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Old 08-11-2016, 01:24 PM   #1
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We used to talk, eat, and love to be together
Now all you do is stalk, cheat, and monitor the screen forever
Wishing upon my next move, stfu man you don't even let me text you!
Somethin I need to get off my chest dude, techs groove..u can get sumthn off ur chest too!
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You had a smile like Wayne Brady, until you put me on trial like Tom Brady
I peeped you peepin her! Twas way shady, you even lied about it & said ur eyes lazy
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Old 08-11-2016, 02:34 PM   #2
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Old 08-11-2016, 04:37 PM   #3
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Did not like much, if any, of this at all.

Thanks for the read!
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Old 08-11-2016, 04:50 PM   #4
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That's bullsht and ou know it @PancakeBrah
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Old 08-12-2016, 08:01 AM   #5
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Utterly gay. Don't ever tag me again.
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Old 08-18-2016, 01:40 AM   #6
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Wow, this was mad okayish. Keep writing
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Old 08-24-2016, 06:35 PM   #7
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literally lold when you said that your eyes lazy.
this was an interesting take on a piece for around here.
pretty cool introduction, the lines seemed well crafted
thought you could have fared better with more lines.
kind of reminded me of something.....especially after the ~1~...
that seems ....odd
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This was alright to me, it could have been better

add more spice would be cool
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Old 04-15-2020, 04:26 AM   #9
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It's better than what Robranda would write...
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Old 04-15-2020, 01:16 PM   #10
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Leave it to Roro to sniff out a 4 year old post from someone named "I <3 dick"
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