Seeking Salvation

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-17-2018, 01:46 PM

.........

brokenhal0 · 01-17-2018, 06:06 PM

yo like your a good writer ...but like your safe, you dont express your soul its just like painting with no ''Pain'' in the Ting

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-17-2018, 06:26 PM

Thank you for the read, feed and observation. I will work on providing more depth.

Inno · 01-17-2018, 10:28 PM

ill give this a proper feed tomorrow

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-17-2018, 10:55 PM

That I would appreciate, my dude. Good lookin out.

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-18-2018, 01:26 PM

My bad

Elemental P · 01-24-2018, 03:34 PM

It started a bit slower at first but you definitely picked it up once you start reading it. Nice topical piece I used to do topical tournies a lot. Solid flow and some ok multis. But nice imagery and approach to this. Stay grinding

01-17-2018, 01:46 PM	#1
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	Seeking Salvation ......... Last edited by ACTIVATE SELF; 12-08-2020 at 12:41 AM.

01-17-2018, 06:06 PM	#2
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 492 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 455117	yo like your a good writer ...but like your safe, you dont express your soul its just like painting with no ''Pain'' in the Ting

01-17-2018, 06:26 PM	#3
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	Thank you for the read, feed and observation. I will work on providing more depth.

01-17-2018, 10:28 PM	#4
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	ill give this a proper feed tomorrow

01-17-2018, 10:55 PM	#5
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	That I would appreciate, my dude. Good lookin out.

01-18-2018, 01:26 PM	#6
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	My bad

01-24-2018, 03:34 PM	#7
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507453	It started a bit slower at first but you definitely picked it up once you start reading it. Nice topical piece I used to do topical tournies a lot. Solid flow and some ok multis. But nice imagery and approach to this. Stay grinding