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chasing down a dragon
it's only
another shot at something historical my greatest fears are love and disorder becoming normal. numbing boredom. another junkie stuck in his stories, summoning glory for a tiny touch of immortality's shores, yes of course hemoglobin buzz distorting a room doesn't matter a morsel if it's not important to you morbid obsessive. core possessive, steady scorching a spoon. chasing down a dragon i've been forced to pursue lord of disenchantment, lord i'm close to an answer lonesome master. reporting in like 4am news to anyone home: drink merrily and travel alone left lane manic emotive backseat practically motionless. hand me your holster, six-shot cylindrical scope product of a middle-class addiction to dope plane tickets in coach. morningtime 2% and cinnamon toast in every nag champa was the scent of a ghost empty balloons, barnum-bailey our stoop, daily accouterment scattered paraphernalia, our table was useless crystal clear the liquid gold that faded her youth built a home on bloodlust & we buried the blueprint swear i've been addicted since a kid to consume anybody out there worth a visit or 2 it's internal, controversial, periodic recluse. not a modicum of moderation, always abuse hopscotch on our sidewalk palms are chalky and calloused settled on contentment so we call it a balance recalling pasts. holding hands we walked into mass you stood in line for crackers and i stifled a laugh now i'm right where i cast myself. finale it's over moving again i'll meet you never i'm hopeful, ever remorseful close my eyes and measure the dosage, let it overtake, enter the portal, says Lenore waging holy war like Lenin in office, federal hostage died and never slept i felt much better exhausted these are letter deposits. anthropological statement watching rain fall like constellations swallowing Jameson copy that, copycats are often mistaken there's nothing honest about it while it's anonymous, face it or don't. come to terms with what i've set into motion build your own ideal and practice letting it go dm
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Dope (pun intended). But it was. I loved the unconventional way in which you framed and wrote this tale of a heroine addict. The different angles you used. The shards of insight you provided and the glimpses into his life that you offered. It all made for a complete and we'll rounded perspective on the users obsession. I dug it. Good stuff, man. Really good.
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in every nag champa was the scent of a ghost
Not sure what this means these are letter deposits. anthropological statement watching rain fall like constellations swallowing Jameson again I'm lost accouterment I had to look this up This is good stuff dead man. I particularly liked the first 3rd of it. You write very well; even if i say it fast it flows. In some cases even better. It's good but it's not as good as hawk on a leash. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 07-03-2018 at 12:50 AM. |
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“In every nag champa was the scent of a ghost”
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tbf to him i've known it as agarbathi my whole life and wouldn't know what nag champa was if it wasn't emblazoned on some boxes.
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isn't the point. point is why the fuck does dull boy and half the fucking baked have to spoon fed him wkkinarticles when the fucking ENTIRE INTERNET IS LITERALLY RIGJT THERE ALL HE HAS TO DOIS FUCKING SEARCH
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let it overtake, enter the portal, says Lenore
waging holy war like Lenin in office, federal hostage died and never slept i felt much better exhausted ether. The muse remains similar yes?
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