The Alchemy of Anatomy

[UnbornBuddha]

In the middle of creation watch me whistle to laymen the winds that bring changes- initiating the age of literal awakening.
Winds that blow you into a listeners matrix where you become part of the mystical fable contrived of mythical angels
Whose genetic code traces back to the first phonetic note made up, OM- a hermetic old saying that predated all dating.
If everyone is bound to die is a paramedic's soul wasted trying to put a stop to what's inherited through aging?
Perishing is basically assured for those not nourishing their marrow, where all erythropoietin heralds.
I'm not cherishing disintegration my destination is the revelation of cherubim indicators.
My verbatim imperishable & indigestible by even those with the courage of pharaohs, lords of the deserts.
Exorcisms of parasitic ghosts in your intestinal region has a suggestible meaning of an internal fortress with infernal torment.
Sleeping in terrible torture beds causes a muscular guarding in corporeal organisms that haven't learned to ward off sinning.
I've saw more in ten minutes than I have in all of dreaming in the land of ether, where astro projection commands are in you.
My gonads have ripped through fantasies of how the pristine Mona lisa kissed few. Hormones ripple through the man in me.
Transforming sexual fumes seems insanity to those who see tragically the morphing healers whose anatomy is in harmony
Because they don't let their torso think all sporadically, thus their alchemy causes a cease to the hemorrhaging when the planet bleeds.
Microscopically shifting your biology has an effect on the macro cosmic sea of Qi that is misting all psychology.
Sifting all diabolic teams, so as to create a chaotic rift in evil's rule ironically feud over by necrotic seeds that belong to the neurotic prince of chaotic sin.
David and Goliath are myths to those who've existed for eternity inflicted with psoriasis skin, treated with antibiotic creams.
Tyrannic galaxies are lived on by those who haven't opened their thoracic cavities.
Bionic feet will be the future's prosthetic means to move about in the poetic end times.
Using pancreatic enzymes to break open the cancerous capsule that envelops me and battles for control over who will be the master of this body.
Immaculate when the god tree leaves forbidden knowledge patterns on my garments.
Everyday I walk farther from my apartment, as if I'll find the dark matter that I'll then harvest for my hard trek that awaits my heart's quest.
My only request is to have memories of this form, the lunatic me whose spirit was progressively moved when a nurse lost her hope on humanity.
What's attentively metaphysically true in this verse causes no strong vitality.
Yet what's extensively intentionally true in this words causes no dark reality.
I've romantically fashioned too much of conventionality's labyrinth.
Astrologically passing through an oasis already systemically cluttered.
Without trying I've magically answered all formalities asked of me.
This mask of me casts its deeds, but knows not how to sprint through where agony sleeps and weeps, but somehow then I leap.
I'm not a priest, but through lucky means have understood how to surpass its reach.
This country's people run on minimal wages that accrue to a miserable paycheck that makes you only be able to afford vegetables tasteless.
This malnutrition becomes the catalyst of ongoing visceral failure.
And because our Healthcare produces some of the most inhospitable places due to lack of hospital maintenance
We tend to get many dramatically sick tax payers, who see the folly of it all and stop paying.
The visible halo one gets after departing from this world is a residual payment plan that must be paid after one's next physical arrangement.
It orbits one's ethereal formation so as to stream reminders if collections needs more information.
My article mocked because it will soon enough become particle dust.
In the internal heaven of mine I meet Ann Frank and she tells she stills hears the Gestapo's melody, well feared desperado enemies.
I even meet the philosopher Aristotle mindlessly spurting philosophy about his thoughts on the quackery of Nostradamus prophecies.
Imagine living in apocalypse constantly, it will probably cause such high blood pressure you'll get renal pathological tendencies.
No remedies or surgeries will able to disperse the rupturing of a splenohepatomegaly,
Unless one unlocks the metaphysical Sphinx code - hypothetical fallacies that made the Greek tragedy that is Oedipus answer "man is thee answer you seek"
If only he recited mantras that conquered monstrosities, and Antigone's travesties.
Being the great fool I am, please proceed to laugh at me.

[veritas]

Sleeping in terrible torture beds causes a muscular guarding in corporeal organisms that haven't learned to ward off sinning.


Elab

[Half Wit It]

I liked some of your bars..but honestly you went too far with the wording. Spitting dope shit is as much about lyrics as it is about conveying your ideas effortlessly. Some of your material seemed complex solely for the sake of being so. Drawn out at times, even. My advice is disregard unnecessary details. You don't have to break down every bar to its bear essentials. Leaves no wow-factor for the reader. Clearly you have skills. Condense everything.

[DexLabb]

"dope shit" as defined by netcees.co:

A conglomeration of lines that, if shakesphere resurrected from his grave, and was introduced to the new world by iron soloman, thesauras and a soap boxer on a religious pilgrimage, he would non stoppingly jizz his pants for days after reading ur retarted ass poem

[Certain]

Shakespeare is the most influential English-language author ever.

[Zen]

Shakespeare makes more money than Drake every day and he's been dead for almost four hundred years. If Shakespeare did come back from the grave and start rapping, it'd go platinum in a day.

[Witty]

Originally Posted by DexLabb

"dope shit" as defined by netcees.co:

A conglomeration of lines that, if shakesphere resurrected from his grave, and was introduced to the new world by iron soloman, thesauras and a soap boxer on a religious pilgrimage, he would non stoppingly jizz his pants for days after reading ur retarted ass poem

You know Shakespeare was uber mainstream in his day...right?

He was the Drake of his time, to speak in your language.

[DexLabb]

you guys are fucking confused. shakesphere was a fraud. and if he came back as a rapper he would sink the rap game in a nanosecond. he dosent make make money than drake. why are people on me bout drake anyway?

kanye west started off emulating dr dre beats sound for sound when he started. then he slowly branched off to like heart of the city and shit... fools man

[Certain]

Originally Posted by DexLabb

shakesphere was a fraud.

[Vulgar]

This was pretty cool man, a ton of action and active language to get the brain working. Organizationally, it reminded me of Immortal Technique's flow when he gets 'scientific' if you will, but he is less inclined to go for a ubiquitous freewrite and more likely to concentrate on the conceptual impact of every single bar. You pay attention to the cadence only enough so that it keeps the reader's interest - but as a result you don't really leave a lasting flavor in our mouths. I liken it to reading through a National Geographic magazine. It has to be a really good article for me for to involuntarily remember and retain the information I read or the pictures I looked at. I think you should work more on impacting the reader with something and not basing it on trying to impress upon us the sheer bulk of your lexicon.

Bionic feet will be the future's prosthetic means to move about in the poetic end times.
^This line stood out to me, no pun intended. I liked the premise of the idea. Robots are takin' over.

I'm enjoying your presence in this section and it only adds to the richness of the Netcees OM catalogue. Keep doing your thing.

[Zen]

Originally Posted by DexLabb

you guys are fucking confused. shakesphere was a fraud. and if he came back as a rapper he would sink the rap game in a nanosecond. he dosent make make money than drake. why are people on me bout drake anyway?

kanye west started off emulating dr dre beats sound for sound when he started. then he slowly branched off to like heart of the city and shit... fools man

Do you mean to tell me if a guy came back from the dead and started rapping, you wouldn't buy one of his CD's?

[UnbornBuddha]

Thank you all for your feedback. As for the dislike of Dex on the mastery that is Shakespeare, that will abate in time when he realizes his own inadequacies, as we all eventually do.

[DexLabb]

^ more hateful comments coming from the zen master. i thought there was no difference between shakesphere and lil B? were all the same as one right? fuck head

and i wouod buy tupacs album if he came back. like if sceintists ressurected him that would be crazy. even how they emulate him with the 3D tupac.. imagine they made a program that analyzed his lyrics and interviews and created an AI tupac and shit... and interviewed it on CBC.. woah damn. ok im done

[UnbornBuddha]

I live in inadequacy and I realized my inadequacy, but you haven't. And so unaware of being inadequate your unable to transcend your inadequacies. Dao de Jing Chapter 71 says:

There is nothing better than to know that you don’t know.
Not knowing, yet thinking you know— This is sickness.
Only when you are sick of being sick Can you be cured.
The sage not being sick is because he is sick of sickness.
Therefore he is not sick.

"Knowing you know not, is strength -
A high attainment.
Not knowing, yet thinking you know, is sickness -
A dire defect.
Only with knowledge of this sickness as a sickness,
Can the defect be removed.
The Sage has no sickness - no defect.
Recognizing sickness as sickness, defect as defect,
He is free from these curses."

[DexLabb]

i am sick of being sick. and the illness is mediocrity

[Fig]

is a paramedic's soul wasted trying to put a stop to what's inherited through aging?

this was a funny/interesting thought
man, this was dense. but in a good way. you pack a lot of information into a single line, but i feel it makes for a more... idk, colorful read. I dont see the flow as suffering from these extended lines either, if anything it promotes originality, being that your content comes first. And i see what Vulgar means by the immortal technique type flow.

you should stick around, id love to read more

[JESODIST]

Each bar tells a story, you are beyond just lyrical, its deep and complex.
Not many will understand the science between this. Great job

[big baby]

Originally Posted by JESODIST

Each bar tells a story, you are beyond just lyrical, its deep and complex.
Not many will understand the science between this. Great job

slurp slurp

Was decent. Trying confining the lyrics for a more enjoyable, non stretched read.

[big baby]

Also dex, you're bad. Write something, and tag me in it so I could write it more drake-esque and better than you'd write how you write. I can be you, better than you.

[DexLabb]

bro you want to have a drake off?