Fuck Y'all...

Exis · 06-23-2018, 07:52 PM

Ayo,

I've better moves than you maneuver with, your losin' grip
loosen shit up with Metamucil if
Your stuck when droppin' like bowel movements is
I've a balcony you can fall from son, or get pushed on over
Might as well just launch yourself off of the roof then & have Hell pull you closer
Literally get downwards with this, minus any hands held out to assist
Any kid thinkin' that goin' South be the route to make them undoubtably sick
Is a clownin' ass bitch...
Your so not where I wanna be
Stuck in a line behind freaks, alcoholics & fuckin' fiends
Claimin' a welfare cheque
"Next Please! Your here for Health Care yes?"
"Wait, what? Nah...I'm a mod on Netcees
Just wanna say I've got a job now so these benefits is not what Zelph needs!"
All the fuck that Ex sees on this forum is how he a poet
I don't write poems you faggots only rawness & every coward here knows it
I leave the depressed emo rhymes to BB, Dull & Black
Stuck in their little fuckin' cul-de-sac
Figurin' out which alias to use on upcomin' tracks
Whilst rubbin' each other's back
& wrinsin' suds off of the balls from Bags for rep,
Is a cunt like act.

2tripple0 · 06-24-2018, 08:21 PM

Hmm... i feel that way too sometimes but really bro netcees is like one a the best places on the net to drop verse rhymes er whatever..... but i get it its frustrating.... so is life bro.... i wish i could help you man.... sorry if you think im weak cause im not hard enough but look at the world man most people aint hard just deal with it good for you for being hard i guess....

Exis · 06-24-2018, 11:37 PM

?

Inno · 06-25-2018, 05:45 PM

The bags line was the best line of the verse. Props

Exis · 06-30-2018, 03:14 AM

Gracias....

Pharaohs Army · 06-30-2018, 11:54 PM

I'm not really sure why you felt like taking a shot at BB, Dull, and Black

Exis · 07-03-2018, 12:41 AM

'Cause I can faggot...

Pharaohs Army · 07-03-2018, 01:53 AM

Gotcha. So you're basically saying you have an attitude problem? Lol

Na man you can write whatever you want it just seemed out of left field. Cul de sac is a good rhyme there i guess.

Exis · 07-03-2018, 03:54 AM

Of course I've an ADDitude problem, I'm ADHD...the whole board knows this...where you been? Besides livin' under some rock.

Elemental P · 07-04-2018, 04:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Exis

Ayo,

I've better moves than you maneuver with, your losin' grip
loosen shit up with Metamucil if
Your stuck when droppin' like bowel movements is
I've a balcony you can fall from son, or get pushed on over
Might as well just launch yourself off of the roof then & have Hell pull you closer
Literally get downwards with this, minus any hands held out to assist
Any kid thinkin' that goin' South be the route to make them undoubtably sick
Is a clownin' ass bitch...
Your so not where I wanna be
Stuck in a line behind freaks, alcoholics & fuckin' fiends
Claimin' a welfare cheque
"Next Please! Your here for Health Care yes?"
"Wait, what? Nah...I'm a mod on Netcees
Just wanna say I've got a job now so these benefits is not what Zelph needs!"
All the fuck that Ex sees on this forum is how he a poet
I don't write poems you faggots only rawness & every coward here knows it
I leave the depressed emo rhymes to BB, Dull & Black
Stuck in their little fuckin' cul-de-sac
Figurin' out which alias to use on upcomin' tracks
Whilst rubbin' each other's back
& wrinsin' suds off of the balls from Bags for rep,
Is a cunt like act.

Really dug how u started this off with the manuaver grip line. Like the flow and the multis we're cool. You're better than you lead on to be. Some grammar and shit needs to be worked on b.c that can affect the flow for readers, if ur doing audio it's lil different. Nice flow and imagery thru out and the grammar I'm talking bout, like that Zelph line I had to read a couple times to catch the flow right. But not bad man I'd be down to text collab in the future if u wanted

Mr. Faggot · 07-04-2018, 05:44 PM

I got bars verizon, sprint to the mic going globel
Trailor park flow trying to boost my mobile
Home that is...str8 white trash
9 milli blast...fast..get cash n dash
Like gas stations..vito got em hating
Hands tight. ....masturbating
Aggravate the nation...with sick flows
No dough...but still pull hose
Vito niggaaaaaa

ACTIVATE SELF · 07-06-2018, 03:32 PM

Lmao

Yeah, all the disses were out of left-field. But funny, nonetheless. I enjoyed this. Not the most lyrical or complex piece of literature to be sure, but entertaining and worth the read. You're a riot, Ex. Keep at it.

06-23-2018, 07:52 PM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Fuck Y'all... Ayo, I've better moves than you maneuver with, your losin' grip loosen shit up with Metamucil if Your stuck when droppin' like bowel movements is I've a balcony you can fall from son, or get pushed on over Might as well just launch yourself off of the roof then & have Hell pull you closer Literally get downwards with this, minus any hands held out to assist Any kid thinkin' that goin' South be the route to make them undoubtably sick Is a clownin' ass bitch... Your so not where I wanna be Stuck in a line behind freaks, alcoholics & fuckin' fiends Claimin' a welfare cheque "Next Please! Your here for Health Care yes?" "Wait, what? Nah...I'm a mod on Netcees Just wanna say I've got a job now so these benefits is not what Zelph needs!" All the fuck that Ex sees on this forum is how he a poet I don't write poems you faggots only rawness & every coward here knows it I leave the depressed emo rhymes to BB, Dull & Black Stuck in their little fuckin' cul-de-sac Figurin' out which alias to use on upcomin' tracks Whilst rubbin' each other's back & wrinsin' suds off of the balls from Bags for rep, Is a cunt like act.

06-24-2018, 08:21 PM	#2
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Hmm... i feel that way too sometimes but really bro netcees is like one a the best places on the net to drop verse rhymes er whatever..... but i get it its frustrating.... so is life bro.... i wish i could help you man.... sorry if you think im weak cause im not hard enough but look at the world man most people aint hard just deal with it good for you for being hard i guess.... __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

07-04-2018, 05:44 PM	#11
Mr. Faggot Banned Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 390 Accomplishments - Is a Faggot Champed - WiFi Waste of Space 2018 - Throat Gymnasts 2018 - No Gag to Waste 2017 - Forever Home Alone Rep Power: 0	Bars Bars Bars I got bars verizon, sprint to the mic going globel Trailor park flow trying to boost my mobile Home that is...str8 white trash 9 milli blast...fast..get cash n dash Like gas stations..vito got em hating Hands tight. ....masturbating Aggravate the nation...with sick flows No dough...but still pull hose Vito niggaaaaaa

06-24-2018, 11:37 PM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	?

06-25-2018, 05:45 PM	#4
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	The bags line was the best line of the verse. Props

06-30-2018, 03:14 AM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Gracias....

06-30-2018, 11:54 PM	#6
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	I'm not really sure why you felt like taking a shot at BB, Dull, and Black

07-03-2018, 12:41 AM	#7
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	'Cause I can faggot...

07-03-2018, 01:53 AM	#8
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Gotcha. So you're basically saying you have an attitude problem? Lol Na man you can write whatever you want it just seemed out of left field. Cul de sac is a good rhyme there i guess.

07-03-2018, 03:54 AM	#9
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Of course I've an ADDitude problem, I'm ADHD...the whole board knows this...where you been? Besides livin' under some rock.