Cred 1-2 Vs Maximus 1-1 - MAX WINS

Allen Knight · 09-19-2016, 06:27 PM

NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.

& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

@cred

@Maximus

Cred · 09-19-2016, 08:48 PM

Twin 9s n I'm hittin ya stash foo rob u for ur man purse n cash too
Bitch give it up or get these two arms over a pouch thats a kangaroo

@Maximus

Maximus · 09-21-2016, 07:16 AM

Im cutting off your dome, leave you slayed in an act of savagery
Your head will be Foundry Moved like relocating a casting factory

Chemist · 09-21-2016, 11:57 AM

Max cool wp but the wording really hurt the bar
Cred had an ok concept worded a bit better but lacked sting, seem soft to say u are gonna snatch his man purse lol

vote :Max.

Hearder Hearder · 09-21-2016, 12:06 PM

I got Cred here that kangaroo joint was more creative and went hard

Max yours wasn't bad it was cool wordplay but there was nothing special about it imo

Vote cred

Kin · 09-21-2016, 02:23 PM

Cred- twin 9s/man purse 2 arms ova pouch Kangaroo... I like the kangaroo concept.. but the man purse kinda threw me off..If u coulda made that work wit' wallet instead It would be a lil' stronger

Max- Cutting off dome/ head Found Removed/Foundry Moved/ Casting factory...ok.. that was actually pretty creative...wording was kinda awkward, but after lookin' at it, not many other ways to write it that would make it work fa' the relocating part...

this one is close...both set ups bout the same... both wordplay pretty creative... an both had an awkward part...But the whole Man Purse stickin out as a weaker part then Max had

good battle here

Vote - Gladiator Max

Adonis · 09-22-2016, 08:26 AM

Close bout. Kangaroo hit but wasn't a kill strike, a bit soft if I'm honest. Still, it was ok overall with decent play. Meanwhile foundry moving was essentially the same. It hit, but more on a jab level then anything. Max had the better wording and flow, but I did enjoy the depth of cred more.

Close as fuck, truly preference based and is a coin flip inmo

V/cred

A bit more meat in the core of his bar, no homo

2tripple0 · 09-22-2016, 11:47 AM

Yeah i got max as well...was disapointed with the kangaroo concept... felt forced line wasnt natural and max wasnt much better but it was a better text bar by far...otoh cred didnt have an allout badly written bar it was just sorta lame... i mean kangaroo? If i was going to pull out a kangaroo thered be a gat in the pouch.... woulda been doper dont know just felt slightly off.... max wasnt much better but he still did enough to get my vote..

Vote: maximus

Bash · 09-22-2016, 03:20 PM

V-Maximus... Havent seen that before, and it was worded well

Inno · 09-22-2016, 05:33 PM

I liked Maximus creative WP. But I feel creds bar
Had more of that tough feel to it. Tbh max had a
Fresh WP concept it just felt. Little awkward
I just felt like cred dropped a more
Polished bar. Another dope battle

Cred

sral · 09-23-2016, 08:05 AM

cant tell if i like foundry moved or not

seems original enough but seriously think cred could have took this and didnt

i dunno

kangaroo pouch wasnt hard as it could have been

guess im going with Maximus this week

Blanco Bishop · 09-23-2016, 11:51 PM

I feel like a couple of commas would of smoothed out creds bar.
as it is I like it but I think max was much more creative

V max

Pinot Grij · 09-24-2016, 08:36 AM

Vote -- Maximus
Arms wp is getting boring to me. 2nd entry this week with arms wp. Foundry moved is clever and got a chuckle.

Slechtn · 09-24-2016, 01:24 PM

Both had a somewhat similar style...I just wasn't feeling that wordplay Max had here...cool but just didnt seem harsh...cred should have cleaned up the wording on this...didnt like the manpurse reference... i agree with one of the votes above. should have said wallet...this could go either way I feel, but my vote goes to: super

09-19-2016, 06:27 PM	#1
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Cred 1-2 Vs Maximus 1-1 - MAX WINS NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @cred @Maximus

09-19-2016, 08:48 PM	#2
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Twin 9s n I'm hittin ya stash foo rob u for ur man purse n cash too Bitch give it up or get these two arms over a pouch thats a kangaroo @Maximus Last edited by Cred; 09-19-2016 at 09:29 PM.

09-21-2016, 11:57 AM	#4
Chemist Try this shit Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: uninhabitable Posts: 365 Battle Record: 5-11 Rep Power: 0	Max cool wp but the wording really hurt the bar Cred had an ok concept worded a bit better but lacked sting, seem soft to say u are gonna snatch his man purse lol vote :Max. __________________

09-22-2016, 08:26 AM	#7
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Close bout. Kangaroo hit but wasn't a kill strike, a bit soft if I'm honest. Still, it was ok overall with decent play. Meanwhile foundry moving was essentially the same. It hit, but more on a jab level then anything. Max had the better wording and flow, but I did enjoy the depth of cred more. Close as fuck, truly preference based and is a coin flip inmo V/cred A bit more meat in the core of his bar, no homo __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

09-22-2016, 11:47 AM	#8
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Yeah i got max as well...was disapointed with the kangaroo concept... felt forced line wasnt natural and max wasnt much better but it was a better text bar by far...otoh cred didnt have an allout badly written bar it was just sorta lame... i mean kangaroo? If i was going to pull out a kangaroo thered be a gat in the pouch.... woulda been doper dont know just felt slightly off.... max wasnt much better but he still did enough to get my vote.. Vote: maximus __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

09-21-2016, 07:16 AM	#3
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169469	Im cutting off your dome, leave you slayed in an act of savagery Your head will be Foundry Moved like relocating a casting factory

09-21-2016, 12:06 PM	#5
Hearder Hearder Banned Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	I got Cred here that kangaroo joint was more creative and went hard Max yours wasn't bad it was cool wordplay but there was nothing special about it imo Vote cred

09-21-2016, 02:23 PM	#6
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Cred- twin 9s/man purse 2 arms ova pouch Kangaroo... I like the kangaroo concept.. but the man purse kinda threw me off..If u coulda made that work wit' wallet instead It would be a lil' stronger Max- Cutting off dome/ head Found Removed/Foundry Moved/ Casting factory...ok.. that was actually pretty creative...wording was kinda awkward, but after lookin' at it, not many other ways to write it that would make it work fa' the relocating part... this one is close...both set ups bout the same... both wordplay pretty creative... an both had an awkward part...But the whole Man Purse stickin out as a weaker part then Max had good battle here Vote - Gladiator Max

09-22-2016, 03:20 PM	#9
Bash Barrin' Out Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 577 Battle Record: 16-15 Champed - Fight Night 5 Rep Power: 13649167	V-Maximus... Havent seen that before, and it was worded well __________________ "You thinkin what im thinkin?" - Danson "Aim for the bushes?" -Highsmith

09-22-2016, 05:33 PM	#10
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	I liked Maximus creative WP. But I feel creds bar Had more of that tough feel to it. Tbh max had a Fresh WP concept it just felt. Little awkward I just felt like cred dropped a more Polished bar. Another dope battle Cred

09-23-2016, 08:05 AM	#11
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,255 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	cant tell if i like foundry moved or not seems original enough but seriously think cred could have took this and didnt i dunno kangaroo pouch wasnt hard as it could have been guess im going with Maximus this week __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

09-23-2016, 11:51 PM	#12
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	I feel like a couple of commas would of smoothed out creds bar. as it is I like it but I think max was much more creative V max

09-24-2016, 08:36 AM	#13
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Vote -- Maximus Arms wp is getting boring to me. 2nd entry this week with arms wp. Foundry moved is clever and got a chuckle. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

09-24-2016, 01:24 PM	#14
Slechtn Pay Homage Join Date: Sep 2016 Location: La Luna Posts: 254 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	Both had a somewhat similar style...I just wasn't feeling that wordplay Max had here...cool but just didnt seem harsh...cred should have cleaned up the wording on this...didnt like the manpurse reference... i agree with one of the votes above. should have said wallet...this could go either way I feel, but my vote goes to: super __________________