Week 1: Legion (0-0) vs. Frank (0-0) - FRANK WINS 3-2

Adonis · 12-22-2016, 12:21 AM

Legion, you approached this verse smart. You executed in verse form, meaning rapy ish.... But you played with the topic given, making the read comical, which was dope. The dance between hood lingo, connecting the dots using actual bird reference and female (chicken head) reference was done well. You played the fence well. Not sure how your style will translate in the future, but for this week, given you slayed the topic, you did well.

Frank, I struggle reading your shit these days man, I have no clue what it is, but your style is just not for me. I think we're just opposite in all things topical. I liked the whimsical approach for sure, disliked everything else.

V/ Legion

A more fluid read imo, (more simple, but that's neither here nor there) executed topic with precision as well as producing a verse that was on the lighter side of life while still dealing with reality. Good shit

12-22-2016, 12:21 AM	#1
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Legion, you approached this verse smart. You executed in verse form, meaning rapy ish.... But you played with the topic given, making the read comical, which was dope. The dance between hood lingo, connecting the dots using actual bird reference and female (chicken head) reference was done well. You played the fence well. Not sure how your style will translate in the future, but for this week, given you slayed the topic, you did well. Frank, I struggle reading your shit these days man, I have no clue what it is, but your style is just not for me. I think we're just opposite in all things topical. I liked the whimsical approach for sure, disliked everything else. V/ Legion A more fluid read imo, (more simple, but that's neither here nor there) executed topic with precision as well as producing a verse that was on the lighter side of life while still dealing with reality. Good shit __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR