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Old 04-16-2016, 09:06 PM   #21
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I mean, yeah...not much to be said that hasn't already been said.

Except for I think it was NYC who said you're overrated...Nah, you're rated exactly as you should be.
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Old 04-20-2016, 09:21 AM   #22
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The best thing about reading old work like this, personally, is to be able to pick out individual portions that make me remember my life at the time it was written.

Every word is like an item in a capsule.

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Old 04-20-2016, 07:41 PM   #23
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i mean, i agree with that, the usually forgotten sentiment encapsulated in rhyme form - evokes a sort of nostalgia. that familiarity or re-remembering kind of thing. though rarer, i personally enjoy reading back old work and coming across segments that make me think 'man, what the fuck was i on right then? that was some shit. poetry.' because i genuinely don't know, sometimes, how i even wrote stuff. there's folly in that question, though, i'm trying to capture something that would forever elude any sort of net. trying to vocalize the most intrinsic of feelings - tapping into shit from the ether. it doesn't happen a lot when i read back old work but when it does i feel a way i can't express.

but yea this was good.

oh also split i would say the best reason to write is to write, y'know.

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