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10-01-2013, 01:19 AM | #1 |
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(S&F) Shogun Dinero vs. SpaceGoat Fart - CHYEAHH WINS
12 bars
due 24 hrs gluck
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10-01-2013, 04:15 AM | #2 |
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10-01-2013, 04:16 AM | #3 |
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Vs spacegoat fart
Storm is ahead - might wanna get under ur friggen bed if u expect to be safe. I caught just a jist of it. & it was just simple luck I left from the place. U know how when ur often conspicuous, & u stuck w/ stress in ur brain. Thats ur bitter friend whos pissed u left & caused a disloyal predictament - now it's fuck whatever he say. Constrained a 'lying more' demeanor, it was seemin, yes.. Indeed fake. So now their very quick to refrain from dialouge between ya, even then - they'd never need Space.. For Petes sake like The Rock, I'm Walking Tall - for my fam & peers. Headed straight for the top, any place or spot I'm hangin across - just shows how - im off the wall like a chandalier. Snuff ur awful broad if she dancing near when I'm standing here. Pansy queer.. Acting very weird - can't u hear? It's like u stuck in some type of frantic fear u can't get clear. U thinking back to when ur trainer told u to take charge, no more clothing from K Mart. Although it's a great jog I suppose don't quit ur day job it's only for eight more. Remember, think ur runnin in front of the ocean in Bay Watch, eating Bolognese sauce. So while I'm blowing a 8 ball - ur at home cuz u gave up.. - musta figured it's easier just hoping for weight loss. This swag an flow is a cake walk, I'm explosive like Napalm. & now I'm mad. Cuz whenever u conspire about some plan, u tend to get out of hand - like throwing a baseball.
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10-01-2013, 09:56 PM | #4 |
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I'm the god of Snf, I find it odd you'd request your death
dog, you couldn't fetch a rep, when you rhyme like "something something etch a sketch" yah multis are a cheap way of having noting to say, this chump's a disgrace tried to take suttin away and was twice removed from the page, couldn't fucking relate mixed with GD Folk n Ginsu whenever I'm stroking the pencil and simulateously finger fuck a virgin with the Vulcan symbol to B E or not to B E? get your existence broken into then broken in 2 bloodless cycles of rage when I recite from a page and leave it soaked in menstrual I'm hot, I've could give Satan lectures, I've broken every Akashic record go in a booth, say my confession, then pay a reverend to kill Mason Betha if we have a problem, check my meat pantry and take the shelf life into note I don't ever forget, meaning I'm always surrounded by beef that never gets old man I've got better shit to do, I've had bowel movements that were more pleasurable I'm freestyling this shit, not to say that.........well yeah fuck it......I'M BETTER THAN YOU be in awe of my crown, here's my setup bar "you can die now" cause this type of key is me popping the trunk, Walter White style
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10-02-2013, 09:33 PM | #5 |
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Chyeahh's verse was better. Nothing dope from either but Chyeahh won due to at least having some umph. Vote Chyeahhh
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02-12-2014, 09:42 AM | #7 |
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My Herald has spoken....
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02-25-2014, 11:57 AM | #8 |
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Gamble yours was pretty good. My complaint is that you tended to ramble then stead of go full force braggadocio, which is more effective for these battles. Good stuff though.
Chyeahhh, mixed with GD Folk n Ginsu whenever I'm stroking the pencil and simulateously finger fuck a virgin with the Vulcan symbol to B E or not to B E? get your existence broken into then broken in 2 bloodless cycles of rage when I recite from a page and leave it soaked in menstrual I'm hot, I've could give Satan lectures, I've broken every Akashic record go in a booth, say my confession, then pay a reverend to kill Mason Betha ^this section was the highlight of the battle. Vote - Chyea |
02-26-2014, 03:13 PM | #9 |
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I liked the end rhymes from both...but need more personals punchlines and nameplays imo
MVGT C.G. for better flow and better end rhymes and schemes |
03-06-2014, 07:54 AM | #10 |
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For Petes sake like The Rock, I'm Walking Tall - for my fam & peers.
Headed straight for the top, any place or spot I'm hangin across - just shows how - im off the wall like a chandalier. vs. mixed with GD Folk n Ginsu whenever I'm stroking the pencil and simulateously finger fuck a virgin with the Vulcan symbol to B E or not to B E? get your existence broken into then broken in 2 bloodless cycles of rage when I recite from a page and leave it soaked in menstrual be in awe of my crown, here's my setup bar "you can die now" cause this type of key is me popping the trunk, Walter White style Cheyeaaa seemed to have the concept of this swag and flow thing down more than gamble. Gamble had that one line that was really cool, but the rest wasn't accomplishing what this battle was meant to accomplish. Cheyaa gets my vote for clearly having more quotables than gamble. v/Cheyaa Last edited by fresh; 03-06-2014 at 08:40 AM. |
03-06-2014, 10:52 AM | #11 |
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Well I don't really like S&F battles and this one was a reason why. To me it is hard to actually do a S&F battle properly, you really have to do it correct to come effective.
Lyfza- Your best bar was the chandalier line vs Chyeah- I liked these 2 bars the best from you but they were nothing special either. mixed with GD Folk n Ginsu whenever I'm stroking the pencil and simulateously finger fuck a virgin with the Vulcan symbol I'm hot, I've could give Satan lectures, I've broken every Akashic record go in a booth, say my confession, then pay a reverend to kill Mason Betha Vote-Chyeah |
03-10-2014, 09:40 PM | #12 |
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the only good concept was the walter white end bar from chyea the rest was garbage... gambles similies and grammar made his verse really hard to read tbh and the absence of swag and flow from both made this pretty bad except for the walter white at the end and maybe the vulcan finger fucking had promise.
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04-06-2014, 08:01 AM | #13 |
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Chyea had the better verse, finger fucking could've been waaaaay sicker but ok, some of the lines come cross bland and needs more swag, gamble didn't have much quotable content, felt like just rhymes, wasnt a fan
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Seems like both of you guys went easy on each other, but in hopes of consistency and technical matter I think C.G had a bit more firepower at his end.
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@Chyeahhh Guevara, vote on two battles and I'll give you this win.
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Im on it
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