ill nik-A (7-2) vs Flossaurus (4-2) - Ill nika wins

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NBL Season 7
Week 15

Due FRIDAY, March 21th

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@ill nik-A @Flossaurus

[ill nik-A]

10
Welcome!

[Clash]

Reign check

[ill nik-A]

I stay lookin fresh cuz I got fat pockets while urs are mere scrawny
If u Floss… then I’m shining so hard my gear comes with an Axe screaming “Here’s Johnny”!
ur verses make my screen buckle its true, those played lines speak volumes of u…
& u can hear cum & defeet cheering in the background if my shit wasn’t on mute
Beating me is not an easy task cuz I’m so great it hurts to waste a verse
How u think u gonna do the job? when ur ‘bare’ existence is not safe for work
make u pay then murk, u’d benefit more from playin lotto cuz Floss is wack
sometimes its better to be lucky than good… ur skills musta had a black cat cross its path
me being a boss is fact, u suck & used to being around crap writtens
When talkin goats I'm in the discussion... U just come from a wack site where that's hidden

[Clash]

Smh, smfh, smmfh,


Ur unwanted & even ur mother admits its a true fact,
Don't even try to step son cause that's where your real daddy left you at,
You all bark and no bite this soft nigga a gimmick,
And if I see ill coming out an animal, it's only at the veterinarian clinic,
You a wimp kid Im flexin showin off and I'll fuck a ratchet's throat,
You don't want to make a tool box, cuz I'll bob weave and hammer down like the nuts and the bolts,
I'll accept a friendly quit but you still get bruised guy,
Cuz at the 'end of the day' I still 'dissed ill' all fuckin night like i was makin 'Moonshine',
This fruitcake is washed up but I'll kill this vets career again,
The only way you makin a comeback, is all on your spine bendin over for ur boyfriend,

[KwaL!ty]

Beating me is not an easy task cuz I’m so great it hurts to waste a verse
How u think u gonna do the job? when ur ‘bare’ existence is not safe for work
make u pay then murk, u’d benefit more from playin lotto cuz Floss is wack
sometimes its better to be lucky than good… ur skills musta had a black cat cross its path

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me being a boss is fact, u suck & used to being around crap writtens
When talkin goats I'm in the discussion... U just come from a wack site where that's hidden
^he is from LA not RB. FAIL!!
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vs


Ur unwanted & even ur mother admits its a true fact,
Don't even try to step son cause that's where your real daddy left you at,
You all bark and no bite this soft nigga a gimmick,
And if I see ill coming out an animal, it's only at the veterinarian clinic
I'll accept a friendly quit but you still get bruised guy,
Cuz at the 'end of the day' I still 'dissed ill' all fuckin night like i was makin 'Moonshine'

^good concepts but horrible wording making these fail!!!!!!!


Vote- Nik better wording and connection & your defeet/cum line connected once he used one lol.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bender]

I stay lookin fresh cuz I got fat pockets while urs are mere scrawny
If u Floss… then I’m shining so hard my gear comes with an Axe screaming “Here’s Johnny”!


vs

nothing that I was feeling

Nik your shit was decent, I didn't really get a few of the punches like the cum and defeet line but the first line was good and there was a few others that were pretty decent.

Floss your shit is way to simple it is just boring, make the punches more complex you are taking old concepts and using them in a way that is not all that effective, work on a set up and a punch to make it more effective

vote-Nik, although not the best verse better than Floss and the first bar was better than any he had.

[CtrlF4]

V/Nik. ..Floss was OK a bit basic...Nik had better wording and execution which is why he gets my vote.

[Greed]

I like dissed ill. The shining line killed that though and that nigga called it that you was gonna use some played shit like comeback lol. I dont know if you did that ironically but shit was corny. Probably should of hammered nails and nutted when you screwed his ratchet also.

V nik

[murda sho]

Floss

I'll accept a friendly quit but you still get bruised guy,
Cuz at the 'end of the day' I still 'dissed ill' all fuckin night like i was makin 'Moonshine',


Nik

I stay lookin fresh cuz I got fat pockets while urs are mere scrawny
If u Floss… then I’m shining so hard my gear comes with an Axe screaming “Here’s Johnny”!


Got it even on the bars that I liked, but Nik's bar was crazy that shit was hot, Floss bar was dope too but at the end of the day the "ill" angle is probably older than Nik himself. So mvgt Nik