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Old 02-12-2020, 03:18 AM   #1
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Old 02-12-2020, 11:37 AM   #2
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You've got some explaining to do, rape accusations are exceeding the hundreds
Dude's such a purvey guy like me oughtta make it my business to start feeding him punches
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Old 02-12-2020, 07:43 PM   #3
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No need for low blows, I'll show what I can do with both hands
These fist...quick n clean to rip habit out like I passed a 12 step program
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Slechtq dominated with the addiction line

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Old 02-13-2020, 11:46 PM   #5
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Im going with hab..

"These fist quick n clean to rip habit out" threw me off... Saying ur fist are quick n clean to rip habit out. Is wierd to me.. Liked what u were going for. But for me it didnt hit all like that... Hab had a alright bar.. Perv a guy was alright..enough for the win

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Old 02-14-2020, 01:55 PM   #6
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Sletchq that concept was good. Had you worded it a bit more harsher, could’ve been dope. You took the lazy simile route lol.

Fresh do better broski.

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Old 02-14-2020, 05:23 PM   #7
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I vote you both take an L for this
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Old 02-16-2020, 11:26 PM   #8
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Yeah I got Slechtq his punch was a better to me. I got perv a guy like me.... but it just didn’t hit as hard. Good battle tho
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Old 02-16-2020, 11:33 PM   #10
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Hab always pulling these words out I've got to look up. But i really liked his bar after the research, sletch used a rehash bar that's been done time and time again differently. I'll roll with Hab

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Old 02-17-2020, 12:57 AM   #11
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Winner SLECHT

both had cool lines
going for the crispier punch
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Old 02-17-2020, 05:36 PM   #12
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I much preferred Hab’s conceptually, it was the fresher feeling of the two for sure, but Slecht has the better execution and wording here (with an older feeling concept)

It’s a close battle for that reason, diff pros and cons, the execution was the deciding factor for me in the end so I’m going with Slecht
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Conceptually & wording wise, I’m going Habitat.

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Vote - Hab

Not a clear winner here for me. Changed my vote from Hab to Slech to Hab. Didn’t like Hab’s set up but there wasn’t much wrong with it besides it being too generic. Slech’s concept was too simple and didn’t have the other intangibles to lift it.
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I usually fuck with Slechtq but ive got Hab pretty clearly here tbh

Perv a guy like me is actually quite smooth if you're saying it correctly and conceptually it's a way better attempt....multi and set up were cool

Habit just been done a bunch of times...flip was cool enough but rip out habit seems like weird delivery to me in the context of the punch

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Alright I read this early when I woke up.. and thought I’m not voting in this because it’s too close.. there was one other battle like this... and I read it twice since...

Both of the wording was slightly mixed and jumbled up both pretty good concepts although I’m sure used before... both on the same level, there isn’t a clear winner really

But I’ve got to pick slet as the winner it was just a little cleaner... but again hard to choose
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