08-22-2019, 01:51 PM | #1 |
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Rhymehunter
"Words are often seen hunting for an idea, but ideas are never seen hunting for words." - Josh Billings
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Whatever I drop's profound go pick through the lost and found My old stomping ground could stop a crowd with it's awesome sound Like the adjectives we tack on to the words we crown This is my verbal assault, Universe is world re-nouned You're little league as hell nerd, the text I see is hella burnt Last time a seedy-project-read well was by the Witcher 3 developers You going off the rails, skipping all the stairs for the bannister Until you're implored to surrender like Tyrion Lannister Imp-lord-to-surrender; I got to list the facts A song of ice and fire only makes opposites a track Number one in this cast of characters, y'all kept under wraps Like blowing hot wind up your ass I'm the topic of the draft Top pick of the draft; You never could make it near You thought I leveled the playing field the way I demo'd the game in here Plus I made beef feel like it could maybe heal The stakes are real but I pre-fur cajun-meals like baby veal It may reveal you're pasture prime if you can't record a rhyme But text is a source of pride that grown men hold inside So you can say you don't care but it's a bold faced lie If you didn't care you wouldn't share, this toll takes time I just hit thirty five, I'm nearing old age guys Your blank mind couldn't write a full page high Can't supply manpower to save words from demise Funny how in a talent rich division unskilled labor multiplies They say the hills have eyes but until grass dies I will fertilize mine and rebuild them blind Now I can seize the day on any given night Sometimes you have to be dead wrong to make sure you're living right Heed advice, most agree I'm not Jesus Christ But I approach every post like it's my last, believe what you like Thinking I bite ain't awful news it's a compliment dude You got the proof? Shoot me a link in here like John Wilks Booth A tortured youth, the first-person-shooting playing Borderlands 2 Reef-fining my methods like the coast guard, I've got no coral with you Now laymen say, "That's not how you pronounce quarrel you goof" All the while I just smile and say, "according to who?" You claim orange is the new black but I doubt I'm that racist I bet you made Neo not-see-ties like agents outside the matrix My style's radiating, I get what Chernobyl intentions be Yet giving all your time and energy won't make you an online celebrity You fall to pieces like confetti, I'm not a cyber nerd in the least I got what I deserved so I don't know Wyatt hurts like The Fiend Learn the ropes from me, the more you know the less you need I won't ref you G's, you'll count me out but never get to three We in the same boat refugees, and few plan to leave Humanity is a huge manatee in a blue tantric sea Teaching seven deadly sins cuz I'm John Doe by choice Screaming heaven let me in but I lost most my voice Masking moods with opioids, We Happy Few take no joy And when bills vary I got pills-buried to make dough boy Most avoid their nature until the poison blossoms Cuz like soiled gardens the fruit of their looms are spoiled rotten You stay on the defensive but when you're met with offense... Ya press charges like the media's rush to a press conference It's nonsense, this constant miasma is causing my asthma I imagine you'll be stuck with that image like pausing a plasma Before y'all can exact revenge- - Unmask the Unabomber, I target all you and mark my spot too But that's part and parcel with the art I drop dude Outshot two D.C. snipers, that doesn't make me gloat For every killer's name you know there's a dozen names you don't I'm just a random bloke who poked holes in some panty hose Way before Joseph D'angelo broke into family's homes Planned to expose genealogy sites when blood lines appeared I'm an underdog nights-talker like what Son of Sam hears You're all objects in my mirror, I'm flat out bludgeoning careers Now let's make this abundantly clear... Ted Bundy is here So you'll never come across-hairs like Zodiac's aim symbol It's the modern day Jack the Ripper versus some backpage listers In fact that Dating Game killer got carried away quicker... Than what Gary Ridgway delivered to the banks of the Green River My art be 3-D letters so I'm Darkly Dreaming Dexter There's a spark between confessor and even the hardest police detective I stand corrected like the first scene with Hannibal Lecter With a quicker temper than Ed Kemper when his mom's head was severed I sized you up for good measure, call me Canada's Most Wanted I'm slaving away in the same field Willie Pickton was caught-in Talked with the Boston Strangler, then he dropped his R's so... Each bar be akin to Barbie and Ken, Homolka/Bernardo They taken aback like Buffalo Bill, once cut I may skin them I'm just another Wayne Williams with an underage victim Got that BTK addiction, until my Den-is-Raided I'm complacent Plus I got John Wayne Gacy's body in my basement, I'm just sayin' Taunting agents like Keith Jesperson, every letter has a statement Draw a Happy Face in :)... with Patrick Bateman's imagination I'm like Dahmer or Ed Gein, a cannibal with a can of red bull Charles Manson near a starlets mansion, just another phantom thread pulled And I've come unravelled, guess I should've told you that earlier This is the end of the serial killer and the start of the mass murderer... Uh, where was I? Exact revenge... Yeah that's accurate I have to admit I've had it with all the distractions bitch What's with the italics shit? Your self made prison trapped me in You put your stamp on this but don't have a lick of talent kid Dark passengers cab it in, guard the medicine cabinet That's an expensive habit and your ego is too big to balance it I'm only mentally challenged if I get physically threatened This sickening obsession with killers has me bringing a weapon Came back steel-in-my-thunder like Thor's hammer, where are your manners? There's ample DNA between these pages, and here's the core sample Evidence tampered, I question your answers, you're the one that got away But I take comfort in the fact that I'll never know your name... Are you insane? I wonder... You know I'm game, rhymehunter The wordplay tells me what to do, that's why I smothered my mother I've been wrong before, but how does laughter and slaughter differ? I got a riddle; How do you have a dad bod without a father figure? You thought a criminal mind was original? I believe it never was... But a chain of evidence can restrain even the best of us I was at your wedding chump, hate your new girl but your ex a cute one I have a lot of exes... Cool. Can I execute one? Stupid fuck, I thank God I'm not messed as you son There's no God, just our conscience to confess our screw ups Can't get a new one, play the cards your dealt and ante up Don't you remember when I tied aunty up and drowned the family pup? How can you not understand me? All I did was focus your boredom All the signs were there, it's not my fault you chose to ignore them But how can you be behind my bars if you never spoke to the warden? All that's alive is the rhymes, and I'm a make you postmortem Show's over, complete the page, no one's gonna read this anyway Be that as it may, who else can keep your secret to the grave? But there's people in our way; Evil is live rearranged I'm deleting these conversations; Didn't we just speak the other day? Repeating everything I say, we make quite the parrot seems The buzz you feel when you give to charity is an electric chair to me You fairly close-minded to address me, why would I battle you? Humans are caddle dude, is that something you want to be saddled to? A crazy perspective hides the truth, lazy detectives don't have a clue But when you're facing a life sentence, I guess any paragraph will do... So it's either me or you, let's let the grim reaper choose You mean there ain't room for two? Ha! Peace out dude... See ya soon.
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08-22-2019, 03:10 PM | #2 |
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I’m about 60% through. This is thoroughly impressive simply in its size and scope. Some clever word games and ideas in there too.
Be back for the rest Oh but I really hope this is the last time a human ever uses a “pasture prime” wordplay. Like ever. But deep down I know it won’t be
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08-22-2019, 04:39 PM | #3 |
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I haven’t read yet but Universe is dope
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