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Old 02-28-2024, 01:17 PM   #1
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I’m the spark that you needed. The light through the dark of an evening
The warm calm that proceeded the storm. The guardian beacon
mark of a genius. Primitive man took me into his hands
and I delivered advancements beyond anything he imagined.
I turn cinder to ash as a wholly destructive force,
my growing compulsion scorches earth until the moment there’s nothing more
below me but soot and torched remains. I dance til I’m out of breath.
The flames of passion aroused in bed. The lit match to your powder keg.
I’m the candle you count your blessings on, and always on smoke
The passing of the torch you’ve been holding. The light your favourite authors had wrote to.
I’m a force to behold, illuminating all in my path,
A torch through the blackness. The pyromaniacs source of their madness.
I’m much more than a matchstick. I embody chaos theory.
The safety’s clearly off and you’ll get burned just playing near me.
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Old 04-16-2024, 05:53 AM   #2
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I try not to publicly comment on Lars' work but this is crazy! reads so smoothly, word association throughout was on point and layered!

I embody chaos theory (favourite phrase in this) / you'll get burned just playing near me brought the piece together. it opens up the fact the matchstick could perceived as something more to the reader. What was this for?


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Old 04-16-2024, 10:45 AM   #3
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I’d been going on this random image generator:

https://randomwordgenerator.com/picture.php

then just keying something on the journey into work to the pic
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Old 04-16-2024, 07:10 PM   #4
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I try not to publicly comment on Lars' work but this is crazy! reads so smoothly, word association throughout was on point and layered!

I embody chaos theory (favourite phrase in this) / you'll get burned just playing near me brought the piece together. it opens up the fact the matchstick could perceived as something more to the reader. What was this for?


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Old 04-17-2024, 01:13 AM   #5
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nah he’s done video mags with me before talking about things here
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