07-11-2018, 01:50 AM | #1 |
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quickish
Are You fronting?
Are you just gonna do nothing? I'm never intimidated. My text will leave you incinerated. I write quicker. I'm a rhyme wizard. It's about time you delivered. You don't wanna go there; Your ideas lead to nowhere. It's not supposed to be this hard to write three or four bars... ?Can I get a witness to back me up, that I am better than half these chumps. Most of what they say is nonsensical. Their lack of skill is indefensible and reprehensible. N i'm from New York but not a fan of the Yankees. The shitty rhymes you post, make me cranky. So I grab two guns and You Run! Speaking of guns, You dumb tards think you stunt hard All i see is the same ol' gun bars. I'll fuckin' Rhyme the beginning of the line like I WAS Lars. Don't make me Catch another charge. Homey i can flow for days and you can't see that far. So, I guess this just a flex piece I'm a bragger who stays relevant. The swagger is self-evident. Activate the magic potion. Rap can wait; you bastards think I'm jokin'? Slow down on the drinks, and smokin' Now look what I've done set in motion. |
07-18-2018, 02:05 AM | #2 |
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Yep...your better than me.
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07-18-2018, 01:12 PM | #3 | ||
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You said absolutely nothing of substance, bro. And I dug it. Every word. Simple; but potent. With an ample amount of undercover wit and nonchalance embedded beneath the surface.
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08-07-2018, 07:35 PM | #4 |
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Decent freewrite.
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