16. Plot vs. mayniuhh - (mayniuhh wins)

[Vulgar]

You've been enlisted for an abstract cause.

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@Plot @mayniuhh

Topic:

[Plot]

Ive been abstracted, pic isnt so...
gdluck man

[mayniuhh]

What am I even supposed to do with that?


;)


Check-in.

I will vote on every match right now.

[Plot]

Wtf Im brainless, cant string a setence togher, shameless!
Explian this..a waterfall, its so pretry...im stainless.

[mayniuhh]

I swear to god I thought this site was shut down.


I only need an hour. I am an embarrassed idiot.

(I accept that that this doesn't count.

I D I D I D OH!
(a realist's decomposition)

(stroke)

water, for the sun I thank
once outrankled, splinted:
spear it. Fuck god
fuck hums and Fuck you.
I want two, want to,
for my son's room.

(stroooke)

a cast of iron
states my shapes in place.
my team;
my muscle's subt & muffled memories...
I ate, once, where
they pickled belief.
Sea, old, no blue:
is the image in Greek?
once my organs came together
I's a figure of speech:
tickling beats to cleanse my blood.
I see the noah's omen flood
it's coming (fuck it)
I could clog it with a rock, it...

(stroooooke)

silence

(stroooooooooooooke)

box satan in a dot matrix,
start job (payment)
pull it out filing print, err
(no, that's what
yo stretching liney ass do...)
Who, me (ey yo)
I'm in a foxy sand tomb
noming scotch and cashews.
thus: sculpt us,
punch drunk.
I command u.

(stroke)

"Don't mind me."
"outside..."
"Flip a flame until a beaten street savant dies
then, rinse you brain with seventy degree peroxide..."

(stroooooooke)

You gotta be trust in lovey.
You gotta be trusting, lovey.
and if your brain is soreless,
you'll be finer than money lovey.
the oxygen's rich as McDuck
and nitrogen funny:
the hiccup right before a punch
of flood of klonopin drugging you
out of this mental olympic derivative
in that the innocence is in the

(stroke)

[Clutbuck]

Voting's open on this?

I can't honestly believe that's correct with Plots single couplet. Lol. I'm not even sure why this match is going ahead, Plot at least mentioned a waterfall I guess? Mayni at least mentioned water at the beginning, though I'm not entirely sure what the rest had to do with this. The theme is 'abstract' though, I guess, so maybe that shouldn't put me off so much.

Not a lot to discuss all in all. Shame Plot didn't write because he was always a staple at RW (It was RE with Strongarm etc wasn't it?!)

Anyway, dude is dope, shame he didn't put a verse together for this.

Vote - Mayniuuh

[mayniuhh]

Two things:


I think Plot still needs to input his real submission because he thought i was no showing.

Please look at my submission as... well.... actually a verse and not assume it's a no show verse. I'm not saying it's good or anything, but I absolutely incorporated the pic.

[Plot]

AIght, gimme a 24 fr ext on the wed deadline..

[Woke]

Not sure what's going on here but as this says open for vote I will make it short and if plot is allowed to post more tomorrow I can do a proper vote

One was short as hell

the other was a decent little write up, I actually enjoyed it some. I hate when people say this, but I loved your writing voice, something very somber and poetical about which I thoroughly enjoyed. I didn't give this my full attention as I just wanted this to be a quick vote, but I assume youre talking in first person as you painting this work of art only the two didn't connect as well as they should have. Dope concept, not the greatest execution of concept. Like I said though, I did like the verse as a whole

mania

[Soulstice]

vote mayniuh wtf

bye

[Geno]

lmao...
vote mayniuh. obv