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Old 10-07-2017, 09:58 PM   #1
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Old 10-07-2017, 11:15 PM   #3
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Lol this shit hilarious

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My dad once had like 4 beers at a family reunion, and drove us home better than my mom usually drives.
Not saying being drunk doesn’t mess up you reasoning. I’m turning 20 soon so I haven’t had a drink ever.
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Old 10-07-2017, 11:18 PM   #4
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says movie not loaded, haven't seen how this normally works so idk what to do about troubleshooting, definitely interested in peeping though
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Yea worked fine for me idk hommie
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Old 10-07-2017, 11:30 PM   #6
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got it lol for some reason embedding youtube on here doesn't work on my chrome, I switched to firefox and it worked for whatever reason

watching now :P
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Wait, when was I a dick to either of you? If I was I really apologize, I have no idea what I did lol, if it was my bailing on this site a while back that wasn't anything on the site itself nor either of you, that was 100% because I was upset I had an opponent who preferred denying an extension rather than actually battling me, I have no ill will or ill feelings toward either of you and respect you both. Btw Baron best of luck in the SS! We both took risks haha, I don't think either of us ended up in the loser's bracket because we got outclassed, I thought you wrote a very solid verse for what it was it just wound up taking a hit because any emotion was traded for a pun which was clever and well written but your opponent was able to milk that and that's why he took the win imho, I don't think you got outwritten at all lol

Waaaait, when did I ever deny an extension? I literally don't think I have ever done that in my entire career battling lol, I need some links or whatever here because I literally have no clue haha

dope work gentlemen! Quite entertaining, I don't know most of the backstory behind these battlers so it's really cool getting a glimpse into NC culture through the lens of two dudes just chilling over some brews
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Wait, when was I a dick to either of you? If I was I really apologize, I have no idea what I did lol, if it was my bailing on this site a while back that wasn't anything on the site itself nor either of you, that was 100% because I was upset I had an opponent who preferred denying an extension rather than actually battling me, I have no ill will or ill feelings toward either of you and respect you both. Btw Baron best of luck in the SS! We both took risks haha, I don't think either of us ended up in the loser's bracket because we got outclassed, I thought you wrote a very solid verse for what it was it just wound up taking a hit because any emotion was traded for a pun which was clever and well written but your opponent was able to milk that and that's why he took the win imho, I don't think you got outwritten at all lol

Waaaait, when did I ever deny an extension? I literally don't think I have ever done that in my entire career battling lol, I need some links or whatever here because I literally have no clue haha

dope work gentlemen! Quite entertaining, I don't know most of the backstory behind these battlers so it's really cool getting a glimpse into NC culture through the lens of two dudes just chilling over some brews

LMAOOOOOOO

in retrospect I don't think it actually was you.. I think it was like Shoguncrosse or something hahahahahhahaa

you've just become guilty by RR association in the drunken stupor of it all
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Needed this in the first round!! Awesome shit boys. Thank you
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Subtitles are well off at times haha!
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Hahaha I feel that but I don't even remember being on a tag team with Shoguncrosse lol and I don't see how would get that name mixed up with mine it seems pretty different Shogun Baron I mean you're called Baron too so it seems like something you would remember hahaha as far as I know the only people I have tag teamed with r z stone who lives in Albany near me who I actually convinced to join the site just to do the GSL tag team topical and we wound up winning the season I have tag teamed with walking keys and he and I won the GSL season as well actually via no show in the finals vs Vlad and nemean but I don't recall ever being with Shogun for him to deny you an extension I would have had words about that because I would always rather Grant an extension than to take a free win via denial of an extension lol

It's all good either way man haha thanks for doing this mag btw @sraL and @MMLP btw expect errors in this post I was using voice recognition on my phone lol
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lol'd.
yeah, consistency is always my weak point, I was gonna ask @Ullr (or whoever) what makes a line flow in text? I'm audio, so I try to avoid 4/4 but can't always succeed.
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yeah, consistency is always my weak point, I was gonna ask @Ullr (or whoever) what makes a line flow in text? I'm audio, so I try to avoid 4/4 but can't always succeed.
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At least by my view on it flow is just how effortlessly the verse is read, how consistent the schemes are and how little the reader gets tripped up by things changing unexpectedly and just creating a bad time for the reader

For example

This line flows 'cause as time goes it's not hard to read, but a bar for me is in my arteries, it's art for me to rip apart the schemes - I shred the excess, so anything that X says is sex affects your senses intentions of dense trends of text flows bend and flex -- etc etc

I keystyled that trying to use the line itself to explain a bit, basically, for a line to flow optimally it must have the following things:

Strong prevailing rhyme scheme

line flows/time goes A A
hard to read(b)/bar for me(b)/in my arteries(B)/ art for me(b)/ rip apart the schemes(B)

the next bit is a little harder to break down because it is doing what I refer to as "cresting" because the schemes and internals interact and affect one another and the result is a more rhyme dense but more difficult to define scheme of the line, you'd have to analyze that element looking at the actual sounds I introduced for the internals but the prevailing multi here was

X says is sex/dense trends of text/(flows) bend and flex

the (flows) was added because it allows me to hop to the next scheme without needing to change the entire thing, you can preserve a multi chain in this manner, and the flows was different enough that it punctuates it as something different

so like, it might continue

I shred the excess, so anything that X says is sex affects your senses, intentions of dense trends of text flows bend and flex those tend to stress ---

hereafter you could change the scheme entirely or lock into the multi and have a section where it is just the multis with literally no filler words

flows bend and flex those tend to stress November depths coal embers drenched prose rendered wrenched --

since the way the line is written prior it locks you into that very punctuating scheme repetition you as the writer can choose to utilize that to create even more density, but be careful you're not just throwing fluff because people will not like it if you're like cat hat mat pat fat rat!!! #barz but in the line prior there is still meaning intact despite the disjointing nature of the scheme I chose, so it results in a more rapid but more punctuated section of the verse

so as an aside, this is also helping your verse in that it creates different flows for sections rather than just adhering to that one flat flow that is pretty much synonymous with basic topicals




okay so this was a longer post than expected but yeah, this is at least an intro into what flow is on a text piece at least by my crazy definition, hope this helps and if you have questions feel free, I am actually thinking of doing a video series on this stuff because fuck man we spend so much of our lives perfecting it someone should learn from it tbh, I could invite guests and stuff and we can introduce the world at large to topicals as we each see them and our special brand of methodical madness lol
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Lmao ive beaten mmlp but he beat me most recently, i jus asked if hes up for a rematch i never said he turned it down
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Lol I think you beat me in the poetry league and I got two wins in topicals if memory serves me correct. I could wrong. I don't care who I battle really. I just find moments throughout the year when I feel like writing. I'll probably get fed up of this in 2-3 weeks time. It's hyped now, probably should rematch
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