ROUND 1 - God of War/Alvin Karpis vs. Shogun Dinero/Lotto Smirk - GOW/KARP WIN

[PancakeBrah]

Due Date: Monday, 8/26, Midnight.
Line Limit: 16 Mininum/24 Max.
Extensions by Request

@God Of War
@Alvin Karpis
@Shogun Dinero
@Lotto Smirk

[God Of War]

check

[Alvin Karpis]

yea we're here

[Sho Money EMG]

Damn, check

[Sho Money EMG]

Sent to pancake.

[God Of War]

yall mind if we get a ext? havent heard from karp in a week

[PancakeBrah]

I have Dinero/Smirks verse.

If they don't respond with a no the extensions granted.

[Alvin Karpis]

Sent 18 to cake

[PancakeBrah]

GoW/Karpis
Listen bitch what I spits legit mixed w/ some of the sickest shit
I’m a murda Sho & called homey to come back just to witness it
Gambles known to create aliases for votes which is sad and likely
There are 54 members online right now & I bet 54% match his IP
What’s up with ya beef w/ Anthony? It’s time to act grown
You don’t smash hoes, the only thing you tapped was bags phone
One punch will merk smirk, and I’ll do a quick bid
I split lids, shit I’ll hit Lotto and brag about it faster than Vic did
Gam ya pics are sick kid, when it comes to pussy he aint gettin none
His boss won’t even give gamma rays cuz it looks like he got hit with some
you aint an old time gangster, that talk'll leave u dead dude
i mean anytime we see a suicide door, we hope its leading to your bedroom
uve always let ur parents down, they know ther son is useless
cuz anytime his dad bet on lotto, his whole family'd end up losing
see we're off the top, didnt need to write shit
anyone seen about to gamble on lotto, is getting ready to ride dick
you aint from the hood, strikta left u shook son
its funny ur going to die from pills, when we wished ur mom wouldve took one

[PancakeBrah]

Dinero/Smirk
Gods just a santa claus for grown ups so being fake is in his nature
& U should already know ppl are more likely the winners when you have the lotto in your favor
Two dorks, one pays for Internet boarding cuz the stress he feels
Alvin's a nerdy fuck... So dont act surprised when he ends up proving its a fact god was never real
Just weren't meant to work together, so I tell ya these games are over
I'd rather not watch these idiots blow eachother - Alvin's like the vinegar to gods baking soda
Ur own partner put u on blast al.. when he merked u to prove that ur queer
Watch me turn these two against each other without intention of setting up musical chairs
Like this, they both call each other faggots but really their lovers plan...
Is to fuck eachother, its clear that Kars known to ride across the country, man
It's fucking bad, & gow already told us about this herbos demeanor
How Alvin's really a whiteboy and till this day hasn't stopped searching for Peter
Ur endangering urself gow, trust me when i say not to b reppin w/ this fag
Alvin already had a ill nigga serve him - that makes u like a first baseman, how ur catching what he had
Alvin can never relax,in fact its as if he stay twitching an starving
Cuz the only time u see Carmelo an Felton game in general is when watchin the knicks at the garden
While u tryna defend me im cutting ankles like Hot Sauce
Gods a fabrication.. & honestly thats war zone problem as soon as he threw that fake punch an got caught

[Geno]

gamble/smirk just didnt have a chance.

verse wasnt bad. but gow karpis connection was way too strong and hit real heavy. super consistent

v-gow/karp

[Sho Money EMG]

Goddamn u guys r beast bro lol. Btw lotto was a no show fellas that was all me lmao

[StarFaggot]

Good job showing up though. I may vote idk who won yet.

[KwaL!ty]

Listen bitch what I spits legit mixed w/ some of the sickest shit
I’m a murda Sho & called homey to come back just to witness it
Gambles known to create aliases for votes which is sad and likely
There are 54 members online right now & I bet 54% match his IP
What’s up with ya beef w/ Anthony? It’s time to act grown
You don’t smash hoes, the only thing you tapped was bags phone
One punch will merk smirk, and I’ll do a quick bid
I split lids, shit I’ll hit Lotto and brag about it faster than Vic did
you aint from the hood, strikta left u shook son
its funny ur going to die from pills, when we wished ur mom wouldve took one

vs

[Dominate]

What’s up with ya beef w/ Anthony? It’s time to act grown
You don’t smash hoes, the only thing you tapped was bags phone
One punch will merk smirk, and I’ll do a quick bid
I split lids, shit I’ll hit Lotto and brag about it faster than Vic did
Gam ya pics are sick kid, when it comes to pussy he aint gettin none
His boss won’t even give gamma rays cuz it looks like he got hit with some
you aint from the hood, strikta left u shook son
its funny ur going to die from pills, when we wished ur mom wouldve took one

way too many lotto nameplays... otherwise cool... gamma rays was lotb, bags phone was funny as well. Other two I quoted were OK


vs


ehhh honestly there was nothing I could quote that was on the same level as what I quoted from AK/GOW, but having said that I didn't think any of your bars were wack... you came really creative and I give points for that, but at the end of the day none of the punches really hit all that hard... I think maybe you need to be more concise and make the punch cleaner/more direct... but do you... not a bad verse at all but just not up to what AK/GOW brought


v/ GOW & AK

[Allen Knight]

Opener
IP
Suicide doors
Gamble on lotto
Closer

Vs

Opener

V/ak n gow, this wasnt really close, i thought the ip bar was flames the whole verse was solid.
Gamble verse wasnt horrible or anything it jus wasnt on ak an gow level here an he didnt have a
Partner.

[Sho Money EMG]

Thanks guys appreciate the votes, nice work @ Karpis & gow

[Maximus]

Opener
IP
Gamma Rays
Bags fone
vs
opener
.
.
Not close at all, gow/karpis took this by a landslide. Props to gamble tho, his partner didnt sho up and he just did everything himself, i thought ur opener was really cool but other than that i was feeling much of ur concepts and wording, keep at it tho.
V/gowkarp

[ill nik-A]

Opener for karpis/gow was super played but then it picked up heavy, opponents don't have much tbh, a lot of wording issues throughout

Vote karpgow