03-23-2020, 07:33 PM | #1 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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King vs Eviscerate - EVISCERATE WINS BY NS, OPEN FOR FEED
PPV Spring 2020 General rules apply DUE: Monday, 3/30 PM verses to @Sharp Pic battles: Post a pic as soon as you're able. Line Limits: 10-16. Can go longer if agreed upon. If no limit is agreed upon, second person must match first person's verse length. @King @Eviscerate |
03-23-2020, 11:04 PM | #2 |
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03-24-2020, 08:43 AM | #3 |
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yeh
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i used to do that here.. Last edited by Eviscerate; 03-28-2020 at 06:00 PM. |
04-02-2020, 11:44 PM | #4 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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Eviscerate's Verse
Attackin a frail queen, this ain't even a male/female thing wont smack her, but this Bitch will get disrespected by a rapper like Gayle, King Head crack after head crack, fag'll get jacked, crackle neck snap tackle, chest smash, impact'll blow him out the water like a jetpack Rather get stacks but instead I'm quarintined up in front of this computer puffin the buddha, wasting my life writing for this fucking loser Potato peeler to ya eyeball, got king crazy twitchin straight incisions, retina rotating position blade scraping away your vision Cinderblock to ya face, queer, whole cranium bruised legs permanently glued to a wheelchair, ya spine-infused with titanium screws/ So stay focused like a gymnast, or something to that tune you'll need dismounting parallel bars just to use the fuckin bathroom Evicerate is that Goon. galactic black moon, tossin bar molotovs large hadron collider ignitor, get us all tossed into a star holocaust I'm on my astrophysicist shit. King is on his Hasbro, like kids with his shit after clappin a clip in his wig, just to make sure he's dead, i'm kicking this bitch.. |
04-03-2020, 06:52 AM | #5 |
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Not punchline heavy but the delivery was slick. You've got a way with words.
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04-03-2020, 07:13 AM | #6 |
low tide in serotonin bay
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Yeah we'll never know how this battle would have ended up since King no showed but this wasn't your average battle verse, had some really strong visuals like the "stripping away his vision" shit was pretty nasty lol overall it was a fun read
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04-03-2020, 08:25 PM | #7 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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Attackin a frail queen, this ain't even a male/female thing
wont smack her, but this Bitch will get disrespected by a rapper like Gayle, King haven't read a lot of king battles so idk if he's seen it, but this is solid for me Head crack after head crack, fag'll get jacked, crackle neck snap tackle, chest smash, impact'll blow him out the water like a jetpack light but reads smooth Rather get stacks but instead I'm quarintined up in front of this computer puffin the buddha, wasting my life writing for this fucking loser Potato peeler to ya eyeball, got king crazy twitchin straight incisions, retina rotating position blade scraping away your vision Cinderblock to ya face, queer, whole cranium bruised legs permanently glued to a wheelchair, ya spine-infused with titanium screws/ So stay focused like a gymnast, or something to that tune you'll need dismounting parallel bars just to use the fuckin bathroom this whole chunk was just a smooth but mean read. would be dope live or recorded Evicerate is that Goon. galactic black moon, tossin bar molotovs large hadron collider ignitor, get us all tossed into a star holocaust I'm on my astrophysicist shit. King is on his Hasbro, like kids with his shit after clappin a clip in his wig, just to make sure he's dead, i'm kicking this bitch.. same idea here. if you recorded this it would be a slick 16. wasn't all that personal, but your opponent was a faceless username who didnt show up so I don't blame you. Good read. |
04-03-2020, 10:45 PM | #8 |
AHHHHHHH
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This was cool... You weren't swinging heavy but you had a few jabs.. flow was cool
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04-04-2020, 01:47 PM | #9 |
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that read smooth af.. good shit
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