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05-11-2013, 12:58 AM | #1 |
The Throne, The Crown
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AOWL Spotlight Match #2: IAmBenT (6-2) VS. dead man (3-2) [IAMBENT WINS BY NO SHOW.]
16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. (if agreed upon by both participants, you may go beyond the limit at your own risk.)
Verses are due WEDNESDAY 5/15 at 11:59 PST. Extensions are due THURSDAY 5/16 at 11:59 PST. (There is a 6 hour grace period following the end of the extension deadline. If you fail to post anything by the end of the grace period time, you will be given the no show loss.) You must vote on at least 4 other battles and post links in the Voting Thread. For every absent vote, you will be deducted ONE vote next week. Voting ends MONDAY 5/20 at 11:59 PST.(Unless otherwise it may be extended another day at the most.) You MUSTcheck in. If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league. NOTE: Swaying, excessive freeposting, voter fraud etc. are grounds for vote deductions at discretion of the moderators. Editing your verse after the grace period, after your opponent posts, or after the first vote (especially this)- as well as biting- are grounds for disqualification at discretion of the moderators. TOPIC: Your job this week is simple.... you can either use the title of the book or the image on the cover as your main idea for your piece this week. Whatever you are able to come up with. Good luck to both participants. @IamBenT @dead man Last edited by King Ra.; 05-11-2013 at 08:44 AM. |
05-11-2013, 09:32 AM | #2 |
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05-11-2013, 03:22 PM | #3 |
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05-15-2013, 10:27 PM | #4 |
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formally requesting an extension thank you
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05-17-2013, 02:53 AM | #5 | |
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"The Innumerable Caravan"
This doesn’t go through the whole instrumental, but if you spit it you will perhaps feel what I felt. Sometimes its quick sometimes Its slow, might turn it into an audio after the battle so yall know.
Written to this beat, start at 0:13 : And as you speak to Nature, whisper discreet or scream in disfavor, You see and savor each tree and leaf, sky to deepest sea glacier She is a beacon of sweet flavors in your gleeful behavior, But when Death becomes your neighbor, her sympathy is a savior The remedy and erasure of thoughts -- trapped in your last minutes Witness gasps of lapsed living, lungs collapse into cracked ribbons, Your bashed spirit escapes -- into open space from a broken face Which heavy tears from steady years of shame hold in place… That’s when Nature will teach you, her voice a vapor to reach you Take solace in this bliss before Fate takes and deletes you— Makes you an equal to rocks, clods, and sod underneath you As roots of a tree shoot , claw, prod your plot, rotting and peaceful There isn’t a sequel…but trust, you’re not headed alone To that deadened hole, cold as bones beneath letters in stone Better comfort has never been known, for you will rest with kings Your deathbed is fest-er-ing with those who died with the best of things Men blessed and ringed, with power, purpose, and high position The mighty celestials sing! This Hour’s perfect for my decision Magnificent visions of meadows glistening amidst rivers Hills all a-glitter, slithering -- dusk delivering slivers Of light, bright as the minds of the ancient sages, who throughout the ages Blazed a million pages, trying to say what you are faced with-- DEATH in all its stages, and Nature the last decorations For you and the many dead, lying underneath the steady tread Of the living who will join you when THEIR time, now ebbing, ends. Your petty friends, some will rejoice in the face of your corpse, Some will break and be sore, while others fake their support Each one, chasing his sport, illusions made to distort The blatant report that Death is clearly waiting in store Building his train in this morgue, of every make and each sort, From young babes to gray maids, hung saints to great braves Death’s slung blades scathe spades of unsaved in dismayed waves So LIVE! Knowing full well what company waits And go not, ugly with hate, into the grave, stumbling gait, Grumbling pate and in crumbling shape, mumbling “Wait!” Hoping a sudden delay will put a stop to this numbing mistake— Instead, be humbly elated, grateful and glad that you made it You drank from the chalice of life, now leave it, lovely and sated, Not hungry, deflated, but draping your final couch about you.. To dream with kings and queens, and see if now you’ve found profound truth… That all around you.. amidst the insuperable, barren land Will stand, death-gathered, the innumerable caravan…
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05-17-2013, 06:57 AM | #6 |
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IAMBENT WINS BY NO SHOW.
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