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Old 07-26-2017, 08:50 AM   #1
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Old 07-26-2017, 02:47 PM   #2
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Lol..sick of seeing u, OG.
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Old 08-18-2017, 11:14 PM   #4
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u in the champ match losin to the same guy; so why bother, jerk
some say u choke… but that’s only cuz u wearin ya where-the-fuck-is-the-collar shirt
I push weight but I’m careful; cops are what me & my fam avoid
I’m always lookin for growth… but the mole on ya nose got me feeling paranoid
We’ll lack votes cuz u suck; ur verse alone makes this a poor thread
anything associated with u is a failure… even God got an F when he created ya forehead
u don’t gotta gun; ur girl’s weapon’s more deadly so don’t lie, geek
cuz when it comes to ‘her piece’… she raising that shit all the way up to ya right cheek
My shit's hot, only God can listen & help ur loser attempts
every time u lose to me in a champ match u keep ur cool… cuz u just look up & vent
I don't play bitch! don't try, I say shit to ya face kid, no lie
& Ima tell u ur punches are Too light... like I was looking straight in ya eyes
Ya bitch wants love for the evening but she's just a thot I'm mistreating
I tell her just stick to head… like what u'll do with ya beard when u start balding completely
Haven't battled in a month but I got the semi right by the ribs
so yeah, I can be rusty... but that doesn't mean I won't light up ur crib
Netcees tired of u losing, just admit u cannot handle me
cuz I don't need a snap-chat filter... to alienize u from the battle scene
I'm kidding! u a shark in these waters & the hunger got u ready to rip shit
Tell ya, u gotta chance & u'll take the bait... right before I put the hook to ur fish lips
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Old 08-19-2017, 07:11 PM   #5
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Ayo..

OleHead fuck writing & reading threads, u oughta flee instead
looking like u’re heated, mad cuz someone scuffed up ya orthopedic Breds.
Not budging for this cranky curmudgeon, nigga rap’s wack..
w/ a screenshot of him try’na snatch back a lil kid’s cell for abusing SnapChat.
Fr gobbler belly, gave u a no show, so why would u dare me?
but soon it’ll be a wrap, send Goonies thru the trap to clap Mama Fratelli.
Only ONCE ever Igaf in our battles, u’ve never made Me work,
so go ‘head claim it jerk, boast til ya blue in the face - u’ll look like Angry Smurf.
Gritting ya teeth & scour as if u’re not one I to want clash with
but u not bad ass when, that menacing look’s topped by false eyelashes.
I swear u seem to be the scientific dream of a forensics team,
cuz yo dego tee makes it evident u’re a fag, w/ a slash of semen cream.
Rifle ‘bout long as a pool cue, all the tool do is kill or maul foes
so say something fiendish & this stick’ll put an English on yo billiard ball nose.
Testing? NO. Bitch I put on a show when the pressure grow..
..shove GemStars whole, into the stomach rolls of this aggressive treasure troll.
Fool battling u’s just a boredom cure, not a dauntless venture
that thought maybe too much for u to chew, ‘specially w/ ya tiny dentures.
Who’s more quotable? My highlight plays are rarely upstaged,
yo lines’re easy to trace, cuz u’ve got a face same as a connect the dot page.

..BODY!
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Nik

Opener hot.
Nose growth ok.
F line is funny.
herpes line is good - but had a lotta working parts that made it read a coupla times.
Eyes line is aight.
Stick to head line is aight.
Rusty line is ehh.
Wowowowowowow-- alienize line hits fuckkkkkkkin haaaard. Amazing.
Fish lips cool.

vs Schad.

Opener ok.
Snapchat line is cool.
Goonies line is ok?
Lolol @ angry smurf line. That's dope.
Eyelashes line is cool.
Semen cream - ok.
Billiard ball nose -- great construction on the line.
Treasure troll cool writing too.
Tiny dentures funny.
Closer ok.

Line for line this is open to interpretation -- but for me it comes down to alienize line vs. angry smurf line. Ionneven care that Nik meant "alienate" and wrote "alienize" cuz he's ESL. That line was cool.

Vote -- ill nik-A
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Old 08-24-2017, 05:56 PM   #7
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Shad

This was dope. You had some hard hitter in there like the smurf line. The opener was dope. Good way to start. Thought the billiards line was dope too. But you u had it going with a good flow. Just seems like a good number of your lines balanced along the lines of haymakers and "ok cool line, that was dope conceptually". I guess what I'm saying is at times you lacked consistency. Either way bruh outstanding writing here and thanks for showing.

Nik.

Opener was hot. God got an f line was funny and fire. Was feeling the "her piece" line, some dope wordplay right there. Very subtle but affective. Thought the closer was dope, good vibe and flow. Ok so this was usual nik verse packed with wordplay and hard hitting punches. Felt like you kept the consistency in your verse a bit more focused than shad. So yeah this was a dope verse.

Overall

Shad had some dope lines and so did nik. I felt like both went at each other nicely and didn't hold back the punches. I feel like the deciding factor for me would be the Lines in which nik talks about how he's beaten shad multiple times. Has more weight to it yah know. So AMA give this one to nik. Although tbh he barely got, kind of funny he mentioned rust. It showed, he wasn't as crisp with his wording as he usually is. Still enough to take this.


Vote-Nik.


Thanks for showing guys, I don't understand why it took this long but hey you made it. If would of known you guys showed I would of voted sooner.

Thanks again and sorry this tourney didn't have the hype you guys wanted.
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niks whole verse was flames up until like the 1st and 2nd two bars from the end, then the end joint brought it back for me

schad shit waspretty bad in the first few bars. i mean idk i dont even understand what the first three bars has to do with the pic man? wtf not that great.
picked up a little bit but i think he got outclassed either way man, less impactful

nik just utilized the pic way better and shit was more on point for me as far as making contact. i actually lold pretty good through most of his shit




count it or not... i got Ill nik-a here fellaz. good shit
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u in the champ match losin to the same guy; so why bother, jerk
some say u choke… but that’s only cuz u wearin ya where-the-fuck-is-the-collar shirt

☆☆☆☆☆

I push weight but I’m careful; cops are what me & my fam avoid
I’m always lookin for growth… but the mole on ya nose got me feeling paranoid

☆☆☆☆☆

We’ll lack votes cuz u suck; ur verse alone makes this a poor thread
anything associated with u is a failure… even God got an F when he created ya forehead

☆☆☆☆☆ i'm assuming ur referring to the lines on his forehead that resemble an "f", i was going to give this one ☆ until i looked closer


u don’t gotta gun; ur girl’s weapon’s more deadly so don’t lie, geek
cuz when it comes to ‘her piece’… she raising that shit all the way up to ya right cheek



My shit's hot, only God can listen & help ur loser attempts
every time u lose to me in a champ match u keep ur cool… cuz u just look up & vent

☆☆☆☆☆

I don't play bitch! don't try, I say shit to ya face kid, no lie
& Ima tell u ur punches are Too light... like I was looking straight in ya eyes



Ya bitch wants love for the evening but she's just a thot I'm mistreating
I tell her just stick to head… like what u'll do with ya beard when u start balding completely

☆☆☆

Haven't battled in a month but I got the semi right by the ribs
so yeah, I can be rusty... but that doesn't mean I won't light up ur crib



Netcees tired of u losing, just admit u cannot handle me
cuz I don't need a snap-chat filter... to alienize u from the battle scene



I'm kidding! u a shark in these waters & the hunger got u ready to rip shit
Tell ya, u gotta chance & u'll take the bait... right before I put the hook to ur fish lips

☆☆☆☆☆



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Ayo..

OleHead fuck writing & reading threads, u oughta flee instead
looking like u’re heated, mad cuz someone scuffed up ya orthopedic Breds.



Not budging for this cranky curmudgeon, nigga rap’s wack..
w/ a screenshot of him try’na snatch back a lil kid’s cell for abusing SnapChat.

☆☆☆☆☆

Fr gobbler belly, gave u a no show, so why would u dare me?
but soon it’ll be a wrap, send Goonies thru the trap to clap Mama Fratelli.

☆☆☆

Only ONCE ever Igaf in our battles, u’ve never made Me work,
so go ‘head claim it jerk, boast til ya blue in the face - u’ll look like Angry Smurf.

☆☆☆

Gritting ya teeth & scour as if u’re not one I to want clash with
but u not bad ass when, that menacing look’s topped by false eyelashes.

☆☆☆

I swear u seem to be the scientific dream of a forensics team,
cuz yo dego tee makes it evident u’re a fag, w/ a slash of semen cream.



Rifle ‘bout long as a pool cue, all the tool do is kill or maul foes
so say something fiendish & this stick’ll put an English on yo billiard ball nose.



Testing? NO. Bitch I put on a show when the pressure grow..
..shove GemStars whole, into the stomach rolls of this aggressive treasure troll.

☆☆☆

Fool battling u’s just a boredom cure, not a dauntless venture
that thought maybe too much for u to chew, ‘specially w/ ya tiny dentures.

☆☆☆☆☆

Who’s more quotable? My highlight plays are rarely upstaged,
yo lines’re easy to trace, cuz u’ve got a face same as a connect the dot page.



..BODY!
I have Nik taking this comfortably. He had more impactful haymakers while Schad was very inconsistent with subpar material and lame roast jokes. I thought Nik's bars were constructed better as well and were delivered fluently, while Schad struggled in that aspect.

v-Nik
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