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Old 06-02-2015, 01:36 AM   #1
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Old 06-02-2015, 07:05 PM   #2
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Old 06-03-2015, 04:15 PM   #3
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Old 06-03-2015, 06:34 PM   #4
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beating me? that's fiction. I seen his bars & this kid's dumb
only flip u got that works is the phone that u can't post a pic from
treat ur ho better, man, cuz u act like she's a sex slave
both me & her said 'jil let me' when referring to her fresh shave
I left that bitch bloody too...blonde on the edge of the futon
des might not ice ti, but I guarantee that he will be saying 'ooh long'
looks like pimpken is back, so please just try to be dope
cause if Kyrie ur weak shots u cavaliers lookin white as a ghost
stop that garden shit faggot, planting roses gets u no head
cuz ur five or six weeks into flowering... no Eddie the Munster grow thread
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Old 06-05-2015, 02:14 AM   #6
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Old 06-05-2015, 10:12 AM   #7
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peep my game

I'm not taking this shit lying down anymore

BRAAAAAAAAAP
bout time u stop taking it lying down. guys pound in exchange for rent
gettin that Belly Up Business so often could file chapter 11 w/o any debt
def not a threat. toss him like a nerf ball w/perfect shaped spirals
we'll see D get thrown out the window this week like the nba finals
cant get a dime yo. small dick makes girls hall quick when he pursues
believe its true. soon as he Takes Off speedos, that's the same thing females do
proven beast. runnin up on me ends w/ ur entire knee hurting
so go hard in the paint vs a warrior & its season over like Kyrie Irvings
got worm ring & many diseases. this flea infested piece of shits a whore
sex partners say "Desiccant until u put medicine on those lacerations & sores"

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Old 06-07-2015, 11:07 AM   #9
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beating me? that's fiction. I seen his bars & this kid's dumb
only flip u got that works is the phone that u can't post a pic from
cool tie in. nice wording on this
treat ur ho better, man, cuz u act like she's a sex slave
both me & her said 'jil let me' when referring to her fresh shave
concept is ok, but didn't like the flip
I left that bitch bloody too...blonde on the edge of the futon
des might not ice ti, but I guarantee that he will be saying 'ooh long'
creative concept, but doesn't hit to me as written
looks like pimpken is back, so please just try to be dope
cause if Kyrie ur weak shots u cavaliers lookin white as a ghost
cool concept bad wording
stop that garden shit faggot, planting roses gets u no head
cuz ur five or six weeks into flowering... no Eddie the Munster grow thread
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bout time u stop taking it lying down. guys pound in exchange for rent
gettin that Belly Up Business so often could file chapter 11 w/o any debt
nice concept but this is worded awkward to me. set up keeps this from being a miss
def not a threat. toss him like a nerf ball w/perfect shaped spirals
we'll see D get thrown out the window this week like the nba finals
sick. but would have liked a more related setup
cant get a dime yo. small dick makes girls hall quick when he pursues
believe its true. soon as he Takes Off speedos, that's the same thing females do
didn't like this. forced
proven beast. runnin up on me ends w/ ur entire knee hurting
so go hard in the paint vs a warrior & its season over like Kyrie Irvings
nice. but didn't really need the knee tie in, so could have worded the setup more harshly
got worm ring & many diseases. this flea infested piece of shits a whore
sex partners say "Desiccant until u put medicine on those lacerations & sores"
nah not feeling this. the idea isn't bad, but this feels forced to me
First off props to both of you, this was one of the better battles I've read this week so far. Destro started off strong with the flip phone bar, and ended well with flowering, but missed on execution of some of punches in the middle of the verse. Jilti had some nice lines 'NBA finals', 'season over', but had similar problems with some forced concepts. This badly is pretty close because both showed similar levels of creativity on concepts and quotes are even. really just comes down to who's bars you liked better. In my case that was

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Old 06-08-2015, 09:38 AM   #10
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beating me? that's fiction. I seen his bars & this kid's dumb
only flip u got that works is the phone that u can't post a pic from
nice

treat ur ho better, man, cuz u act like she's a sex slave
both me & her said 'jil let me' when referring to her fresh shave
pretty basic

I left that bitch bloody too...blonde on the edge of the futon
des might not ice ti, but I guarantee that he will be saying 'ooh long'
lmao

looks like pimpken is back, so please just try to be dope
cause if Kyrie ur weak shots u cavaliers lookin white as a ghost
hard to understand the bar..

stop that garden shit faggot, planting roses gets u no head
cuz ur five or six weeks into flowering... no Eddie the Munster grow thread
don't catch the reference but doesn't seem like that good of a bar..

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bout time u stop taking it lying down. guys pound in exchange for rent
gettin that Belly Up Business so often could file chapter 11 w/o any debt
good opener

def not a threat. toss him like a nerf ball w/perfect shaped spirals
we'll see D get thrown out the window this week like the nba finals
okay

cant get a dime yo. small dick makes girls hall quick when he pursues
believe its true. soon as he Takes Off speedos, that's the same thing females do
lol okay

proven beast. runnin up on me ends w/ ur entire knee hurting
so go hard in the paint vs a warrior & its season over like Kyrie Irvings
so many kyrie barsszzzeszsz good bar tho

got worm ring & many diseases. this flea infested piece of shits a whore
sex partners say "Desiccant until u put medicine on those lacerations & sores"
dope closer

V/ jilti

A relatively even battle w/ some even jabs and misses. Jil won it over for me w/ the closer
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beating me? that's fiction. I seen his bars & this kid's dumb
only flip u got that works is the phone that u can't post a pic from
- good personal.
treat ur ho better, man, cuz u act like she's a sex slave
both me & her said 'jil let me' when referring to her fresh shave
- used this wp on him a while back. didn't like your flip, much but was ok, I guess.

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bout time u stop taking it lying down. guys pound in exchange for rent
gettin that Belly Up Business so often could file chapter 11 w/o any debt
- this was ok.
proven beast. runnin up on me ends w/ ur entire knee hurting
so go hard in the paint vs a warrior & its season over like Kyrie Irvings
- had potential, ok as is but could have been dope.

OVERALL: Hard to decide on a winner here. Didn't see any haymakers from either, a lot of jabs and misses, tbh. However, I think Jil was just a tad bit more consistent here. Didn't like Destroyer's nba reference, Jils was better and the Munster reference to me was corny so that helped me make a decision.

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Old 06-08-2015, 10:57 AM   #12
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beating me? that's fiction. I seen his bars & this kid's dumb
only flip u got that works is the phone that u can't post a pic from
This was decent but could've been dope af.
treat ur ho better, man, cuz u act like she's a sex slave
both me & her said 'jil let me' when referring to her fresh shave
Nah.
I left that bitch bloody too...blonde on the edge of the futon
des might not ice ti, but I guarantee that he will be saying 'ooh long'
Idk what this is???
looks like pimpken is back, so please just try to be dope
cause if Kyrie ur weak shots u cavaliers lookin white as a ghost
Was this supposed to be Ky read? No.
stop that garden shit faggot, planting roses gets u no head
cuz ur five or six weeks into flowering... no Eddie the Munster grow thread
I'm not really a fan of these "no blah blah blah" lines.
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bout time u stop taking it lying down. guys pound in exchange for rent
gettin that Belly Up Business so often could file chapter 11 w/o any debt
I liked this.
def not a threat. toss him like a nerf ball w/perfect shaped spirals
we'll see D get thrown out the window this week like the nba finals
nah.
cant get a dime yo. small dick makes girls hall quick when he pursues
believe its true. soon as he Takes Off speedos, that's the same thing females do
Nah. This doesn't work for me cuz "takes off" misdirection doesn't seem like you are using the whole idea, which is takes off speedos.
proven beast. runnin up on me ends w/ ur entire knee hurting
so go hard in the paint vs a warrior & its season over like Kyrie Irvings
eh.
got worm ring & many diseases. this flea infested piece of shits a whore
sex partners say "Desiccant until u put medicine on those lacerations & sores"
This is forced. Good concept tho.
Jilti gets this. His misses weren't as bad. Des used a lot of simple / wack plays that I'm not usually used to seeing. Jilti had a few as well, but his opener was the best line of the battle and his misses weren't quite as bad.

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Old 06-08-2015, 11:55 AM   #13
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Ok so IMO, Des had the opener which was funny and effortless. Dug that. The rest of Des's verse fell off for me. There were some other bars which looked like they were worded tightly but I just didn't understand them to be honest, like the "oh long" for example.

Jilti had belly up and takes off which I fuck with. They were cool and overall I think jiltis was a better read for me even though he didn't exactly come with it either.

Overall, with an extra quotable to Jilti I've gotta lean that way.

V/Jilti.

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