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Old 11-27-2018, 05:53 PM   #1
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THE POLICE SENT 12
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The Police’s Verse:


Ayo,

Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told
Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole
Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies
Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless
We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin'
Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner
Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure
National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit
We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit
Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer
Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire

Dispatch we have a 1-8-7...
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The Firefighters Verse:


Fuck 12.

They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack.
Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black.
Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods.
I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods.
Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame.
I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame.
Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition.
You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description.
You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub.
My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up.
Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making.
It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon.
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Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told
Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole
cool I like it
Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies
nice again
Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless
We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin'
alright
Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner
Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure
mmm not feelin this one
National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit
We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit
ok, don’t like how you ended it tbh
Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer
Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire
lol cool

3 nice
2 ok
1 Miss

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They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack.
Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black.
nice, good real life personal reference
Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods.
I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods.
mmm decent here
Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame.
I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame.
decent again
Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition.
You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description.
lol alright
You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub.
My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up.
lmao
Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making.
It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon.
this is good


3 nice
1 ok
2 Decent


Dope battle here. Very impressed with both verses here and I’m glad you guys made good use of the gimmicks and dissing your opponent. Really tough call for me but I have the Firefighters taking it slightly due to not having any clear misses as opposed to the police having 1, and firefighters used some better personal references I feel. Again, close call and I can see it going either way tbh.


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Vote - firefighters

Didn’t like either writer’s set ups. Ff had better concepts and execution of them.
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Old 12-02-2018, 01:12 PM   #9
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Fuck it. Don't matter now given the amount of voters lol. I got police I personally enjoyed it a bit more.ill be honest though shits so close fire deserve it just as much. Cool showing both
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Ayo,

Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told
Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole
Cool
Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies
Cool again
Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless
We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin'
Aight
Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner
Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure
Aight
National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit
We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit
I dig it
Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer
Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire
Cool

Dispatch we have a 1-8-7...
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Fuck 12.

They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack.
Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black.
Cool
Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods.
I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods.
Cool
Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame.
I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame.
I dig it
Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition.
You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description.
Tight
You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub.
My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up.
Tight
Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making.
It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon.
Cool

Firefighters for the more consistent verse
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Hi...

Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told
Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole
This was cool but couldve been worded so much better...
Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies
same thing as last line...
Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless
We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin'
Wasnt really a punch...
Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner
Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure
I liked this...
National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit
We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit
I didnt like how this was worded...
Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer
Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire
This was cool...

Overall your verse was cool but wording took the sting out of a few of your lines...

They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack.
Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black.
This was cool...
Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods.
I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods.
I liked this...
Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame.
I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame.
This was cool but rhyme scheme was somewhat simplistic...
Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition.
You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description.
This was nice...
You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub.
My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up.
this was good too...
Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making.
It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon.
This was ok...



I think FF was more consistent here...

Vote- FF...

Bye...

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Ayo,

Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told
Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole

Okay, kind of predictable with the poles concept I guess, could be way better

Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies

id have maybe done “when the smoke clears” but not terrible. hated the use of ‘bodies’ as it’s just overdone in text now to me

Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless
We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin'

i like it, ur best idea so far

Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner
Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure

felt the idea could have been utilised better than just ‘standard procedure’ at the end, better wording could have made more of it and added sting. it wasn’t horrid or anything, it just felt like it needed something more maybe?

National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit
We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit

Nah, too statementish for me tbh. I get the 911/ 9/11 thing but it’s not creative enough and didn’t have enough to it to hit

Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer
Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire

Again, simple concept really, could have been flipped better. Axe to ur back isn’t really anything. Not feeling

Dispatch we have a 1-8-7...
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Fuck 12.

They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack.
Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black.

Nice opener to lead off

Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods.
I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods.

Lol good follow up line to the last

Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame.
I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame.

Cool, maybe could have been worded more harshly but I liked it

Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition.
You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description.

This felt similar to the job requirements one to me tbh, both in wording and execution here, which is fine but it’s prob best to have variety between punches save the format feeling stale, you know?

You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub.
My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up.

looool much better here

Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making.
It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon.

Kind of basic at the end, pretty straightforward line to come up with if I’m honest
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Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies
Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless
We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin'

vs

They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack.
Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black.
Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods.
I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods.
Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame.
I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame.
Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition.
You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description.
You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub.
My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up.
Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making.
It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon.

fuck w/ FF more. More consistent.

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