08-06-2018, 11:22 AM | #1 |
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LIGHTNING ROUND: BodySnatcher (4-3) vs. Chyeahhh!!! (4-3) - BODY WINS
LIGHTNING ROUND!!!
- Battle is set now! - Punches Due ASAP! - Voting will end tonight - Battles will be closed tonight SAME 1-2 PUNCH RULES APPLY! @BodySnatcher @Chyeahhh!!! |
08-06-2018, 05:06 PM | #2 |
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trouble's on the horizon, fucka, I'm Poseidon!
get suttin sharp stuck in you till gum tissue blows bubbles from the Trident
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08-06-2018, 05:34 PM | #3 |
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My bad not sure if I tagged you but hey the thread is up.
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08-06-2018, 06:12 PM | #4 |
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Shots left 'em wetter than his bitch, I made water at the gate funnel
Cuz I was digging out the walls...now her hole is deeper than Chapo's escape tunnel |
08-06-2018, 07:22 PM | #5 |
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I think I see what Chyeaah did here, came off a bit corny imo..
Thought Body's was more enjoyable. v/ body |
08-06-2018, 08:14 PM | #6 |
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I see what u were trying chy, just don't enough connecting it back to the gum play.
Body this shit too simple imo but it was enough here BS |
08-06-2018, 08:57 PM | #7 |
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trouble's on the horizon, fucka, I'm Poseidon!
get suttin sharp stuck in you till gum tissue blows bubbles from the Trident The concept was there, fell flat with the execution and it seem like the rhyme is a tad off a lil or I could be tripping. Ok at best tho ---------- Shots left 'em wetter than his bitch, I made water at the gate funnel Cuz I was digging out the walls...now her hole is deeper than Chapo's escape tunnel This was coo here, chapo/wall tie in was nice....some might say chapo lines are played, but you kept it simple and it was a hit for me Props to both here, I got BS V-BS
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08-06-2018, 08:58 PM | #8 |
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Both had dope punches ngl. Chyeahs Punch was just so unique and well done that I loved it lol. Body had a good ass line but what it came down to for me was
Dope New never before seen material vs. a dope pipe your girl bar So I say chyeah edges it this time Vote Chyeah |
08-06-2018, 09:26 PM | #9 |
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4-4 TIE
Needs more votes. @Aero @Plot @Witty @Knucklehead @Jabari Black @Flow @Diablo @Barcotic @Diode @veritas @Fart @MMLP @Alvin Karpis @Swerve @Hush @Cred @Ryno @Blue Bayou Last edited by For Battling; 08-06-2018 at 10:49 PM. |
08-06-2018, 09:40 PM | #10 |
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Yeah I think Chyeahhh came with something unique and original, it was cool...bodysnatcher's was cool too but kind of bland imo.
Vote Chyeahhh
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08-06-2018, 09:40 PM | #11 |
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BS was way too simple and an old concept.
Chyeah was disgusting and graphic. Creative though even if it’s not tight. Mvgt Chyeah
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08-06-2018, 10:26 PM | #12 |
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Body your execution was really good here. The punch was worded well and set up well. Very clean punch. I think the critique is the concept is a bit dated and the flip wasn’t very complex
Chyeahhh your creativity is off the charts. The bar was essentially a triple entendre with bubbles playing off the posieden underwater theme, the blowing bubbles chewing gum thing, and a cut bubbling up from a stab wound theme. I’ve never seen that since I’ve been here and I’m pretty impressed. The critique though is the wording wasn’t clean and the execution was average at best. I think it really held back what coulda been a crazy line. Man his one is really tough to judge. i think Body clearly has the better execution and Chyeahhh clearly has the better concept. I think Chyeahhh was really ambitious with his punch but I think it paid off here. I’m pretty impressed that you were able to incorporate three themes in the punch. I narrowly edged this one to Chyeahhh Mvgt Chyeahhh |
08-06-2018, 10:34 PM | #13 |
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Chyeah wasn’t feeling at all lol
Like it’s intricate I guess but just odd Body wasn’t great but enjoyed it more |
08-07-2018, 12:42 AM | #14 |
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Giving this until 0500 for more votes or else it’s a draw lol.
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08-07-2018, 02:12 AM | #15 |
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I dunno... didn’t get the gum tissue bit AT ALL tbh, maybe I’m missing something there? not afraid to say I think I’m missing something. Body’s was pretty straight forward and to the point and cleanly done
I’m going with Body slightly |
08-07-2018, 02:27 AM | #16 |
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Tbh I wasn’t feeling Chyeahs. Just didn’t have that aggressive angle. Body’s was cool was more a direct hit
V/Body |
08-07-2018, 04:36 AM | #17 |
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BodySnatcher Wins 6-4
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