01-17-2018, 01:46 PM | #1 |
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Seeking Salvation
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01-17-2018, 06:06 PM | #2 |
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yo like your a good writer ...but like your safe, you dont express your soul its just like painting with no ''Pain'' in the Ting
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01-17-2018, 06:26 PM | #3 |
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Thank you for the read, feed and observation. I will work on providing more depth.
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01-17-2018, 10:28 PM | #4 |
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ill give this a proper feed tomorrow
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01-17-2018, 10:55 PM | #5 |
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That I would appreciate, my dude. Good lookin out.
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01-18-2018, 01:26 PM | #6 |
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My bad
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01-24-2018, 03:34 PM | #7 |
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It started a bit slower at first but you definitely picked it up once you start reading it. Nice topical piece I used to do topical tournies a lot. Solid flow and some ok multis. But nice imagery and approach to this. Stay grinding
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