07-19-2015, 11:57 PM | #1 |
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iSpaz 4-3 vs Bust 3-3 {iSpaz wins}
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07-20-2015, 03:39 AM | #2 |
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Yeah
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07-20-2015, 03:02 PM | #3 |
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07-20-2015, 03:52 PM | #4 |
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Quick.
I'm better bitch. You barely beat Iamrhetoric, when my comp's higher. So you can try hard to Come Bust, but them lines won't ever be considered fire. I'm hood clown. I got the top down and the heater pop in slow mo. Doin this so long I'll hit u wit clear shots at full speed.. nd I ain't got a Go Pro. You trash now. I'll put em in the ground w/played lines it's 2 easy... ...And if i gouge the competition it's just to prove this fuck boy can't see me. Try to get at me. I got that chopper cocked back B wit mad patience. I'll have that banger go thru more Shells than truck drivers at gas stations. Ur girl mad. She only sad cause you a little small nd you suck at poon. So it's obvious that Bust premature.. we just wish you died that way too. @Bust
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07-20-2015, 06:39 PM | #5 |
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Beat Tic (barley) other 3 win were via no show
Even quicker Listen, U handle L's like a Bitch, quietly sign out but inside there's violent screamin So after losses we don't expect u to raise hell... We anticipate the Silent Treatment Then u come back, win a no show then get beat spittin ur phony stuff But quit blamin it on being lazy, I... Just cos u keep gettin urs swollen shut Damn dog how's it feel to know if everyone showed u'd be like 1-6, Or more like 0-7 cos honestly tic woulda bodied u if he actually Showed- He wanted it So why r WE battling? Fuck comparin records I don't think me n this herbs meant ta meet See faggot u should be slugging it out wit artificial... For the FUCKIN worst in the league N that yap bout smashin hoes is a massive joke, u aint never put ya Tongue on a whore, tho S'why to spaz this a Cole world, cos pussy? He ain't neva done that before, no |
07-20-2015, 07:35 PM | #6 |
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Go pro an shells vs silent treatment
I had I spaz w better punches Bust was sayin alot but nothing clever to me |
07-20-2015, 10:00 PM | #7 |
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Come bust was nice, go pro was OK, shells was OK but it wasn't really a punch directed at him more swag n flow, bust premature was OK.
Silent treatment OK, lazy I was OK but has he ever done pics n does he have a lazy eye? And its a one letter name play which is always meh. The rest of the verse was just meh like showed- he really wanted it that's just blah. Battle artificial then u put ... Like a misdirect was coming but it was strait forward n obvious. I don't get the Cole line. Might just be me tho. V. Ispaz |
07-20-2015, 11:51 PM | #8 |
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Ispaz.
Bar1-Cool thought it was a cool opener 2.5/5 Bar2-I liked it, havent heard a Go Pro line, which is weird. 3/5 Bar3-Basic as far as the w/p goes. Punch was ehhhh. 2/5 Bar4-I thought it was again a good concept, which weirdly I've only heard 3 other times, but not this type of flip. 3/5 Bar5-Ehhhhh. I get the wit you were going with, wasn't my type. 2/5 Overall-12.5/25 I liked some of your shit, I thought it was cool m8. ---------- Bust Bar1-Thought execution could've been better. It was an ehh for me 2/5 Bar2-Solid concept. 3/5 Bar3-Personal could've been executed better, the line fell apart, was expecting a haymaker. 1/5 Bar4-Cool 2.5/5 Bar5-Eh, I get it wasn't the smoothest execution again. 2/5 Overall-10.5/25 Overall-I felt if you would've executed your Tic personal and ended the closer better, you could've took the battle. I think there certain areas where your a bit too wordy mate. Need to cut down on the extra talk and filler and just start hitting, other then that you were solid. v/Spaz-I felt he was a bit more creative and connected his concepts a bit cleaner then his counterpart Bust
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07-21-2015, 03:20 AM | #9 |
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I'm better bitch. You barely beat Iamrhetoric, when my comp's higher.
So you can try hard to Come Bust, but them lines won't ever be considered fire. I'm hood clown. I got the top down and the heater pop in slow mo. Doin this so long I'll hit u wit clear shots at full speed.. nd I ain't got a Go Pro. vs U handle L's like a Bitch, quietly sign out but inside there's violent screamin So after losses we don't expect u to raise hell... We anticipate the Silent Treatment bust had some potential in for the first couple then fell off hard, ispaz had a couple hits and stayed fairly consistent through out.. more than enough to pull out the dub |
07-21-2015, 10:09 AM | #10 |
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Come bust, & Shells bar was heat
Vs Lazy I Cool quick battle. Both didnt come wit anything spectacular but dat Shells line frm spaz was heat! I fuck wit dat, lotb. & he had anothet quote which was alright. Bust, idk wat happened here. Seen u drop way better before. Vote - iSpaz |
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impressed by both i got spaz by a very slim margin, wish i could vote tie v/spaz
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07-21-2015, 12:24 PM | #12 |
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I got spaz here for consistency, some good punches mixed in with some light jabs.
Some of busts fell flat for me but the punches he landed were a lot better and creative. The tic showed he wanted being the stand out for me. It was a close battle that could fall either way and for that reason I'm going bust v/bust |
07-21-2015, 09:44 PM | #13 |
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I'm better bitch. You barely beat Iamrhetoric, when my comp's higher.
So you can try hard to Come Bust, but them lines won't ever be considered fire. -nice wp I'm hood clown. I got the top down and the heater pop in slow mo. Doin this so long I'll hit u wit clear shots at full speed.. nd I ain't got a Go Pro. -this is ok You trash now. I'll put em in the ground w/played lines it's 2 easy... ...And if i gouge the competition it's just to prove this fuck boy can't see me. -nah not hittin Try to get at me. I got that chopper cocked back B wit mad patience. I'll have that banger go thru more Shells than truck drivers at gas stations. -nice Ur girl mad. She only sad cause you a little small nd you suck at poon. So it's obvious that Bust premature.. we just wish you died that way too. - could have been worded better Vs U handle L's like a Bitch, quietly sign out but inside there's violent screamin So after losses we don't expect u to raise hell... We anticipate the Silent Treatment -set up made this ight Then u come back, win a no show then get beat spittin ur phony stuff But quit blamin it on being lazy, I... Just cos u keep gettin urs swollen shut -nice Damn dog how's it feel to know if everyone showed u'd be like 1-6, Or more like 0-7 cos honestly tic woulda bodied u if he actually Showed- He wanted it -NOPE So why r WE battling? Fuck comparin records I don't think me n this herbs meant ta meet See faggot u should be slugging it out wit artificial... For the FUCKIN worst in the league -more statement than punch N that yap bout smashin hoes is a massive joke, u aint never put ya Tongue on a whore, tho S'why to spaz this a Cole world, cos pussy? He ain't neva done that before, no -corny in a lol way. Nah on this closer though V/Spaz. Bust fizzled out after his first 2 bars. |
07-22-2015, 04:16 AM | #14 |
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I'm better bitch. You barely beat Iamrhetoric, when my comp's higher.
So you can try hard to Come Bust, but them lines won't ever be considered fire. (this souds gay at first glance I get it but presentation just sound like u takin cumshots im sorry) I'm hood clown. I got the top down and the heater pop in slow mo. Doin this so long I'll hit u wit clear shots at full speed.. nd I ain't got a Go Pro. (ok) You trash now. I'll put em in the ground w/played lines it's 2 easy... ...And if i gouge the competition it's just to prove this fuck boy can't see me. (nah) Try to get at me. I got that chopper cocked back B wit mad patience. I'll have that banger go thru more Shells than truck drivers at gas stations. (actually like this) Ur girl mad. She only sad cause you a little small nd you suck at poon. So it's obvious that Bust premature.. we just wish you died that way too. (eh not so much. seem to easy . n if seen that u should of died in the nutsack too much regardless of the np. which was easy yfeel) U handle L's like a Bitch, quietly sign out but inside there's violent screamin So after losses we don't expect u to raise hell... We anticipate the Silent Treatment (this was good after a few reads lotb axtually) Then u come back, win a no show then get beat spittin ur phony stuff But quit blamin it on being lazy, I... Just cos u keep gettin urs swollen shut (nice) Damn dog how's it feel to know if everyone showed u'd be like 1-6, Or more like 0-7 cos honestly tic woulda bodied u if he actually Showed- He wanted it (eh) So why r WE battling? Fuck comparin records I don't think me n this herbs meant ta meet See faggot u should be slugging it out wit artificial... For the FUCKIN worst in the league (ehh ok) N that yap bout smashin hoes is a massive joke, u aint never put ya Tongue on a whore, tho S'why to spaz this a Cole world, cos pussy? He ain't neva done that before, no (nahh whar is that lol) close battle both had two weird lines that I didn't like at all but both came with some stuff I got bust w/ opener that shit was lotb spaz wtf at u cane come bust n I get it combust but stilllllllllllllllllllllllll kinda gizay imho if im being 100 v/bust
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07-22-2015, 09:50 AM | #15 |
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I got bust taking this...His lines felt like it was easier to comprehend...send I wasn't feeling spam as much as the votes seem to be saying..aye to me bust took this battle
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07-22-2015, 12:09 PM | #16 |
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I'm better bitch. You barely beat Iamrhetoric, when my comp's higher. So you can try hard to Come Bust, but them lines won't ever be considered fire. I'm hood clown. I got the top down and the heater pop in slow mo. Doin this so long I'll hit u wit clear shots at full speed.. nd I ain't got a Go Pro. Try to get at me. I got that chopper cocked back B wit mad patience. I'll have that banger go thru more Shells than truck drivers at gas stations. Cool verse, definitely had some wording issues but did enough to beat your opponent... U handle L's like a Bitch, quietly sign out but inside there's violent screamin So after losses we don't expect u to raise hell... We anticipate the Silent Treatment So why r WE battling? Fuck comparin records I don't think me n this herbs meant ta meet See faggot u should be slugging it out wit artificial... For the FUCKIN worst in the league Your verse was ok... a lot of your punches didn't have much sting...That opener was pretty slick tho... vote- Spaz... Bye...
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07-22-2015, 04:27 PM | #17 |
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I'm better bitch. You barely beat Iamrhetoric, when my comp's higher.
So you can try hard to Come Bust, but them lines won't ever be considered fire. set up was weak, punch was weird...i got what u mean but came out weird(no pun intended) I'm hood clown. I got the top down and the heater pop in slow mo. Doin this so long I'll hit u wit clear shots at full speed.. nd I ain't got a Go Pro. decent You trash now. I'll put em in the ground w/played lines it's 2 easy... ...And if i gouge the competition it's just to prove this fuck boy can't see me. nah Try to get at me. I got that chopper cocked back B wit mad patience. I'll have that banger go thru more Shells than truck drivers at gas stations. fucks wit it Ur girl mad. She only sad cause you a little small nd you suck at poon. So it's obvious that Bust premature.. we just wish you died that way too. cool Beat Tic (barley) other 3 win were via no show Even quicker Listen, U handle L's like a Bitch, quietly sign out but inside there's violent screamin So after losses we don't expect u to raise hell... We anticipate the Silent Treatment cool, set up tied in Then u come back, win a no show then get beat spittin ur phony stuff But quit blamin it on being lazy, I... Just cos u keep gettin urs swollen shut nice Damn dog how's it feel to know if everyone showed u'd be like 1-6, Or more like 0-7 cos honestly tic woulda bodied u if he actually Showed- He wanted it not feelin this So why r WE battling? Fuck comparin records I don't think me n this herbs meant ta meet See faggot u should be slugging it out wit artificial... For the FUCKIN worst in the league like this N that yap bout smashin hoes is a massive joke, u aint never put ya Tongue on a whore, tho S'why to spaz this a Cole world, cos pussy? He ain't neva done that before, no liked this overall..thought this was one sided, spaz had a few ok bars but missed most for me. bust had nice concepts his set ups tied in with his punches which i feel no one is doing these days. wasnt feelin that tic personal maybe it went over my head but i got bust one siding this.. v/bust |
07-23-2015, 02:40 AM | #18 |
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IspAz had go pro and shells line which was lotb for me
Bust come ok but nothing really hit hard silent treatment was ok but wasn't enough in this battle vote goes to ispaz |
07-23-2015, 03:21 PM | #19 |
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cumbust was dope
go pro was ok gouge kinda played concept shells/gas station references are stupid played bust premature hwas good vs silent treatment was tough lazy eye was nastyyy 0-7 was weak worst in league was mild closer was wack damn bust started out dope but lost steam man... I thought he was going to take this after his 1st 2 but don't know what happened lol... nigga caught writers block after thinkin too hard bout the 1st 2 bars hahaha iSpaz w/ the edge |
07-24-2015, 10:23 AM | #20 |
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Spaz..
I'm better bitch. You barely beat Iamrhetoric, when my comp's higher. So you can try hard to Come Bust, but them lines won't ever be considered fire. decent flip.. rhyme is way off though I'm hood clown. I got the top down and the heater pop in slow mo. Doin this so long I'll hit u wit clear shots at full speed.. nd I ain't got a Go Pro. decent concept, but the diss feels indirect. More of a jab. You trash now. I'll put em in the ground w/played lines it's 2 easy... ...And if i gouge the competition it's just to prove this fuck boy can't see me. Decent. Try to get at me. I got that chopper cocked back B wit mad patience. I'll have that banger go thru more Shells than truck drivers at gas stations. not the most original flip Ur girl mad. She only sad cause you a little small nd you suck at poon. So it's obvious that Bust premature.. we just wish you died that way too. lmao @ suck at poon. Again, a pretty straightforward flip. Bust U handle L's like a Bitch, quietly sign out but inside there's violent screamin So after losses we don't expect u to raise hell... We anticipate the Silent Treatment pretty straightforward Then u come back, win a no show then get beat spittin ur phony stuff But quit blamin it on being lazy, I... Just cos u keep gettin urs swollen shut doesn't really connect.. lazy eye lines are a little played too Damn dog how's it feel to know if everyone showed u'd be like 1-6, Or more like 0-7 cos honestly tic woulda bodied u if he actually Showed- He wanted it liked the set up.. but not feelin the end result So why r WE battling? Fuck comparin records I don't think me n this herbs meant ta meet See faggot u should be slugging it out wit artificial... For the FUCKIN worst in the league I think ribbit holds that crown, lol N that yap bout smashin hoes is a massive joke, u aint never put ya Tongue on a whore, tho S'why to spaz this a Cole world, cos pussy? He ain't neva done that before, no aight I feel Spaz came with some more creativity than Bust - who had good setups and concepts but the lines were just a little too straightforward for me. Vote -- iSpaz
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