BAL: Chamber (2-1) vs. Flo Real (3-1) - Chamber Wins

[Meth]

Battle Arena League

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Wednesday,
  November 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10
• Max. = 12
• NO EXCEPTIONS

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• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will be disqualified.
• A check in IS NOTmandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Flo Real @Chamber

[Chamber]

check, goin 10.

[Flow]

Check will match

[Flow]

Chamber AKA Allen Knight

Aiyyo...
Im a vet at shooting AKs, hes like France against this ISIS thug,
But he aint eatin snails.. this chambers gettin filled wit shells n slugs..
And Ill pay whatever to have your whole family butchered....fuck the cost
Leave "chamber lain" out slain probably Accounting for all the blood hes lost

Originally Posted by orc

I only sent a 1-10 verse. You win man. Couldn't write yesterday

An you know Orca kill you in a sec, you lucky he didnt turn up flowin!
Cus C worlds away from making a splash unless the bigger fish is showin.
An this lower class bitch been bossed around for years by all his idols
Cus Chambermaid to beg before she gets to enter halls of those with real titles
The house always wins an this is his, he thinks its got me shook about
If you see me running n flushed, then i got the right hand to knock him out

[Allen Knight]

flo real aka Grandiloquent


ur slut sucks me off & she turns u down dumb quick
Grandkids neva in her mouth, while i left a whole family tree in her stomach
sprakin ur shirt w/ rugers, ur organs ravaged to grime
bullets settle in Realty, doc's couldnt fix all the property damage in time
fuck ya body armor, teflon piercing bullets buck ya quick
ur Vessel rip apart & leak a blood stream big enough to flood a ship
i got fans all over faggot, i'll leave u a hopeless mess
while niggas idolize & Gas Chamber ur gettin fuckin smoked to death
try to set me up & i got the pound in ur face bustin rounds
that Trefoil all ur plans pussy an leaves u planted in the fuckin ground






no faggot plot votes.

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Flo Real

Im a vet at shooting AKs, hes like France against this ISIS thug,
But he aint eatin snails.. this chambers gettin filled wit shells n slugs..
No on'es shot by shells, bro..only the slug
And Ill pay whatever to have your whole family butchered....fuck the cost
Leave "chamber lain" out slain probably Accounting for all the blood hes lost
Decent approach, not too hard hitting tho
An you know Orca kill you in a sec, you lucky he didnt turn up flowin!
Cus C worlds away from making a splash unless the bigger fish is showin.
Nope, don't like this, played concept, plus one letter nameplays are wack
An this lower class bitch been bossed around for years by all his idols
Cus Chambermaid to beg before she gets to enter halls of those with real titles
3 straight nameplays? This is the best of them tho
The house always wins an this is his, he thinks its got me shook about
If you see me running n flushed, then i got the right hand to knock him out
Naw, weak closer, SUPER played poker concept

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

ur slut sucks me off & she turns u down dumb quick
Grandkids neva in her mouth, while i left a whole family tree in her stomach
Decent, the rhyme itself isn't smooth, but the punch is adequate
sprakin ur shirt w/ rugers, ur organs ravaged to grime
bullets settle in Realty, doc's couldnt fix all the property damage in time
Nice gun bar..this the type of shit I like
fuck ya body armor, teflon piercing bullets buck ya quick
ur Vessel rip apart & leak a blood stream big enough to flood a ship
Decent wordplay here
i got fans all over faggot, i'll leave u a hopeless mess
while niggas idolize & Gas Chamber ur gettin fuckin smoked to death
Good self-play, soft punch tho
try to set me up & i got the pound in ur face bustin rounds
that Trefoil all ur plans pussy an leaves u planted in the fuckin ground
Good closer

Overall AK was more polished & effective than Flo, ALLEN KNIGHT.

[Junto]

Im a vet at shooting AKs, hes like France against this ISIS thug,
But he aint eatin snails.. this chambers gettin filled wit shells n slugs..
kinda off conceptually but I still thought this was nice
An you know Orca kill you in a sec, you lucky he didnt turn up flowin!
Cus C worlds away from making a splash unless the bigger fish is showin.
pretty good. Orca played but the C world / splash / fish was well-developed
An this lower class bitch been bossed around for years by all his idols
Cus Chambermaid to beg before she gets to enter halls of those with real titles
thought you coulda done more wit the chambermaid play but solid

vs.

ur slut sucks me off & she turns u down dumb quick
Grandkids neva in her mouth, while i left a whole family tree in her stomach
lmao. cadence was a little off but the punch was heat
sprakin ur shirt w/ rugers, ur organs ravaged to grime
bullets settle in Realty, doc's couldnt fix all the property damage in time
tough
fuck ya body armor, teflon piercing bullets buck ya quick
ur Vessel rip apart & leak a blood stream big enough to flood a ship
I like that

solid battle here...
Flo went a little overboard on nameplays but a couple landed nicely
Opener was my favorite bar from him... chamberlain & poker closer I wasn't feelin
Chamber had 3 that were all heavy. Maybe I pronounce trefoil wrong? didn't like that
But gas chamber was a solid concept too... overall Chamber outgunned him, nice verse

V/ Chamber

[Lotto Smirk]

An this lower class bitch been bossed around for years by all his idols
Cus Chambermaid to beg before she gets to enter halls of those with real titles

Vs

ur slut sucks me off & she turns u down dumb quick
Grandkids neva in her mouth, while i left a whole family tree in her stomach
sprakin ur shirt w/ rugers, ur organs ravaged to grime
bullets settle in Realty, doc's couldnt fix all the property damage in time
fuck ya body armor, teflon piercing bullets buck ya quick
ur Vessel rip apart & leak a blood stream big enough to flood a ship

V/ chamber

Just felt he hit harder thought flo had some cool ideas just didn't execute them decent enough.

[Fracture]

Not even close

Flo Real-- solid concepts but that awkward wording killed all momentum here. I have nothing to quote

Allen Knight-- vessel and gas chamber stood out as lines of the battle. Everything else was still better than Flo Reals best punch

Vote- Knight by 1,2 1,2 down down up circle faggot fatality

[Dope girl]

Worplay-Chamber
Closer-Chamber
Opener-Chamber
Punchlines-Chamber
both great Chamber had a better verse

Vote-Chamber

[sral]

Chamber put a clinic on him.