02-18-2019, 07:10 PM | #1 |
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Ryno vs Cynic CYNIC WINS
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02-18-2019, 08:51 PM | #2 |
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All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint Last edited by Ryno; 02-20-2019 at 08:19 AM. |
02-21-2019, 09:19 PM | #3 |
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02-21-2019, 10:58 PM | #4 |
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02-22-2019, 11:06 PM | #5 |
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the 9? the 5th?
stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half? Last edited by Cynic; 02-22-2019 at 11:33 PM. |
02-23-2019, 12:54 AM | #6 |
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This is a tough one. These brothers put these gun bars straight at each other's dome. I felted the heat from the shots being fired. Ryno had a lyrical stylized flow the can take brothers by storm. Cynic took aim at Ryno and kept shooting and those bullets hit, personals, wordplay (nice). However, in regards to being written in a manner that shows a beast ripping flesh off its meal, Cynic you have been served to the Ryno.
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02-23-2019, 05:47 AM | #7 |
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Pretty dope battle..from both here..a lot of good lines in this one..ryno..the sniper line was very well done..cynic..the hadouken line and reuben line were very well played..its down to preference for this one..but I got to give it to cynic by a smidgeoned..good battle guys..
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02-23-2019, 08:05 AM | #8 |
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useless was light
sniper was a hit, very nice alien was pretty good running start was nice syn co pee dont work at all vs lottery is old af link was a great concept but went a too simplistic route reuben was ok hadoukened ur whole career, ehh it was aight aight Smollet was funny, liked that shit closer was decent solid quick battle, but one had more lines i fucked with vote ryno
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02-23-2019, 10:28 AM | #9 |
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All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns alright Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach alright lolz If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene ok Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy good concept, very poor execution If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start heh, cool Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint aight .. the 9? the 5th? stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery the concept is so fucking good i just don't think it's worded well ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room you mean light up the room? another dope concept n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben lmaooo if this hasn't been used it's cool, well worded too ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career hahaha pretty sick sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit heh ok thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half? pretty meh Ryno was just ok to me here, had a few good lines but it was just nothing special. Cynic overall actually came quite dope to me & blue ball was LOTB for me. cool battle but Cynic go this IMO. v/ Cynic |
02-23-2019, 11:41 AM | #10 |
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All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns Fiya opener Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach lol funny, but light If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene Nice Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy Nice opener If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start This is ok Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint Nice name flip here imo ---------- the 9? the 5th? stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery Wording basic, but this was ok here ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room Nice n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben Lol funny, but extra light here on the hit ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career Lmaoooo hella funny sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit lol I took my smollett bar out this week, but this is coo thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half? This is a ok ender Yooo cynic stepped it up here I see, good read from both. I got Ryno here tho, when he hit it did damage. Cynic had some nice lines and funny ones, but they were light on the damage. V-Ryno
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02-23-2019, 11:42 AM | #11 |
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I've got Ryno here. I liked the 'Smolett' but if idk.. Cynics verse didn't really do much for me. the wording felt lazy? idk
Hadouken line needed something a bit more but was relevant...same as the Ry bred line, imo. closer was ok. Smolett & Hadouken were the highlights Ryno had three hits alien, high jump that sniper line was nicee to me close in bars but i liked rynos as a whole better Vote-Ryno
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02-23-2019, 01:03 PM | #12 |
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All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns solid opener here Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach lol alright If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene wasnt feelin the wording here but it was decent overall Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy kinda light but still ok If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start this was pretty cool Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint nah Vs the 9? the 5th? stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery pretty played here, flip is decent at best ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room gramatically incorrect n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben lmao this is so stupid it’s great ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career i liked this, nice sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit good again, dope thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half? decent closerr Cynic Last edited by Zaddy; 02-23-2019 at 09:46 PM. |
02-23-2019, 01:36 PM | #13 |
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Tbh thought this was mad closer then the votes have gone. Hope others picked up on the rye bread. Very creative name play. Tbh I can see this going either way but I was (bar the opener) left with more of cynics bars in my mind. I think ryno had the execution mind, an it is very close, but I enjoyed the creativity from C. He gets my vote. Felt both had some played bars so I'm not going to hold either to that to keep it fair
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02-23-2019, 03:52 PM | #14 |
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4-3? Pending Zelph's vote or w/e up
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02-24-2019, 08:08 AM | #15 |
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All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns ^^^Nice opener Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach ^^^nahh If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene ^^^good Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy ^^^miss If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start ^^^nope old concept Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint ^^^good concept wordin was soft tho Vs stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery ^^^ehh ok ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room ^^^Nice n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben ^^^ok i did ry bred but this was cool way to flip it ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career ^^^fire sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit ^^^doppee thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half? ^^^solid closer V/cyn, this was a close battle but i think cynic had some nice shit tbh the haduken & smollet lines hit hard imo, ryno had acouple nice bars to but i felt cyn verse was better here tbh, props to both
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02-24-2019, 12:55 PM | #16 |
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All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start Vs stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery ll make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit This was a rly gd match. I'm actually torn on who I want to go for. In the miss depart ryon started losing steam on the second half of his verse after starting off hot. Cynic had more swag & flow wit the punches & bars tho which is what it honestly comes down to. Although cynic misses were a tad bit better. Thank you for the great read guys. V-cyn |
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