04-09-2019, 10:22 AM | #1 |
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LR WK 4: Joog Vs Blue Bayou - Joog wins
LIGHTNING ROUND [b]Bars due ASAP THIS CLOSES IN 24HRS VOTING WILL GO A FEW HRS LONGER @joig @Blue Bayou |
04-09-2019, 11:30 AM | #2 |
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Hi Joog,
i’m throwing a party! ppl are heading to the lake this August you can come to, if medics find smelling salts that’ll make u conscious
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smh. a few NO's for the hollandaise later we can still dip baguettes in the chat |
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04-09-2019, 02:06 PM | #4 |
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vote = blue bayou
for the imagery he hit with my clarity and directness.. though blues was simpler i think it paid off in this instance.. dope battle guys g/l |
04-09-2019, 03:38 PM | #5 |
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Weirdly enough I've seen Hollandaise done somewhat recently. Don't remember by who but I feel like Blue or Barc are the usual suspects.
Blue had a creatively worded punch and I liked the change of pace BB |
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a little on the simple side but this is clean w dope wording. almost wish it had more tho, like sutn to do w/ knocking him out in the setup.. yeah i realize itd be hard to have that + sutn about a party or w/e but u cud make it work gd punch tho Quote:
got a funny feelin this wp was originally planned for me LOL nonetheless v/joog this was dope for a 1-2
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04-09-2019, 10:02 PM | #7 |
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I have a love/hate w.the approach blue did w.his setup: I luv the sarcastic friendly tone it gave. I hate it wasn't any aggression to sell his punch completely, wldve wrk great w.the smell salt. Punch itself was a nice concept imo.
I thought joog bar is dope clean af nice punch wp etc. Idk this kid but I've been consistently liking his bars the last few weeks. Links to his material? Good battle but mvgt- joog |
04-10-2019, 12:41 AM | #8 |
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Didn't care for the smelling salts line. There's no real misdirection to sell it because the set up was weak to me, and it's not a creative concept IMO. Wording is good as usual
Joog I thought yours was creative as fuck and hit hard the way you laid it out. v/Joog Last edited by Real Spit; 04-10-2019 at 01:21 AM. |
04-12-2019, 10:20 AM | #9 |
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Thought both bars were dope.. blues bar had that dope witty ness. Clever but I liked Joog’s personal/wordplay on blues HOF shit. Got joog edging this
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04-12-2019, 12:54 PM | #10 |
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wasnt really a fan of the smelling salts line, i got joog taking this
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04-12-2019, 01:18 PM | #11 |
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Lmfao
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