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11-19-2013, 09:06 PM
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Chillin' like FUCK!!!
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11-20-2013, 01:25 AM
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First verse is recycled. Phone died before rest
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11-20-2013, 08:55 AM
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recycled verse?
i wrote and recorded this song like 2 years ago, the fuck you talking 'bout?
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11-20-2013, 07:32 PM
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Dog.. this joint is fucking doooooope. Loved it. Best are imo was between 3:12 and 3:35 mins. The pick up in tone and flow right there was nasty. Pretty sure I sensed a change there.. altough perhaps only slight it was dope and recognizable. Sick shit here @Badweather
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11-21-2013, 03:43 PM
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dude I liked this joint. you articulate your words a lot. So my only advice would be loosen up how you enunciate your words. it flows perfect, but almost sounds as if youre reading. I know youre not, but you almost sound as if you over enunciate your words. Its nit pick type of critique though son, cause you really have your style on lock and you seem very comfortable behind the mic. So that is a huge huge bonus. Im just trying to offer you some feedback to improve. well done brah.
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