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Old 08-06-2018, 11:22 AM   #1
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Default LIGHTNING ROUND: BodySnatcher (4-3) vs. Chyeahhh!!! (4-3) - BODY WINS

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Old 08-06-2018, 05:06 PM   #2
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Old 08-06-2018, 05:34 PM   #3
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My bad not sure if I tagged you but hey the thread is up.
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Old 08-06-2018, 06:12 PM   #4
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I think I see what Chyeaah did here, came off a bit corny imo..

Thought Body's was more enjoyable.

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Old 08-06-2018, 08:14 PM   #6
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I see what u were trying chy, just don't enough connecting it back to the gum play.

Body this shit too simple imo but it was enough here

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The concept was there, fell flat with the execution and it seem like the rhyme is a tad off a lil or I could be tripping. Ok at best tho

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This was coo here, chapo/wall tie in was nice....some might say chapo lines are played, but you kept it simple and it was a hit for me


Props to both here, I got BS

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Old 08-06-2018, 08:58 PM   #8
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Both had dope punches ngl. Chyeahs Punch was just so unique and well done that I loved it lol. Body had a good ass line but what it came down to for me was

Dope New never before seen material vs. a dope pipe your girl bar


So I say chyeah edges it this time


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Old 08-06-2018, 09:26 PM   #9
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Yeah I think Chyeahhh came with something unique and original, it was cool...bodysnatcher's was cool too but kind of bland imo.

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BS was way too simple and an old concept.

Chyeah was disgusting and graphic. Creative though even if it’s not tight.

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Body your execution was really good here. The punch was worded well and set up well. Very clean punch. I think the critique is the concept is a bit dated and the flip wasn’t very complex

Chyeahhh your creativity is off the charts. The bar was essentially a triple entendre with bubbles playing off the posieden underwater theme, the blowing bubbles chewing gum thing, and a cut bubbling up from a stab wound theme. I’ve never seen that since I’ve been here and I’m pretty impressed. The critique though is the wording wasn’t clean and the execution was average at best. I think it really held back what coulda been a crazy line.

Man his one is really tough to judge. i think Body clearly has the better execution and Chyeahhh clearly has the better concept. I think Chyeahhh was really ambitious with his punch but I think it paid off here. I’m pretty impressed that you were able to incorporate three themes in the punch. I narrowly edged this one to Chyeahhh

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Chyeah wasn’t feeling at all lol

Like it’s intricate I guess but just odd

Body wasn’t great but enjoyed it more
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Old 08-07-2018, 12:42 AM   #14
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Giving this until 0500 for more votes or else it’s a draw lol.
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I dunno... didn’t get the gum tissue bit AT ALL tbh, maybe I’m missing something there? not afraid to say I think I’m missing something. Body’s was pretty straight forward and to the point and cleanly done

I’m going with Body slightly
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Tbh I wasn’t feeling Chyeahs. Just didn’t have that aggressive angle. Body’s was cool was more a direct hit


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