01-29-2020, 11:31 PM | #1 |
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Week 3: Habitat vs Plot - HAB WINS
Week 3
You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. Records updated in rankings. DUE MONDAY, @Plot @Habitat.. *The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar.* Last edited by Saint; 02-05-2020 at 03:06 PM. |
01-30-2020, 08:52 AM | #2 |
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02-01-2020, 06:05 AM | #3 |
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02-02-2020, 12:01 PM | #4 |
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fuck a gun bar, it's the grenade launcher i'm resilient with
bury your asunder ground after i blow your body into a million bits
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02-03-2020, 08:22 AM | #5 |
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This dudes a natural disaster, he was fucking born a failure
So I'll burn Habitat to the ground, it's become a norm in Australia. |
02-03-2020, 11:39 AM | #6 |
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Habitat - I want to like your bar but asunder isn’t pronounced ass under....its undeniably pronounced as uh sun derrr
Plot - good enough flip with the personal tie in, it was enough to get the w Vote plot |
02-03-2020, 12:08 PM | #7 |
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Yeah Hab came a lot better this week, but like Zuo said it's sort of a forced wordplay, you've gotta bend the word to make it work. Plot had a relevant bar, simple and effective, a deadly combo in the right circumstances so he gets my vote
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02-03-2020, 01:23 PM | #8 |
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Vote habitat. Not his best but not seen assunder asunder wordplay from memory, albeit I'd have rather you'd done more with it, but certainly fresh to me.
Plot it's not your fault because I don't recall you being here that long competitively but tbh habitat is very overplayed against him even if you tied it in to a current event. Vote hab Also as the only English person likely to vote (I speak the language as it should be spoken, habitats works, fucking zelph)
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02-03-2020, 03:12 PM | #9 |
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I actually enjoyed both, I felt Hab had the fresher of the two (I don’t recall that being used off hand), while Plot had the current event ish but it needed that little something extra to make it pop, you know? Hab has good/harsh wording that works for him, Plot could maybe take some from that and learn from it to become stronger. It’s an aspect of his battles he maybe doesn’t possess, a killer instinct, that go for the throat shit. Allen Knight type ish. Savagery. I don’t know how better to explain it than that, but that’s what it needed.
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02-04-2020, 02:15 AM | #10 |
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damn battle of the round perhaps, i got plot mixing the current event with the nameplay. FHab was dope and creative but going with plot here
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02-04-2020, 07:55 AM | #11 |
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Pretty good battle here.
Habitat wins. |
02-04-2020, 10:43 PM | #12 |
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Habs flip was dope but I felt like his punch didn’t have that sting I was looking for. Plot came with a current event flip which honestly hit a bit harder for me. It’s close one tbh I could go either way. AMA give it to plot on this one. Good battle tho
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02-04-2020, 11:52 PM | #13 |
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Both were good, setups right thru to the punch. I liked Plot’s better tho.
Vote - Plot
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02-05-2020, 01:36 AM | #14 |
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02-05-2020, 06:02 AM | #15 |
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I liked both bars for different reasons, and I can see it going either way, but my votes for habitat. Can't really say much but thought his bar had more impact.
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02-05-2020, 07:27 AM | #16 |
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Cool read... but plot saying he’ll burn jab to the ground vs Hab saying he’ll blow plot body into a million pieces.. hab also had the cleaner wording with a cool wordplay. Felt plots wasn’t really dissing him the way he worded the punch. So
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02-05-2020, 08:03 AM | #17 |
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I've seen asunda done before but this was worded well as an attack line...works fine when said in slang and hit pretty good
Plots to me was a pretty basic nameplay and the punch itself didn't hit very hard to me I liked Habs bar better
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02-05-2020, 08:04 AM | #18 |
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Asunder isn't really pronounced like that and the flip doesn't work both ways. Also, I do find flips are less effective when they aren't really used in functional English - no one says asunder - but that's my preference. . Plots execution was kind of meh, but it didn't miss
V/plot |
02-05-2020, 09:35 AM | #19 |
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I always lean towards creativity, there is much precedent. So i gotta lean Hab here tho Plot had a solid bar.
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02-05-2020, 11:30 AM | #20 |
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Uh, it’s plot
Hab’s is forced as fuck I realize, I’m the Advil guy, but still... V/plot |
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