Week 13 rankings, chat and predictions - Page 2

Cereal_Killa · 05-19-2014, 04:59 AM

@Certain sertainly..

@vivid
Onion booty -- boo cow

Cereal_Killa · 05-19-2014, 05:25 AM

I once d/l'ed a clip called narcotically yours..
It wasn't porn :(

Frank · 05-19-2014, 09:54 AM

Requesting a topic change

Cereal_Killa · 05-19-2014, 10:51 AM

Hey man if u ce'real..

Then I'm cool wit the change

:)

Cereal_Killa · 05-19-2014, 11:06 AM

Ima b honest talent n perp having two topics is cool..

Why spend the next ten years menstruating cause someone smudge ur pumas..

e11even · 05-19-2014, 02:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Cereal_Killa

@Certain sertainly..

@vivid
Onion booty -- boo cow

LOL

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cereal_Killa

I once d/l'ed a clip called narcotically yours..
It wasn't porn :(

what the hell is that?

Cereal_Killa · 05-19-2014, 02:21 PM

Spirited Away..

Best ever

Vulgar · 05-19-2014, 02:22 PM

Thanks 4 the cool topic.

e11even · 05-19-2014, 02:22 PM

i've heard a lot about it but never got around to watching it.

i'm ashamed. i used to be an avid consumer of manga and anime. i've fallen off.

Vulgar · 05-19-2014, 02:43 PM

Frank · 05-19-2014, 02:46 PM

When pigs fly

e11even · 05-19-2014, 02:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Vulgar

ummmm....? I appreciate the imagination. Especially for the grotesque.

King Ra. · 05-19-2014, 03:58 PM

The fuck is going on in here?

Certain · 05-19-2014, 04:05 PM

That post is vulgar.

Soulstice · 05-19-2014, 06:12 PM

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=337848#post337848

some further insight into last weeks piece^.

if anyone would like to begin a dialogue with me about their own piece, let me know. talking about it would be a constructive way to improve and diagnose your own writing post-battle without fear of swaying.

Adonis · 05-19-2014, 07:48 PM

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Originally Posted by Soulstice

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=337848#post337848

some further insight into last weeks piece^.

if anyone would like to begin a dialogue with me about their own piece, let me know. talking about it would be a constructive way to improve and diagnose your own writing post-battle without fear of swaying.

I see it now, and the fact that they have names should have been a dead give-away. I know JM allowed a line extension, but this is one of those rare cases in which using an additional say, 12 bars, would have enabled you to express more. It was a solid verse, as I said, enjoyable. But it felt like it was missing something in terms of you explaining shit more clearly, I'm saying, I'm obviously not going to admit to being a dumb reader, so it must be ToopicalDood5's fault right?

timeless · 05-19-2014, 09:20 PM

Dropped @Vividlyvague

Certain · 05-19-2014, 09:30 PM

zygote must be dead.

big baby · 05-19-2014, 10:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Certain

zygote must be dead.

good

Cereal_Killa · 05-19-2014, 11:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Frank

When pigs fly

Like it :)

05-19-2014, 04:59 AM	#21
Cereal_Killa Licking Lily's.. Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 706 Battle Record: 11-6 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3565730	@Certain sertainly.. @vivid Onion booty -- boo cow __________________ You think YOU'RE sick I shit cough drops ..

05-19-2014, 09:54 AM	#23
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Requesting a topic change __________________ *VETWORK*

05-19-2014, 10:51 AM	#24
Cereal_Killa Licking Lily's.. Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 706 Battle Record: 11-6 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3565730	Hey man if u ce'real.. Then I'm cool wit the change :) __________________ You think YOU'RE sick I shit cough drops ..

05-19-2014, 11:06 AM	#25
Cereal_Killa Licking Lily's.. Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 706 Battle Record: 11-6 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3565730	Ima b honest talent n perp having two topics is cool.. Why spend the next ten years menstruating cause someone smudge ur pumas.. __________________ You think YOU'RE sick I shit cough drops .. Last edited by Cereal_Killa; 05-19-2014 at 11:09 AM.

05-19-2014, 02:22 PM	#29
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	i've heard a lot about it but never got around to watching it. i'm ashamed. i used to be an avid consumer of manga and anime. i've fallen off. __________________ Ahem.

05-19-2014, 02:22 PM	#28
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Thanks 4 the cool topic.

05-19-2014, 02:43 PM	#30
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317

05-19-2014, 02:46 PM	#31
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	When pigs fly __________________ *VETWORK*

05-19-2014, 03:58 PM	#33
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	The fuck is going on in here? __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

05-19-2014, 04:05 PM	#34
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	That post is vulgar. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

05-19-2014, 06:12 PM	#35
Soulstice native system Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 387 Battle Record: 18-21 Champed - Short-Verse Topical Rep Power: 4453408	http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=337848#post337848 some further insight into last weeks piece^. if anyone would like to begin a dialogue with me about their own piece, let me know. talking about it would be a constructive way to improve and diagnose your own writing post-battle without fear of swaying.

05-19-2014, 09:20 PM	#37
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,627 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341326	Dropped @Vividlyvague

05-19-2014, 09:30 PM	#38
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	zygote must be dead. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.