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Old 03-15-2019, 04:15 PM   #1
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Just mame it. Murder the Vibe
Curtains Ignite. Cursing. The. Sky...
Your "Assertive" Replys bring Certain demise
Silhouette Serpent Disguise
You feel CHEATED
Ever seen a Real Demon?
I have, she's Still Screaming
3 6 5 Kill Season
Bent eyes tend to trickle towards circular sides
Learning Right, Serving Light.
No Club Tan
Just trying to Tidy up the Soul'§ Dust Pan
Ob Sol Yeet
Its KamiKaze to try to Thaw the Frosting
Of the Lost & Distrout
)Zombie Off Me(
Peep Knowledge Sweetie
Slobbing Treats to LoliPop Beat.
Gotta Breaaaathe.
Write Watery, like to Rap & Cry
Collapse The Sky
End From The Start But I Have To Try
Pen in the Dark cuz That's My Light
I flow With. To get What's In, Out
Somehow Stop my Self from getting Suckered in the Suction-Spout
Poor Old Clowns.. The Portal's Now.
Exit Torn-§ol Town
The Precious Mortal Crown
Sexy Sequence. Seed Quench Freak-Wind-Sea So Deli-cious
Pet-Diety met by Teeth, Vicious Deep Sipid Melody
Mellow Me.
Hello Breeze.
Can't Turn it On / Setting is Wrong
Hella Banging. Stress Knockin through Dress Bottom
SexGoblin's Deadly Facade
Espionage - Regretting it All - often
Head in a Wall. Spent alot of Time Alone
So. My Mind's My Home
It's where I like to Focus Correlations in
Psychic Motion til Coral, Wavey Vibrant Oceans Orchestrates
First Eye Private Opus
Pry it Open
Stuck Like Fuck
Rut of Routine
Well Adjusted? Realm Sucks
Everyone Wants to Bust Through the Seams
Careful. Once you Start an Action,
You haul that Bitch around in your Karma backpack
Bunch of babies wanna Crawl the Planet
Trying to Solve the Panic saying God's the Answer
Y'all Logic-Tranced goofballs like Ross & Chandler
When Reality hit, turn into Britney off her Handler's
Remember. The Devil won't Heal you, only offers Cancer
So keep seeing no evil- blocked by antlers
Sharpen Horns - keep Halo Polished, Sparkly
Call me Sparky sparking broccoli by the little StarKey Anomaly..
Generate Pen Escapes from Planet Fucked
But there's an Attractive Force like when Magnets Touch
That Binds Me to the Land of Dorment §ols that Can't Erupt
S'why I Normally Twist it with Orbiting Crystals & Sorcery Symbols
You sip it but few get it
The News Wicked, dude listen
You Remember they used to Noose "Witches"?
S'not Druidic, Truth's Missing
Too Scripted with Loose Gimmicks
Stuped Mimics
It's Not a Lightning Spark of Divine,
They Rot your Mind in Two Minutes
Musical Eyelids, Kickin Tunes in SUCH Style.
O.K. Captain Candle, how you supposed Flame On when your Wick's Torn
B I G S T O R M
Treacherous.
Administer Exorcism upon Swiveling Head that Spits
Tally whats Holy in the Valley of Dope Beats - Deliver an Exodus
Where you left, suddenly
Is where the Sun Sets Light
Above The Place I Spent The Most Time
And Then A Crow Flies
Seek Peace & Skip Stupor in Obese Beats that Split Woofer
Siriyussss.. You hear a Bark where the Star's Parked?
Harharharrr - you new to seeing? vanish
Card's spark when I Do a reading. Gambit
Your Sources are Wrong
More to it All
Dorothy / Oz
Rabbit Hole
Portal and Fall
Combat Angst with Chants
Command Flame Expand
Still Warming Up
& Dusting Off
What's a little Rain to Man?
Change the Plan
Switch it Up
Long Mazes of Spontaneous Dawn Chases
Mystik Stuff.
Wanna Naughty Up the Ambiance
All Garments please gotta drop
Like you're Palming Some Body Wash
Jew love circling my head with your tongue no Yamika
Suck-Sweating Fair..
Cum. Every. Where. Does my Fuck-TeddyBear Slut-Pet Need Air? Good You're Alive
Strung in the Edging Lair
Phlegm Doctor hung like Pinãta
Trying to get the Sugar inside
Scissor Apron / Stimulation
Since you're Naked
I have to say your Skin is Sacred.
Every. Single. Day.. Tingle-Wave
I Splash in the Elegance
Make my Present a Fly Gift Wrapped in Dumb Bows like Magickal Elephants
Alright, Confession Time, Call the Priest in
All I do is listen to House like the Walls were Speaking
The Sign? Must Not have Peeped it
Says 'No Haunts' in Strobe Fonts
Think they Swiped my Pen for Ghost Chalk
Cuz everytime I Write a Gem it Floats Off
This the Seventh Stage of Seperation spanning Several Nations.
Severed. Aching. Like we're in Separate Ages
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Old 03-16-2019, 02:43 AM   #2
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Can't Turn it On / Setting is Wrong
Hella Banging. Stress Knockin through Dress Bottom
SexGoblin's Deadly Facade
Espionage - Regretting it All - often
Head in a Wall. Spent alot of Time Alone
So. My Mind's My Home

Bruh, Idk wtf is going on in your head but it sure as shit is dark as hell and I love every bit of it. This was beautifully crafted, didn't feel good about the way I quoted it but I liked that section a lot.

Bunch of babies wanna Crawl the Planet
Trying to Solve the Panic saying God's the Answer
Y'all Logic-Tranced goofballs like Ross & Chandler
^Fuck, this shit is one of the dopest lines I've ever read.

Generate Pen Escapes from Planet Fucked
But there's an Attractive Force like when Magnets Touch
That Binds Me to the Land of Dorment §ols that Can't Erupt
S'why I Normally Twist it with Orbiting Crystals & Sorcery Symbols
^Keeping the dopeness up.

Administer Exorcism upon Swiveling Head that Spits
Tally whats Holy in the Valley of Dope Beats - Deliver an Exodus
^Dropping some references I didn't expect in here in a metaphorically cool way.

And the Combat Angst with Chants stuff was cool too, too many quotables in this. Shit is dope from beginning to end imo. Rhymescheme going on and on throughout, reads easily and the flow feels natural, references going wild, deep and dark af here and there, everything I love about an OM-piece. If that OmNom shit is still going I'm dropping one for this.
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