Scandalous Manuscripts (Audio)

CopyPat · 08-29-2013, 01:28 AM

https://soundcloud.com/copypat/scandelous-manuscripts

Natural · 08-29-2013, 02:03 AM

The difference between the volume of your voice and the beat were significant enough to where it made it difficult to hear if you were on or off beat....

Your voice is...listenable.

Your flow is nothing to write home about....pretty basic.

I hated the choice in beat(or what I could hear of it)....but that's my preference.

Your a better textcee in my opinion.

CopyPat · 08-29-2013, 02:39 AM

are the vocals too loud compared to the beat??? sounded ok to my on my headphones?
anyways yes im a better texter cause i do that way more, just trying to get back into actual spitting again this is only like the 3rd thing I've recorded since 2007 haha

any other pointers peeps?

Geno · 08-29-2013, 12:34 PM

I enjoyed it. Sound like u need a confidence boost in ur voice a little. Use a tad more conviction. Flow was decent enough. I could hear you over the beat just fine on my phone.. cool shit copy

Bodey · 08-29-2013, 12:59 PM

enjoyed the rhymes, enjoyed the flow. but i definitely think your delivery and voice was a little dry-- not enough emotion/emphasis on things. it almost seem like your flow was too stiff for the lyrics. like it needed more excitement. practice can only make perfect

08-29-2013, 01:28 AM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	Scandalous Manuscripts (Audio) https://soundcloud.com/copypat/scandelous-manuscripts __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

08-29-2013, 02:39 AM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	are the vocals too loud compared to the beat??? sounded ok to my on my headphones? anyways yes im a better texter cause i do that way more, just trying to get back into actual spitting again this is only like the 3rd thing I've recorded since 2007 haha any other pointers peeps? __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

08-29-2013, 12:34 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	I enjoyed it. Sound like u need a confidence boost in ur voice a little. Use a tad more conviction. Flow was decent enough. I could hear you over the beat just fine on my phone.. cool shit copy __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-29-2013, 02:03 AM	#2
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 691 Rep Power: 0	The difference between the volume of your voice and the beat were significant enough to where it made it difficult to hear if you were on or off beat.... Your voice is...listenable. Your flow is nothing to write home about....pretty basic. I hated the choice in beat(or what I could hear of it)....but that's my preference. Your a better textcee in my opinion.