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Old 03-02-2018, 03:13 PM   #1
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Originally Posted by Erron Black View Post
I swear I've got this sewn up, you're the lightest of work.
Got him on pins and needles like people getting high in the burbs.
Cool opener
Leave this bitch in stitches when I'm writing a verse.
While we'd only see Dar' nit in the threads like he's not trying to curse.
Clever wp, a bit corny, tho it's very effective
He's a no-one, and I'm quite sure we're well aware.
We'd only see D.E. put on the map if we're talking 'bout Delaware.
Too simple. Could've been waaay harsher w/ this concept
You'll get stabbed and bladed for your average statements.
Even the crowd'll give him Sighs when a cut leaves his breath exasperated.
Sighs/sais, nothing crazy
Don't even try to start, faggot, you don't make money in a large bracket.
Only way you'd turn a mint on display is basketball with March Madness.
Nice, I like this
Crowd's asking for a raft, cause this man's a frail nerd.
We see even the row's paddling away, you're a Titanic failure.
Decent, again nothibg crazy
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Originally Posted by Darker Ego View Post

When it comes to rap you are like a stand up comedian but without the humor
Rejected lame Fuck your rumors, You are an infection in the game like enormous tumors
Face sudden karma When the serpent is allure, Flowing toxic infecting all the pure
Instead of serving the cure mangle your corpse with a tractor and leave it fermenting in manure
The handsome lord Mentoring your crew, Serve you headless in a stew for the legends and the few
End review, Am a Devil to you, that`ll slice your reputation with A Hanzo sword and sever it in two!!
Ma rhymes on point like thorns in a ***tus, Bombing your status, Devour your world like galactus
You need a whole swat team, countless marines in machines and a thousand special forces to track us
I pound keys like a statistician make you dissappear on scene like a slick Magician
Not a problem on the mission for a liric technician I`ll Solve this kid like a mathematician!!!
In stage, Shine so much A blind ya vision, Counter your love poems with a violent diction
You are hopeless, Misplaced, leave you throatless with a blades after A signed petition
Good flow & a some decent metaphor scattered through out, but you're still not bringing crafted punches. Even if this were a swag & flow match, this verse wouldn't hold up against the best, because there's no structured impact to your rhymes. All random those quips/insults, yet none of them did any damage to your opponent.
VOTE ERRON BLACK I see ER as a possible alias or rusty vet.
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