Tic Tac [vs] namesake - TIC TAC WINS

[Tic]

10 lines. Due whenever, I don't really care. @namesake

Voters: Break it down, please. None of this "[Enter name here] won because he had better lines. That's wack.

Good luck, bro.

[namesake]

has to be a minimum of 10 fella!!!...

check, I'll drop soon as, Gl.

[Tic]

Namesake / Scotsman / Dot2dotguy

Guy is still in the closet, though it looks like MC Hammer came out [avy]
So we know smoking cigs ain’t the only time we see a fag in his mouth
Accepting this he sounded ‘so serious,’ more like Heath Ledger to me
He’s the shit? Then I’ll wipe my ass with this ‘Scott’ without givin a fuck, like celibacy
I’ve seen his disses, he’s weak and subpar, to the point where there’s almost no need to respond
It may be my fault for leadin him on…though I tick…he must’ve thought he was the bomb
He’s the type to ask a dude out for a bite and eat off the same plate
So if that happen, I’ll ‘Smashmouth’ n “disconnect the ‘dot’” just for ‘namesake’
Whose takin bets to see how many name flips this lame spits
So I’ll do the same shit but the razor I came wit sees ya veins slit, leavin ‘name’ split!

* Disconnect the dot is a song by Smashmouth

@namesake

[namesake]

had to rush, can't get on tomorrow.... hope it's enough,
...................Gl Mr Rap Royalty


U don't get women on their knee's, STOP!!!, u needa start stepping up ya game
if a bitch put's tic tac in her mouth... it's a sure bet she's freshening up for name
Dudes been on that research tip, STOP!!!, 'n found my RB alias from 2008
& by the looks of things, he also found most of his concepts from around that date
Calling you played's an understatement, s'like me saying I'll put tic tac in box?
but props on being the first lame battler to make me pull out all the STOP's!!!
Man I've had to reword this because of feeding claim's, but it's whatever mods
are you ''serious''ly tryna punch? cuz fo real, even math hoffa doe's a better job
Fool think's ''RR'll body bag NC''? cunt must be retarded?... we'll bust head's
fuck a punch here's a personal, he's rated highly there .................. nuff said!!!!
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[Tic]

@namesake Thanks for editing. What I meant was, I didn't want the DQ win solely from feeding. I did want you to edit, cuz feeding is pretty wack unless you have 2 rounds where each opponent has that opportunity.

Link - http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php...d=1#post154426

[Tic]

@Decibel. Posted another link so we can get to voting.

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php...823#post154823

[Decibel]

@namesake -- Please provide 2 voting links!

Anyways... edited all FP's out and opened for votes.






Guy is still in the closet, though it looks like MC Hammer came out [avy]
So we know smoking cigs ain’t the only time we see a fag in his mouth
Decent opener.. basic and simple but a okay direct personal shot
Accepting this he sounded ‘so serious,’ more like Heath Ledger to me
He’s the shit? Then I’ll wipe my ass with this ‘Scott’ without givin a fuck, like celibacy
This was good...
I’ve seen his disses, he’s weak and subpar, to the point where there’s almost no need to respond
It may be my fault for leadin him on…though I tick…he must’ve thought he was the bomb
Not feeling this to much to be honest
He’s the type to ask a dude out for a bite and eat off the same plate
So if that happen, I’ll ‘Smashmouth’ n “disconnect the ‘dot’” just for ‘namesake’
Creative and pretty cool bar here. The setup was no relevance though
Whose takin bets to see how many name flips this lame spits
So I’ll do the same shit but the razor I came wit sees ya veins slit, leavin ‘name’ split!
Focused to much on the multies here.... the punch was whatever



Overall: I am glad to see a fellow RR member jump on this board... and hopefully stay active. Your top punch was the smashmouth line (creative) and the opener (small direct personal). Otherwise it was a hit and miss. Focus more on your setups to have relevance to the main punch... Don't ruin your punch because you want to show off multi-strings.






U don't get women on their knee's, STOP!!!, u needa start stepping up ya game
if a bitch put's tic tac in her mouth... it's a sure bet she's freshening up for name
I get the NP but it just didn't hit for me. I seen MANY tictac NP's and this is one of the weakest
Dudes been on that research tip, STOP!!!, 'n found my RB alias from 2008
& by the looks of things, he also found most of his concepts from around that date
Good personal here and good shot. Some of his concepts are outdated.
Calling you played's an understatement, s'like me saying I'll put tic tac in box?
but props on being the first lame battler to make me pull out all the STOP's!!!
The setup was approaching a bomb punch.. but then it flattened to me
Man I've had to reword this because of feeding claim's, but it's whatever mods
are you ''serious''ly tryna punch? cuz fo real, even math hoffa doe's a better job
Okay line here... decent jab
Fool think's ''RR'll body bag NC''? cunt must be retarded?... we'll bust head's
fuck a punch here's a personal, he's rated highly there .................. nuff said!!!!
I get where your going and its cool with the self-pride on NC... but RR is a pretty respected site..I'll give you a decent punch here.



Overall: I think majority of your verse (originally) was dependant on the feed. With the edit you stuck a pretty wack punch there. Your setups on some was bomb but then your punch fell flat to me. Your concepts are good but your just not piecing them together for that 'sting' finisher. The TicTac NP was kind of W/e relating it to you and a generic 'ready for me' type of BS. Your best bar was the concept in 2008 theme... that was alright. I get where your going in a closer but RR is pretty respected just saying





Overall vote: This was a tough one and pretty close. Tic Tac came with a somewhat okay verse with 2 good hits, 1 decent and the others were just whatever. Name came with 1 good hit, 1 decent, and rest kind of fell flat after a good setup. Im gonna give this to Tic barely edging this out for a full honest vote. Keep active you two.

[KwaL!ty]

Accepting this he sounded ‘so serious,’ more like Heath Ledger to me
He’s the shit? Then I’ll wipe my ass with this ‘Scott’ without givin a fuck, like celibacy
I’ve seen his disses, he’s weak and subpar, to the point where there’s almost no need to respond
It may be my fault for leadin him on…though I tick…he must’ve thought he was the bomb

VS


Dudes been on that research tip, STOP!!!, 'n found my RB alias from 2008
& by the looks of things, he also found most of his concepts from around that date

Tac was just more polished and more direct.

[namesake]

close this and give win to opponent.. same goes for any other open BA battles I have.

[Sho Money EMG]

Both weren't very solid. I liked tics structure although I felt like he wasn't very direct and most of his bars seemed like they were self generated or somethin out of a freeverse. Okay drop tho just keep elevating.

Namesake, u had some okay punches. Alot of them seemed a bit played, but u def had a solid structure. U were more direct and that's a big part of battling and even tho u had a few weak concepts I feel u delivered w/ ur structure and direction.

Because he had more direct bars that were hard hitting,

Mvgt - namesake

both stay up

[Kscott2]

Guy is still in the closet, though it looks like MC Hammer came out [avy]
So we know smoking cigs ain’t the only time we see a fag in his mouth

EHHH IT WAS AN ALRIGHT OPENER....

Accepting this he sounded ‘so serious,’ more like Heath Ledger to me
He’s the shit? Then I’ll wipe my ass with this ‘Scott’ without givin a fuck, like celibacy

THAT WAS COOL....

I’ve seen his disses, he’s weak and subpar, to the point where there’s almost no need to respond
It may be my fault for leadin him on…though I tick…he must’ve thought he was the bomb

THAT WAS A GOOD LINE RIGHT THERE!!

He’s the type to ask a dude out for a bite and eat off the same plate
So if that happen, I’ll ‘Smashmouth’ n “disconnect the ‘dot’” just for ‘namesake’
Whose takin bets to see how many name flips this lame spits
So I’ll do the same shit but the razor I came wit sees ya veins slit, leavin ‘name’ split!

NICE ENDING TO WRAP IT UP....

Vs


U don't get women on their knee's, STOP!!!, u needa start stepping up ya game
if a bitch put's tic tac in her mouth... it's a sure bet she's freshening up for name

ORIGINAL DISS TO HIS NAME NOTHING SPECIAL....

Dudes been on that research tip, STOP!!!, 'n found my RB alias from 2008
& by the looks of things, he also found most of his concepts from around that date

EHHH THIS WAS WHATEVER....

Calling you played's an understatement, s'like me saying I'll put tic tac in box?
but props on being the first lame battler to make me pull out all the STOP's!!!

LOL THOUGHT THAT WAS FUNNY...

Man I've had to reword this because of feeding claim's, but it's whatever mods
are you ''serious''ly tryna punch? cuz fo real, even math hoffa doe's a better job

HAHAH I LIKE THAT....

Fool think's ''RR'll body bag NC''? cunt must be retarded?... we'll bust head's
fuck a punch here's a personal, he's rated highly there .................. nuff said!!!!

EHHH BAD CLOSER....


Vote: this was a real close battle, I felt like both of y'all could've came with a little more but it was aight.... But the winner to me is TIC TAC

[Ghost1]

Names sake first two lines were better then anything in tic tacs entire verse

Tic tac was played.as.fuck an the.only near hit was.forced....the smashmouth thing


V namesake

[Answer]

Tic, the fag line is kind of played, scott line was cool, but it seems like you kind of threw away the concept mid-bar for another one, bomb line was ehh...disconnect the dot concept was cool - but it was kind of forced. Your closer just kinda seemed fillerish to me

Name, I've seen similar tic tac lines used on him already, concept thing was kind of funny, but too simplistic, stop line was a good concept but could've been worded better, hoffa line would've been a little better if math actually missed, and just having the word "serious" in the line doesn't make it any better. Last line also seemed pretty fillerish to me



Honestly, this is kind of neck and neck. I felt like Tic made more of an effort to actually write legitimate punches with wordplay, but you had some played things and minor botches. Namesake was much cleaner, but in a couple lines overly simplistic. I think at the end of the day, I think the 'Pull out the Stops!' line might have been enough to barely, barely edge it to name. If tic executed the scot line better, I think it would've gone the other way

Vote - Namesake

[Tic]

Just trying to figure out how Namesake wins when it's 3-3....

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by namesake

close this and give win to opponent.. same goes for any other open BA battles I have.

Originally Posted by Tic Tac

Just trying to figure out how Namesake wins when it's 3-3....

i just flipped it by accident

my bad lol you won by forfeit

[Tic]

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

i just flipped it by accident

my bad lol you won by forfeit

Nah fuck that. More votes?