels of hell hold hell's scimitar
I am the giant from Goliath's tongue; sea the sun
I am the light of life; the holder of destiny
The belly of the beast is my recipe

Sinacog · 02-08-2020, 02:55 AM

The eye of scorn; righteous horns; basilisk king
Eye of the nether dimension; the water tears of liquid
I am the maker of heaven; the maker of destiny
I am the bible at heart; the spirit of the holy spirit
I am the eye of scorn; the shrine of thorns
I am the Holy Spirit; gleaming spirit
I am a heart of gold; the heart of stone
I am a four headed dragon from the rageous oceans'
I am the sheik of light; the gleaming of destiny
I am the king of the Holy Spirit; the king of heaven's gates

Pharaohs Army · 02-08-2020, 02:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

I am the sands of time; the brandywine
I am a black raven; Cawing at demons and infidels
Sinister spells; rusty dagger for the children of hell
Serpent tongue sissing in a hollow log
Eating foul and rabbits in the dreary fog
Angelic wind blowing in the heavenly sky
Dark catharsis. Dark catharsis. Dark catharsis.
I am a white dove soaring above the eagles and hawks
I am a sly hunter, staking out the quail and fox
I possess a nine millimeter which bulges out of my pants
I am a demon-worshipper who engages in rituals and chants
Sissing serpent. Sissing serpent. Sissing serpent.
Rusty dagger for the children of hell
I am deaf for I do not listen well
Tournament at noon in the high square
I'm there! Signing up for the gamesmanship
Winning it all with my penmanship
Red fox kills the sissing serpent as the black raven watches
The black raven holds many memories of the hunt
It was born a runt, and his mother was a cunt

Sinacog · 02-08-2020, 03:59 AM

Worshipper of Baal; the psalm one; gleaming sun
Sea the sun; worship the blue sky; red ember skies
I am the sconce of light; the harbor of night
I am a demon worshipping Baal; seaing the sun
I am a demon; the demon of wrath and laugh
I am a demon; the demon from the gleaming sun
I am the offspring of rage; the plummeting of snakes
I am the sconce of light; the destiny of eye
For I am a gleaming light; shinning bright
I am the worshipper of Baal; the shine of shrine

Sinacog · 02-08-2020, 05:20 AM

The King; embellishing time; the shrine of time
I am divine; the king from the depths of sea
I am a shrine; the divine king from God's realm
I killed thousands of demons with a shrine
I am God; I worship the moon in the gallows of hell
I am the sun; the horses reign for the sun
I am a demon; a demon from the gallows of hell
I am a demon; a demon of white light
I am a demon; I am rageous' as seas
I am a demon; the demon of light

Exis · 02-08-2020, 08:12 AM

I am I am a little bit on repeat
I am I am a little bit what he thinks...

Bodey · 02-08-2020, 08:30 AM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=15nNY7uofNw

Fast forward 45 seconds into this video and that’s how I read what you post

Exis · 02-08-2020, 08:41 AM

Lmao...Sister girl gettin' rep when I'm off my phone, priceless B.

Vapeo · 02-09-2020, 01:41 AM

Lmfao what is this shit

Sinacog · 02-09-2020, 01:55 AM

Solomon's urn; solomon's apprasial; the isles of infinity
I am solomon's urn; the grandmother clock turns for clockwork
Solomon's urn; solomon's ashes; solomon's urn
Solomon's sun; solomon's sun; solomon's wave
For solomon was a wise king; who sought the sun
My grandmother used plants to hug the sun
I love my grandmother; she is solomon's urn
I love Solomon; he is as wise as spring
For Solomon loves my grandmother; for believing God
Solomon burns in the ashes of my grandmother; God

Vapeo · 02-09-2020, 02:00 AM

Nigga its 2 am u good bro?

battle me bro

Sinacog · 02-09-2020, 03:15 AM

I am Baal; the stone of death; stone is petrified
Gibraltar's rock shines brightly as a star in the sky
The planet earth was born from the universe; the earth
Baal is a demon from hell; the hell of hell
I sm s demon from hell torturing Baal; the journey of fire
I killed thousands of scorpions with a scimitar
Blades of fortune; blades of scorching; blades of flames
Blades of fortune; blades of scorching; blades of flames
For I am Baal; a fire breathing demon dragon
I killed a thousand suns with water from the ocean'

02-03-2020, 04:50 AM	#422
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Poisonous Serpent Pt.3 Poisonous serpent; worthless serpent from emerald green grass I am the serene sun; the gashes of lashes from a staff of swords I am the accord of war; the sword of tusk from the suns of time I ascend darkness and light with solemn and shrine; the conquer of wine I am the fire in the belly of the beast; I am the eon in the universe I killed a million angels with a golden halo; than sang in tongues I am the solemn demon; gleaming from the suns of time I am the shrine of Holy Spirit; gleaming suns torture spirits I am the singing of demons; the offspring of Baal I killed a zillion angels with the sun of claw

02-04-2020, 08:06 PM	#423
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Poisonous Serpent Pt.4 German dog bark; bit off more than I could never chew; swallow I murdered the 'thou shall not murder commandment'; when I took my blade; and stabbed etching I ended existence; when I grabbed my blade; and killed the entire world population I hid in a German submarine during war world 3; than shot a blitzberg missile at Adolf Hitler I'm the general seargent; taught Socrates a lesson with the bible I'm the demon that seas worship; the golden calf worships me I am Adolf Hitler; stole his gene pool; than drowned him and a jew in the liquid I ripped Juliet's heart out; when I shapeshifted to Romeo during Shakespearian times I'm the omniscient zing; prostrate to the sun to give It PTSD I killed the entire world population in the afterlife; with a knife I used to cut the cake I traveled back in time; SAW Adolf Hitler annihilating the jews; than committed genocide on the German population I am legislation; the democrat forcing republicans a banana wearing a cross and a red bandana I'm the cross between a angel and demon; I am a Demi-god I quenched water from cloud nine; stole Saint Peter's face mask If you fight me; travel back in time; you were burning in hell with the sun's rays I am a Alien; we are all homosapiens; I am a homosapien Alien with a UFO sighting; my vehicle

02-06-2020, 01:37 AM	#424
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Poisonous Serpent Pt. 5 I am the planet destroyer; the planet flower on a nebula of planets I am granite; etching stone from gray boulders and alabaster stone Monoliths prostrate to Obelisks; yellow dragons incinerate to ash Eons are white stars torturing demons in the black sky I am a demi-god; a golden ashram rod of light and plight I sought for golden planets of stars; planets made of gold Planets made of water; planets made of silver; planets of alabaster I quenched laughter from a ravine from a planet of liquid gases I am the wrath of a scorpion and dragon; I am the demon of light I am the black darkness; the black light of white light I am the demi-god from the ninth dimension; I am the light of sconce I am the planet of spirit; a holy spirt from the valves of hell

02-07-2020, 03:22 AM	#427
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Daffy Duck Paved assassin with assassin cross heirs/airs; toss air in the sky I am the stye of righteous thorns; I'm alone in a home Silence the throne of a zebra from the skeet of a caterpillar I'm the anvil that crushed Daffy Duck; laughing stuff The tyrant warlord; the broad sword from war world 3 I killed zillions of assassins from the armed robbery of bugs bunny I'm in a league of my own; capture the throne I'm in a zone with chrome guns with knife blades the size of lotion I'm the assassin from the ways of light; save the night I'm a ghost from the ghost ship that split the ghost in half For I am a assassin with a sword from the swords of light I killed millions in a fight with assassin waves of might The source of light; shine the sky; shine the night For I am the abrasion; assassin from the air of the throne Kill a iguana; I'm a alligator from the Darth Vader star; armed assassin that charmed molasses/ Bottled glasses; the armed silencer of rage; my rage is silence like a mice in a cage/ The warlord with a broad sword; capture scorn in a crown of thorns; the silence of mammoths/ I am a planet; the granite stone of a heart of gold; the gold star from the wishes and prayers of Saints/

02-07-2020, 03:29 AM	#428
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Angel Harp Angel Harp; angel heaven; angels in the sky and moon Angels of the light; angels of the light; angels of the might Angels of the plight; the demon was blinded by a yellow halo I am a angel from heaven's gates; the meditate of heaven's gates I am the thorn of light; the source of light; the bluest sky The ice of light; the bond between good and evil; the deceitful steeple I am the night sky; the ice of life; the bond between good and evil I am the bond between stars and light; the bond between the light and life For I am a angel and demon; meditating in heaven's gates I levitate to heaven's gates; educate the destined grace For I am a angel with a halo; a golden halo Hear the golden trumpets playing from a symphony of angels

02-06-2020, 01:49 AM	#425
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Onyx master; onyx rapture; obelisk; monolith; alabaster; demon Dueling swords; daggers; magic potions; Hitler screaming Tropical fish eating sharks; Seraphim halo; guardian serpent Guardian serpent; guardian serpent; guardian serpent I tortured a trillion angels with waterboarding; then they respected me I stabbed a demi-god demon with a daffodil I am an orange sky; the sky you see before you die! Icey river; I shattered a rainbow to smithereens and then ate the skittles So therefore you can call me chicken little! Fox in the henhouse; fox in the henhouse; fox in the henhouse Alabaster stone polished and then the blade sharpened on the alabaster I am an angry serpent with a sissing tongue and green eyes Fish trapped under the icey pond until I killed Hitler and then the pond froze and I built an obelisk on it Obelisk; hope you missed; I am dope and SO IS THIS

02-08-2020, 12:13 AM	#429
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Basilisk King Basilisk king; the candor of fling; kiss the ring Zing from the bowels of hell; melting hell I killed thousands of demons in hell with a scimitar I am the czar from the demon scimitar of red lust I am destiny; the sheik of light and life I am the destiny of faith; holding grace I am the light of life; the destiny of wonder I am a sheep of God; holding rod The night evening light wisp in darkness In a dark catharsis I am heartless I am the centurion; the holder of destiny The destiny stone; the destiny sheik Holder of destiny; kiss the zing I am a flower in the harbor spring The bowels of hell hold hell's scimitar I am the giant from Goliath's tongue; sea the sun I am the light of life; the holder of destiny The belly of the beast is my recipe

02-08-2020, 02:55 AM	#430
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	The Eye Of Scorn The eye of scorn; righteous horns; basilisk king Eye of the nether dimension; the water tears of liquid I am the maker of heaven; the maker of destiny I am the bible at heart; the spirit of the holy spirit I am the eye of scorn; the shrine of thorns I am the Holy Spirit; gleaming spirit I am a heart of gold; the heart of stone I am a four headed dragon from the rageous oceans' I am the sheik of light; the gleaming of destiny I am the king of the Holy Spirit; the king of heaven's gates

02-08-2020, 03:59 AM	#432
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Worshipper of Baal Worshipper of Baal; the psalm one; gleaming sun Sea the sun; worship the blue sky; red ember skies I am the sconce of light; the harbor of night I am a demon worshipping Baal; seaing the sun I am a demon; the demon of wrath and laugh I am a demon; the demon from the gleaming sun I am the offspring of rage; the plummeting of snakes I am the sconce of light; the destiny of eye For I am a gleaming light; shinning bright I am the worshipper of Baal; the shine of shrine Last edited by Sinacog; 02-08-2020 at 05:17 AM.

02-08-2020, 05:20 AM	#433
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	The King The King; embellishing time; the shrine of time I am divine; the king from the depths of sea I am a shrine; the divine king from God's realm I killed thousands of demons with a shrine I am God; I worship the moon in the gallows of hell I am the sun; the horses reign for the sun I am a demon; a demon from the gallows of hell I am a demon; a demon of white light I am a demon; I am rageous' as seas I am a demon; the demon of light

02-08-2020, 08:12 AM	#434
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I am I am a little bit on repeat I am I am a little bit what he thinks...

02-08-2020, 08:41 AM	#436
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Lmao...Sister girl gettin' rep when I'm off my phone, priceless B.

02-09-2020, 01:55 AM	#438
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Solomon's Urn Solomon's urn; solomon's apprasial; the isles of infinity I am solomon's urn; the grandmother clock turns for clockwork Solomon's urn; solomon's ashes; solomon's urn Solomon's sun; solomon's sun; solomon's wave For solomon was a wise king; who sought the sun My grandmother used plants to hug the sun I love my grandmother; she is solomon's urn I love Solomon; he is as wise as spring For Solomon loves my grandmother; for believing God Solomon burns in the ashes of my grandmother; God

02-09-2020, 03:15 AM	#440
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	Baal I am Baal; the stone of death; stone is petrified Gibraltar's rock shines brightly as a star in the sky The planet earth was born from the universe; the earth Baal is a demon from hell; the hell of hell I sm s demon from hell torturing Baal; the journey of fire I killed thousands of scorpions with a scimitar Blades of fortune; blades of scorching; blades of flames Blades of fortune; blades of scorching; blades of flames For I am Baal; a fire breathing demon dragon I killed a thousand suns with water from the ocean'