WK 8: Championship:Jabari Black 5-2 vs. Blue Bayou 5-2 - Blue Bayou WINS!

[Incredible]

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@Jabari Black @Blue Bayou

[Jabari Black]

Gun bars?

Lol jk. 16 - 20.

[Blue Bayou]

Sent 18 gluck JB

[Jabari Black]

Lemme grab that extendo

[Jabari Black]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Dyna had some cool attack lines and creative concepts (tho too many for only 5 bars)

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Some cool concepts, miss incredible, muff and inc on his back were all cool... wayy too many attack / gun bars tho

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

too many gun/attack bars in a row

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Really fucking OD'd on gun bars and attack lines tho imo, i guess an entire verse of em is acceptable nowadays but it would be nice to see a variation in punchlines here or there..

LMAOOOOO GUESS WHATS COMING BITCH...

12 gage! You’ll need CPR to revive you after it dump through ya vest/
Even the medics got gun bars...telling each other ‘they gotta pump on ya chest’/
I won’t miss when this pole shoot. I put the inf beam on it then smoke you/
I’m pac man with the laser...this ‘dot’ll turn ya ghost, Blue’/
Catch you on wedding day letting the weapon spray...the Taurus flare and light ‘em/
U and ya girl’ll ‘see the Judge before the wedding’ - that’s the marriage license/
Weak faggot. You try to run? You’ll get a leg shot when the four ring/
I’ll knee cap em...A ‘Patella split up’ like a Indian family divorcin’/
Nothing tough about him. Machete his throat and let the blade stick out him/
I’ll have his head dangling...His ‘skull’s hanging off his neck’ like Dhalsim/
Ya fiancés a freak nigga. Hit her doggy...I’ll have her reaching back while I deep dick her/
I’ll make her ‘grab the ball’ then ‘throw it back’ to me - that’s a flea flicker/
Im Hey Arnold with the .22 - stretch domes with the little caps when the deuce spit/
Or I’ll bring the HK to ya crib...I got the ‘Heckler at ya doorstep’ like the Stoop Kid/
Let a sig pop em. Don’t give a fuck if you a legend - I’ll stretch a vet/
I got the strap for a big body...squeezing arms like a blood pressure test/
Cut ya stomach open then drag you while ya guts spilling...This is torture, B/
Cops’ll find a body with ‘organs in the background’ like a horror scene/

[Incredible]

Blue Bayous 18:

u see this guys wording last week?! it's like he's working to bore us..
everything he Roti Butchered so fast i thought he was serving us Schwarma
if i'm talkin top 5 in the league of emcees that can smack me back..
TRUST me, i'm only leavin Blacklisted to prove ur wack ass is EXACTLY that
^^not kiddin, ask us to mention the most savage in threads..
we're all 'leavin Blackout'... like every bitches drunk level u've had in ur bed
so don't feed me those lies like ur dick'll grind some booty..
only bitch that's EVER gunna Eye-Black is Icebox from that Little Giants movie
bring on the wife jokes, its fine, call her a tramp w/ keys..
goahead & Dishonour cuz u been doin that to text since u champed the league
u as the champ makes me sick, how bad i'm getting ill is severe..
forget a pollen that shit’s enough to make bees live on for millions of years
kill u in ur own castle when the twin nina's press ya ribs..
i'm 'coming w/ Heat' & runnin those Sticks to ya House like a Tesla Grid
talk's a big game but he's been a gay homo..
9 out, this pussy 'Jets from the Stick' like the old Winnipeg Logo
bow down to the King, the motherfuckin beast w/ the writtens..
or i'll dump the clip & put more 'Caps to ya Forehead' than the Fetal Position

[DMS]

V/ Blue

Wasn’t feeling Blacks closers,
On the other handed, Blue’s landed for me just fine, especially the closer.
The Blue’s nameplays were cool.

[GUDELJ]

12 gage! You’ll need CPR to revive you after it dump through ya vest/
Even the medics got gun bars...telling each other ‘they gotta pump on ya chest’/
sheesh this was fire, loved the 2nd line wording and unique execution
I won’t miss when this pole shoot. I put the inf beam on it then smoke you/
I’m pac man with the laser...this ‘dot’ll turn ya ghost, Blue’/
i know for a fact you were having trouble creating a punch out of the concept, you just HAD to get it off because the concept was dope and you just didn’t wanna let it get away from you lol. Here’s the thing, the only time the second line is acceptable to be shorter than the first line is if the punch is overall superb. If not then it’s usually gonna fall flat. You had a nice concept here but the second line read too forced to rate this as good. I give you this kinda feed because I can relate
Catch you on wedding day letting the weapon spray...the Taurus flare and light ‘em/
U and ya girl’ll ‘see the Judge before the wedding’ - that’s the marriage license/
damn here’s another one that was definitely a dope concept but the second line wording hurt it. What could have been a 10/10 Punch is now a 5/10. OK here
Weak faggot. You try to run? You’ll get a leg shot when the four ring/
I’ll knee cap em...A ‘Patella split up’ like a Indian family divorcin’/
kind of a reach for me here tbh
Nothing tough about him. Machete his throat and let the blade stick out him/
I’ll have his head dangling...His ‘skull’s hanging off his neck’ like Dhalsim/
overall this was ok, wording and flow a bit choppy
Ya fiancés a freak nigga. Hit her doggy...I’ll have her reaching back while I deep dick her/
I’ll make her ‘grab the ball’ then ‘throw it back’ to me - that’s a flea flicker/
lol this is decent
Im Hey Arnold with the .22 - stretch domes with the little caps when the deuce spit/
Or I’ll bring the HK to ya crib...I got the ‘Heckler at ya doorstep’ like the Stoop Kid/
alright, the concept is kinda played but this was an ok flip
Let a sig pop em. Don’t give a fuck if you a legend - I’ll stretch a vet/
I got the strap for a big body...squeezing arms like a blood pressure test/
FIRE
Cut ya stomach open then drag you while ya guts spilling...This is torture, B/
Cops’ll find a body with ‘organs in the background’ like a horror scene/
dope on all levels

3 good



Vs



u see this guys wording last week?! it's like he's working to bore us..
everything he Roti Butchered so fast i thought he was serving us Schwarma
lol cool
if i'm talkin top 5 in the league of emcees that can smack me back..
TRUST me, i'm only leavin Blacklisted to prove ur wack ass is EXACTLY that
first line reads really weird, overall bar is OK
^^not kiddin, ask us to mention the most savage in threads..
we're all 'leavin Blackout'... like every bitches drunk level u've had in ur bed
lol good
so don't feed me those lies like ur dick'll grind some booty..
only bitch that's EVER gunna Eye-Black is Icebox from that Little Giants movie
decent here
bring on the wife jokes, its fine, call her a tramp w/ keys..
goahead & Dishonour cuz u been doin that to text since u champed the league
mmm decent
u as the champ makes me sick, how bad i'm getting ill is severe..
forget a pollen that shit’s enough to make bees live on for millions of years
lol ok barcotic this is decent
kill u in ur own castle when the twin nina's press ya ribs..
i'm 'coming w/ Heat' & runnin those Sticks to ya House like a Tesla Grid
nice
talk's a big game but he's been a gay homo..
9 out, this pussy 'Jets from the Stick' like the old Winnipeg Logo
this was cool
bow down to the King, the motherfuckin beast w/ the writtens..
or i'll dump the clip & put more 'Caps to ya Forehead' than the Fetal Position
bit of a stretch, still ok tho, works


4 good



I give more feed to JB on his bars because he’s a growing battler and needs the feed to keep improving. Blue is already a legend and has his wording and style down pat, no need to extensively critique solidly formed bars. Both of these guys each had dope concepts and creative angles, the only difference is that wording and execution is something JB definitely struggled on with a good number of his lines. Blues wording is superb almost always and usually never posts played stuff. You guys are both pretty much tied in quotes and misses but what separates you two is that blue’s verse is a lot more polished and flowed easier. Tough call and I honestly could have voted whichever way but I think blue Edged it.


Vote Blue Bayou

[Barcotic]

Jabari Black
12 gage! You’ll need CPR to revive you after it dump through ya vest/
Even the medics got gun bars...telling each other ‘they gotta pump on ya chest’/
very simple/played-ish concept, not giving it a pass
I won’t miss when this pole shoot. I put the inf beam on it then smoke you/
I’m pac man with the laser...this ‘dot’ll turn ya ghost, Blue’/
i like it
Catch you on wedding day letting the weapon spray...the Taurus flare and light ‘em/
U and ya girl’ll ‘see the Judge before the wedding’ - that’s the marriage license/
dece
Weak faggot. You try to run? You’ll get a leg shot when the four ring/
I’ll knee cap em...A ‘Patella split up’ like a Indian family divorcin’/
no
Nothing tough about him. Machete his throat and let the blade stick out him/
I’ll have his head dangling...His ‘skull’s hanging off his neck’ like Dhalsim/
nice
Ya fiancés a freak nigga. Hit her doggy...I’ll have her reaching back while I deep dick her/
I’ll make her ‘grab the ball’ then ‘throw it back’ to me - that’s a flea flicker/
wtf no
Im Hey Arnold with the .22 - stretch domes with the little caps when the deuce spit/
Or I’ll bring the HK to ya crib...I got the ‘Heckler at ya doorstep’ like the Stoop Kid/
nah
Let a sig pop em. Don’t give a fuck if you a legend - I’ll stretch a vet/
I got the strap for a big body...squeezing arms like a blood pressure test/
fire
Cut ya stomach open then drag you while ya guts spilling...This is torture, B/
Cops’ll find a body with ‘organs in the background’ like a horror scene/
played

3 gd punches
1 jab
5 misses

vs

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

u see this guys wording last week?! it's like he's working to bore us..
everything he Roti Butchered so fast i thought he was serving us Schwarma
good
if i'm talkin top 5 in the league of emcees that can smack me back..
TRUST me, i'm only leavin Blacklisted to prove ur wack ass is EXACTLY that
smooth
^^not kiddin, ask us to mention the most savage in threads..
we're all 'leavin Blackout'... like every bitches drunk level u've had in ur bed
dece
so don't feed me those lies like ur dick'll grind some booty..
only bitch that's EVER gunna Eye-Black is Icebox from that Little Giants movie
miss for me
bring on the wife jokes, its fine, call her a tramp w/ keys..
goahead & Dishonour cuz u been doin that to text since u champed the league
decent
u as the champ makes me sick, how bad i'm getting ill is severe..
forget a pollen that shit’s enough to make bees live on for millions of years
played wp
kill u in ur own castle when the twin nina's press ya ribs..
i'm 'coming w/ Heat' & runnin those Sticks to ya House like a Tesla Grid
cool
talk's a big game but he's been a gay homo..
9 out, this pussy 'Jets from the Stick' like the old Winnipeg Logo
fire
bow down to the King, the motherfuckin beast w/ the writtens..
or i'll dump the clip & put more 'Caps to ya Forehead' than the Fetal Position
dope

5 gd punches
2 jabs
2 misses

v/bb

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

12 gage! You’ll need CPR to revive you after it dump through ya vest/
Even the medics got gun bars...telling each other ‘they gotta pump on ya chest’/
Lol good opener
I won’t miss when this pole shoot. I put the inf beam on it then smoke you/
I’m pac man with the laser...this ‘dot’ll turn ya ghost, Blue’/
Idk if it's been done against Blue specifically, but the concept's been done to death
Catch you on wedding day letting the weapon spray...the Taurus flare and light ‘em/
U and ya girl’ll ‘see the Judge before the wedding’ - that’s the marriage license/
Nahh, had potential tho
Weak faggot. You try to run? You’ll get a leg shot when the four ring/
I’ll knee cap em...A ‘Patella split up’ like a Indian family divorcin’/
Decent
Nothing tough about him. Machete his throat and let the blade stick out him/
I’ll have his head dangling...His ‘skull’s hanging off his neck’ like Dhalsim/
Not rocking w/ this one
Ya fiancés a freak nigga. Hit her doggy...I’ll have her reaching back while I deep dick her/
I’ll make her ‘grab the ball’ then ‘throw it back’ to me - that’s a flea flicker/
OK, nothing special
Im Hey Arnold with the .22 - stretch domes with the little caps when the deuce spit/
Or I’ll bring the HK to ya crib...I got the ‘Heckler at ya doorstep’ like the Stoop Kid/
Lmmaaaaoo
Let a sig pop em. Don’t give a fuck if you a legend - I’ll stretch a vet/
I got the strap for a big body...squeezing arms like a blood pressure test/
NICE!
Cut ya stomach open then drag you while ya guts spilling...This is torture, B/
Cops’ll find a body with ‘organs in the background’ like a horror scene/
Weak closer

versus

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

u see this guys wording last week?! it's like he's working to bore us..
everything he Roti Butchered so fast i thought he was serving us Schwarma
Decent
if i'm talkin top 5 in the league of emcees that can smack me back..
TRUST me, i'm only leavin Blacklisted to prove ur wack ass is EXACTLY that
OK, not hard hitting tho
^^not kiddin, ask us to mention the most savage in threads..
we're all 'leavin Blackout'... like every bitches drunk level u've had in ur bed
Good
so don't feed me those lies like ur dick'll grind some booty..
only bitch that's EVER gunna Eye-Black is Icebox from that Little Giants movie
Lingerie League would've been more effective, bar works well tho
bring on the wife jokes, its fine, call her a tramp w/ keys..
goahead & Dishonour cuz u been doin that to text since u champed the league
Accurate shot
u as the champ makes me sick, how bad i'm getting ill is severe..
forget a pollen that shit’s enough to make bees live on for millions of years
Wording's bland imo
kill u in ur own castle when the twin nina's press ya ribs..
i'm 'coming w/ Heat' & runnin those Sticks to ya House like a Tesla Grid
Sick.
talk's a big game but he's been a gay homo..
9 out, this pussy 'Jets from the Stick' like the old Winnipeg Logo
Clever
bow down to the King, the motherfuckin beast w/ the writtens..
or i'll dump the clip & put more 'Caps to ya Forehead' than the Fetal Position
Mediocre closer

Good battle, JB had a couple of really dope stand-outs, problem is the other bars were 'meh' level. Whereas Blue didn't have any killer haymakers, but was solid from start to finish. Comparing the two VOTE BLUE BAYOU, he was more precise w/ his weapons.